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17th January 2004, 08:29 PM
Dosto... Mein Bin Bulaye Aa gaya hooN....
Khush LabZ se shuru waat karne Jaa raha hooN Khush Na Ho Dost Vo Waqt Phir Aayega Tu Kasam Phir Todegi Mujhe Zahar Peena Yaad Aayega Jab Tu Hi na Jeene Degi To Bachane Wala Bhi kab Tak Bachayega Ek Din Aayega Tere Pyar Mein Tarasta 'sharad' Hamesha ko Doob jayega  AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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17th January 2004, 08:40 PM
Amrit Jee, welcome. I know Paras Jee will say the same. Achha laga aapka yeaha ana. Waise Khush lafhj aapko kaha mili? Meri post se aapko koi lafhj lena chahiye tha. But I am sure Paras Jee wouldn't mind the first time. Thanks. Take care.
Ho lafhj se age karti hu ek geet se. Aap toh aise na the film. Asha Jee ki awaz meh. Mera yaar rahe zinda mera Pyaar rahe zinda bewafa mujhe kehlane do "Ho jaane do sharminda Mera yaar rahe zinda mera Pyaar rahe zinda bewafa mujhe kehlane do "Ho jaane do sharminda Tu aa tu aa tu aa bhi jaa kasam nivha tu aa tu aa ke dekhti hein zindegi tera hi rashta.......  Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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18th January 2004, 12:20 AM
meri behan parastaar ke behad israar per mein yahan aa to gaya hoon, kyunke behan ki baat mein taal naheen sakta ,
magar itna zaroor kahoon ga ke please parastaar mujh se yahan aane ke liye ziayda israar na karen. mein is bazm ke shayed laiyeq naheen hoon . bas ab aayaa hoon to shimul dost ke post kiye hue poem mein se lafz yaar le kar shayr arz hai. JAB BHI MEIN YAAR PARESHAN HUAA KERTA HOON DIL KA SAB HAAL TUJHI SE TO BAYAN KERTA HOON TU MERI JAAN SE WABASTA HAI IS TAUR SE DOST JAISE ZINDA HOON MEIN AUR SAANS LIYA KERTA HOON musharrafhusain |
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18th January 2004, 12:46 AM
Nice one. Shukriya.
Jab lafhj se age karti hu. Mohd. Rafi Jee ke awaz meh. Jab jab bahar ayi aur phool muskuraye mujhe tum yaad aye mujhe tum yaad aye Jab jab bhi chaand nikla aur taare jhagmagaye mujhe tum yaad aye mujhe tum yaad aye....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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18th January 2004, 03:19 AM
Hi...Everyone...
Shimul ke kind invitation par hum yahan haazir houe hein...Asha hai ki aap logon ko mera yahan aane se koyi disturb nahin houi(joking) Koyi baat nahin... Hum ayi lafz se shourou karte hein... Ayi toum yaad moujhe Gane lagi har dharkan Khoushbou layi pavan mehka chandan... Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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18th January 2004, 03:52 AM
Dear Aman, bohot achha laga. Intezar khatam huyi. Nice one. Likhte rahna. Take care. God bless you.
Tum lafhj se age karti hu. Lata Jee ki awaz meh yeh geet. Tum se hi toh shuru hein khatam bhi tum par hogi zindegi ki kahani meri Devta....... Ghar ki jeise ghar ki yeh suraj ke haar pal kare tere ghumte sukh ho chahe dukh ho sang sang tere aise hi chalungi jhumke sada tumhara banu sahara mangu yehi mein Duwa tum se hi toh shuru hein khatam bhi tum par hogi zindegi ki kahani meri Devta....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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18th January 2004, 04:19 AM
Chalein...Devta par hi shuru kar lete hein...
Devta mana aur pooja teri tasveer ko tou na mil paye to kya karoun taqdeer ko... Amanush...  Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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18th January 2004, 04:38 AM
I am happy to see you again. Take care. God bless you.
Mein Devta lafhj se hi age karti hu. Tumhi meri mandeer tumhi meri pooja tum hi Devta ho tum hi Devta ho....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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18th January 2004, 04:52 AM
Devta bhi ,mandeer bhi,Devi bhi,to kyoun na ye poujari ye kahe ki...
Hum kiye jayeinge toumhari pooja koyi phal de ya na de hamari pooja... Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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18th January 2004, 05:04 AM
Ok, nice one. Likhte rahna. Take care. God bless you.
Tumhari lafhj se age karti hu. Tumhari nazro meh humne dekha ajab si chahat jhalak rahi hein tumhari hothon ki surkhiyo se bafa ki shabnam chhalak rahi hein Tumhari nazro meh humne dekha ajab si chahat jhalak rahi hein Humari sansho ko chooke dekho tumhari khushbo mehek rahi hein Tumhari nazro meh humne dekha ajab si chahat jhalak rahi hein....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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18th January 2004, 05:24 AM
MARGHATIS 11,000 KABRISTAANIS 5700
KABRISTAANI-- Meena, banjara ji, tanhaai, happy, Parasaxena, roopali, khushi, sanjoo, talkingeyes, piya, Banno, Maikash, ghayalparwana, arnab, Kshitiz, Sahil Khan, amanush, akant MARGHATI— sakhi, talib, manoj kureel, arvindsony, bhadsha-E-gham bindiya, ambar, shakeel shaikh, mushi bhai, manish bansal, madh-e-ghum, shimul, mast, sofia saaed, Sharabi, amrit sharad, romance, kuch bandishein hain yahan sher ya poem post karne kee… Maximum length 12 lines (your own or borrowed). Celebrating zindagi, pyaar, dosti, ma-baap, vagairah vagairah. No no words, maut, chita, shamshaan, vagairah vagairah. Must use one of the words from last post, just any. We will have two teams…1 Marghati 2 Kabristaani (when you post a sher, if you are not already in a team, Sakhi will assign you a team, and occasionally we will post points as well as team members’ names). MARGHATIS 11,000 KABRISTAANIS 5700 Hum aaj Amanush jee, aur Amrit Sharad jee ka apne iss red carpet se swagat karte hain...aap aaye janaab hamein bahut hee achha laga...lekin plz rules par ek baar nazar farmaayein...shukriya...aur Amanush hum ummiid karte hain...ki kabristaaniyon ko ek achha team member mil gaya hai...jo jaldi jaldi apni team ko aage badhayega...good luck... Mushi Bhayyia...itne mayoos mat ho jayein aap...yadi hum aapko tang kar rahe hain...tau plz...rehne dijiey hum aayinda nahin kaheinge...waise aap is bazm mein aane ke kabil hai...aur ache se kaabil hain...raunak badh jayeigi hamari is bazm kee...aur kya...? Jab jee chahe apna ghar samajh kar aaya jaya kijiey...aise tau theek hai na...? koyi zabardasti nahin...ok? Good!Tumhari nazro meh humne dekha ajab si chahat jhalak rahi hein tumhari hothon ki surkhiyo se bafa ki shabnam chhalak rahi hein Tumhari nazro meh humne dekha ajab si chahat jhalak rahi hein Humari sansho ko chooke dekho tumhari khushbo mehek rahi hein Tumhari nazro meh humne dekha ajab si chahat jhalak rahi hein....... Shimul kee iss post se plz aage badhaayein.... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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18th January 2004, 02:29 PM
Nazar nazar se milaakar sharaab peete hain
ham unko paas bitThaakar sharaab peete hain isee liye to andheraa hai maikade mein bahut yahaan gharon ko jalaakar sharaab peete hain hamen tumhaare sivaa kuchch nazar naheen aataa tumhen nazar mein sajaakar sharaab peete hain Tasneem Farooqui Dear Paras Adaab, Apka hukm milne ke baad is thread mein pehli martabaa post kiya agar koi ghalati ho gayi ho to muaaf farmaa den. regards khan |
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18th January 2004, 03:56 PM
Swaagat ke liye bahout hi aabhari hein hum...Apne team ko saat asmaanon se bhi oupar pahounchane ki koshish kareinge...
Honthon se shuru karte hein... Honthon se chou lo toum mera geet amar kardo banjaao meet mere mere preet amar kardo... Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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18th January 2004, 04:02 PM
ooops,sorry, Khan ji ke ghazal hamari nazar main nahin ayi thi... bahout acha likha aap ne ...to andhere par kouch likh dete hein...
Andhere main jo baithe hein, nazar ounpar bhi kouch dalo Are o,Roshni walo... Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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18th January 2004, 04:45 PM
Wah bohot khub. Khan Jee, bohot achha laga.
Aman, good to see you again. It's ok, sometimes it happens like that. Thanks. Take care. God bless you all. Roshni lafhj se age karti hu. Talat Mehmood Jee ke awaz meh. Roshni banke fizao meh bikharna hoga phir se doobe hue taaro ko ubhar na hoga roshni banke....... Meri armaan vhari mehfil ko sajane ke liye zindegi tujhko dulhan banke savharna hoga roshni banke....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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18th January 2004, 07:01 PM
Dera Parastaar Sahiba Adaab,
Aapka ye thread behad pasand aaya, maazrat ke saath arz karna chahoonga ki is janib tavajjo den ki donon teamen baraabar honi chaiyen, ek team barhi hai aur ek chchoti. Shimul Saahiba agar Judge hain to un ko kisi team mein nahin hona chahiye, balki nutral hona chahiye, ummid hai ki aap is taraf ghor farmayengi. Shimul ke aakhri sher se zindagi lafz lekar age barhta hoon...... Zindagi jab bhi teri bazm mein laati hai hamen ye zamin chaand se behtar nazar aati hai hamen surkh phoolon se mahak uthti hain dil ki raahen din dhale yuuN teri aavaaz bulaati hai hamen yaad teri kabhi dastak, kabhi sarghoshi se raat ke pichchle pahar roz jagaati hai hamen "Shahryaar" regards Sahil Khan |
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18th January 2004, 07:08 PM
Dear Sahil Jee, aap first page parkar shayad yeh kehrahe hein lekin meine mana kardee thi. So now I am not Judge anymore.
Aapka post bohot khub tha, haan meine suna hein. Shukriya. Ate rahiyega. Aapka yeaha ana achha laga. Mein bhi Zindegi lafhj se ek geet jo Kishore Kumar Jee ke awaz meh hein likhrahi hu. Zindegi ki yehi reet hein haar ke baadhi jeet hein Zindegi ki yehi reet hein haar ke baadhi jeet hein thore ansoo hein thori hashi aaj gum hein toh kal hein khushi Zindegi ki yehi reet hein haar ke baadhi jeet hein....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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18th January 2004, 07:27 PM
Dear shimul......ye kyaa hai ab kisse suuru kare ye hii samjh mai nahii aa raha hai....
 Chaloo khushii parr hii kuch baat bannate hai.... Khushii milii harr mod parr mujhe Manzil ka nazaar fakaT duur se dikhane ko Kitnna yuu hii chalta rahuu aur akele Pal pal sansen jaa rahii hai kaza kai aane ko....SaNjj muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame.. ..... |
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18th January 2004, 07:27 PM
Khushi lafz lekar aage barh raha hoon.........
Khush hoon ki meraa husn-e-talab kaam to aayaa Khaalee hi sahi meri taraf jaam to aayaa kaafi hai mere dil ki tasalli ko yahi baat aap aa na sake aap kaa paighaam to aayaa Shakeel Badayuni regards Sahil Khan |
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18th January 2004, 07:37 PM
Dear Sanjoo, wah bohot khub likhha hein tumne. Likhte rahna. Thanks. Khush raho salamat raho yehi duwa hein aur rahegi.
Dear Ismail Jee, wah khub kalam chunha hein aapne. Shukriya. Likhte rahiyega. Dear Sahil Jee, aap bhi agaye hein. Bohot achha laga. Likhte rahiyega. Shukriya. I am so very much confuse. Page par dekhti hu toh mujhe Sanjoo aur Ismail Jee nazar ate hein lekin jab reply karne jaati hu toh Sahil Jee aur Sanjoo nazar ate hein. Please forgive me if I am seeing or dreaming!! Thanks. God bless you all. Mein Mera lafhj se age karti hu. Lata Jee ki awaz meh. Tu jaha jaha chalega mera saaya sath hoga Tu jaha jaha chalega mera saaya sath hoga Mera saaya mera saaya mera saaya mera saaya....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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18th January 2004, 08:00 PM
Hi...Doston...
Hum mera shabd se aage bada rahe hein... Mera pyar wo hai ke, mar kar bhi toum ko jooda apne bahon se hone na degi... Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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18th January 2004, 08:08 PM
Aman, Mohd. Rafi Jee ka gaya hua gana bohot pasand aya. Likhte rahna. Take care. God bless you.
Mein Pyaar lafhj se age karti hu. Mohd. Rafi Jee & Lata Jee. Mujhe kitna Pyaar hein tumse aapne hi dilse poocho tum jishe dil diya hein woh tum ho meri zindegi tumhari hein....... Chahat ne teri mujhko kuch ish tarha se ghera deen ko hein tere chharche raato ko khwab tera tum ho jaaha wohi par rahta hein dil bhi mera baas ek khayal tera keya shaam keya savera....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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18th January 2004, 08:58 PM
Lovely song...I like it
Chalo hum Meri shabd ka prayog karte hein Meri chahat rahegi hamesha jawan jism dhalne se jasbaat dhalti nahin Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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18th January 2004, 10:16 PM
Nice one. Keep up the good work.
Sabko ek baat kehna chahungi. I am really very sorry that I have confused all of you here about Amanush. Today he made it clear for me, my misstake. I am sorry, please do except my apology. Mujhe bhi Meri lafhj se hi age karni hein. Ek gazal. Awara hein galiyo meh Mein aur meri tanhai jaaye toh kaha jaaye jaaye toh kaha jaaye haar more pe rushwayi....... mein aur meri tanhai mein aur meri tanhai Yeh phool se chehre hein hashte hue guldaste hein koi bhi nehi aapna begane sab rashte rahe bhi tamashayi rahe bhi tamashayi mein aur meri tanhai mein aur meri tanhai....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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19th January 2004, 03:10 AM
MARGHATIS 16,000 KABRISTAANIS 6300
KABRISTAANI-- Meena, banjara ji, tanhaai, happy, Parasaxena, roopali, khushi, sanjoo, talkingeyes, piya, Banno, Maikash, ghayalparwana, arnab, Kshitiz, Sahil Khan, amanush, akant MARGHATI— sakhi, talib, manoj kureel, arvindsony, bhadsha-E-gham bindiya, ambar, shakeel shaikh, mushi bhai, manish bansal, madh-e-ghum, shimul, mast, sofia saaed, Sharabi, amrit sharad, romance, kuch bandishein hain yahan sher ya poem post karne kee… Maximum length 12 lines (your own or borrowed). Celebrating zindagi, pyaar, dosti, ma-baap, vagairah vagairah. No no words, maut, chita, shamshaan, vagairah vagairah. Must use one of the words from last post, just any. We will have two teams…1 Marghati 2 Kabristaani (when you post a sher, if you are not already in a team, Sakhi will assign you a team, and occasionally we will post points as well as team members’ names). MARGHATIS 11,000 KABRISTAANIS 5700 Khan bhaiyya... hum aapka apne crimson carpet se swagat karte hain...mujhe bahut achha laga aapka yahan aana...yahan aap apne ya boroowed sher likh sakte hain...haan ek jo yellow munh dalnaa aap bhuul gaye hain uske liye hamne -100 apki team ke kar diye hain...but ab Amanush aur aap apni team (Kabristaanion) ko bulandiyon tak le jaayeinge...I am sure aapki Captaan, Madaame Meena ji aapko yahan dekh kar phooli nahin sama rahin hongi... aur haan waise Shimul kee jagah main us kursi par baith gayi hoon...aur maine apni membership se resign bhi kar diya tha...just to make sure there is no conflict of interest...LOL...haan kabhi kabhi under the table log 'paras' pe koyi sher likh dein tau mein yellow munh kee namajoodagi, nazar andaaz kar sakti hoon...shhhh kisi se kahiega nahin...ok...aapas kee baat hai...aur teams barabar hoti raheingi jab log join karte raheinge...aap befikr ho kar dhada dhadh sher pe sher kehte rahein...nahin tau Marghation ka jeetna laajmi hai... waise...aapke post kiye kalaam bahut khoob hainAwara hein galiyo meh Mein aur meri tanhai jaaye toh kaha jaaye jaaye toh kaha jaaye haar more pe rushwayi....... mein aur meri tanhai mein aur meri tanhai Yeh phool se chehre hein hashte hue guldaste hein koi bhi nehi aapna begane sab rashte rahe bhi tamashayi rahe bhi tamashayi mein aur meri tanhai mein aur meri tanhai....... Shimul kee is post se continue kijiey plz.... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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19th January 2004, 03:46 AM
Hi everybody...
Hum raaste shabd se aage bada rahe hein... Raaste ka patthar kismat ne moujhe bana diya jo raaste se gouzre,ek thokar laga diya... Kitne ghav lage hein ye mat poucho mere dil se kitne thokar khaye pahouche na ab tak manzil pe... Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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19th January 2004, 04:06 AM
Nice song. Likhte rahna. Take care. God bless you all.
Mere lafhj se age karti hu ek geet se. Mere mehboob qayamat hogi aaj ruswa teri galiyo meh mohabbat hogi meri nazre toh gila karti hein tere dil ko bhi sanam tujhse shikayat hogi mere mehbooh....... Teri gali mein ata sanam nagma bafa ka gata sanam tujhse suna na jaata sanam....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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19th January 2004, 02:26 PM
Dear Paras Adaab,
Crimson Carpet se nawaazne ka bahut bahut shukriya jo aapne naacheez ko is qaabil samjha, silsile ko aage barhata hoon.... Mohabbat ka junoon baaqi nahin hai musalmaanon mein Khoon baaqi nahin hai ragon mein lahoo baaqi nahin hai wo dil, wo aawaaz baaqi nahin hai namaaz-o-rozaa-o-qurbaani-o-haj ye sab baaqi hai too baaqi nahin hai Dr. Sir Allama Muhammad "Iqbal" regards Sahil Khan |
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19th January 2004, 04:58 PM
Ab aap yeaha agaye hein toh bohot achhe achhe shayar ka kalam hume naseeb hogi. Great poet. Shukriya aapka.
Nahin lafhj se age karti hu. Tujhse naraz nahin zindegi hairan hu mein ho hairan hu mein....... tere masum sawalo se pareshan hu mein ho pareshan hu mein....... Tujhse naraz nahin zindegi hairan hu mein ho hairan hu mein....... Jeene ke liye socha hi nahin dard samhal ne honge muskuraye toh muskurane ke karz utar ne honge muskurayu toh lagta hein jeise hothon pe karz rakhha hein tujhse naraz nahin zindegi hairan hu mein....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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19th January 2004, 08:24 PM
SHimuL ..
muskuraHaT .. Lafz Lete Hue MuskuRa ke maiN tere DaRD CHupa Leta HuN DaRmiyaN paLkoN meRi asHQ CHupa Leta HuN YaaD aate Ho Tum too DHaDkaNeiN BaDH jati HaiN Dastak E DiL ko maiN awaaz BaNa Leta HuN  |
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19th January 2004, 08:31 PM
Thanks Kshitiz. Really a beautiful one. See you are good. Aise hi likhte rahna. God bless you.
Mein dil lafhj se age karti hu. Lata Jee ki awaz meh. Dil cheez kiya hein aap meri jaan lijiye baas ek baar mera kaha man lijiye Dil cheez kiya hein aap meri jaan lijiye Ish anjuman meh aapko ana hein baar baar deewaro darko gaur se pehchaan lijiye Dil cheez kiya hein aap meri jaan lijiye....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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19th January 2004, 11:36 PM
Dil...
Dil torne wale toujhe dil dhound raha hai Awaaz de ,tou kaun si nagri main choupa hai... Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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19th January 2004, 11:42 PM
Nice one. Likhte rahna.
Aawaaz lafhj se age karti hu. Lata Jee ki awaz meh. Aawaaz deke hume tum bulao mohabbat meh itna na humko satao aawaaz deke hume tum bulao....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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19th January 2004, 11:50 PM
Tum...
Toum poukar lo ,toumhara intazaar hai Honth pe liye houe dil ki baat hum jaagte raheinge aur kitne raat hum Raat ye karaar ki bekaraar hai... Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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20th January 2004, 12:03 AM
Beautiful. Likhte rahna. Tum lafhj se hi age karti hu.
HUmraaz film ka ek geet. Tum agar sath dene ka wada karo mein yuhi maste nagmeh lutata rahu tum mujhe dekhkar muskurati raho mein tumhe dekhkar geet gaata rahu tum agar sath dene ka wada karo....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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20th January 2004, 12:22 AM
Geet...
Geet gata houn mein,goungounata houn mein mein ne hansne ka vaada kiya tha kabhi iss liye ab sada mouskourata houn mein... Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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20th January 2004, 12:49 AM
Wah good. Likhte rahna. Der hogayi hein kuch.
Mein Wada lafhj se age karti hu. Lata & Kishore Jee ke awaz meh. O thehro meri jaan wada karo nehi chhoroge tum mera sath jaaha tum ho woha mein bhi hu Chhuo nehi dekho zara peechhe rakho haath jawa tum ho jawa mein bhi hu....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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20th January 2004, 01:04 AM
bahut khoob gaano ka competition chal raha hai..keep it up shiml ji and amaanush ji...magar ek gusthaaaki maaf kijiye ki aapke gaaano ke beech ek nazm pesh kar raha hoon...shimul ji word 'saath' se yeh likhi hai...
Baat ki nazuki ki halat to dekhon honth hilte to hai par kuch nahi kehte aapne ghar bhi aata hai chaandni ka sabab toote-taare hasrat-e-dil nahi kehte woh din jise kehte hai guzarta hai yun bhi aaina dekhne waale ghazal nahi kehte kehne ko kehte bhi hai yeh duniyawaale saath dene waale ko humsafar nahi kehte... -mast Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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20th January 2004, 01:24 AM
Dear Mast Jee, are wah, keya baat hein aapka. Bohot khub likhha hein aapne. Mein toh parte hue kho gayi thi. Ish liye thori der hogayi reply karte hue. Haan, gano ki hi competition chalrahi thi abhi tak. Likhte rahiyega. Shukriya.
Humsafar lafhj se age karti hu. Inteha film ki gana. Humsafar chahiye umer bhar chahiye Humsafar chahiye umer bhar chahiye Aapke Pyaar ki ek nazar chahiye Aapke Pyaar ki ek nazar chahiye dil hein beghar ishe ek ghar chahiye baas yuhi dekhkar muskurate raho baas yuhi dekhkar muskurate raho yeh sahara mujhe umer vhar chahiye dil hein beghar ishe ek ghar chahiye....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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20th January 2004, 05:18 AM
MARGHATIS 24,000 KABRISTAANIS 6900
KABRISTAANI-- Meena, banjara ji, tanhaai, happy, Parasaxena, roopali, khushi, sanjoo, talkingeyes, piya, Banno, Maikash, ghayalparwana, arnab, Kshitiz, Sahil Khan, amanush, akant MARGHATI— sakhi, talib, manoj kureel, arvindsony, bhadsha-E-gham bindiya, ambar, shakeel shaikh, mushi bhai, manish bansal, madh-e-ghum, shimul, mast, sofia saaed, Sharabi, amrit sharad, romance, Rumi kuch bandishein hain yahan sher ya poem post karne kee… Maximum length 12 lines (your own or borrowed). Celebrating zindagi, pyaar, dosti, ma-baap, vagairah vagairah. No no words, maut, chita, shamshaan, vagairah vagairah. Must use one of the words from last post, just any. We will have two teams…1 Marghati 2 Kabristaani (when you post a sher, if you are not already in a team, Sakhi will assign you a team, and occasionally we will post points as well as team members’ names). MARGHATIS 24,000 KABRISTAANIS 6900 Waah shimul, akele hee khan bhayyia, amanush aur Nawab Kshitiz ka muqabla kar rahin thin...good job! Well dekho mast ne saath diya aapka... Bahut khoob nazm hai Mast Mast... Humsafar chahiye umer bhar chahiye Humsafar chahiye umer bhar chahiye Aapke Pyaar ki ek nazar chahiye Aapke Pyaar ki ek nazar chahiye dil hein beghar ishe ek ghar chahiye baas yuhi dekhkar muskurate raho baas yuhi dekhkar muskurate raho yeh sahara mujhe umer vhar chahiye dil hein beghar ishe ek ghar chahiye....... shimul kee post se aage badhaayiye plz... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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