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Some lines by Asrar Ansari - 4th November 2001, 03:03 AM

kachchi divaar hu thokar na lagaanaa mujh ko
apani nazaron mein basaa kar na giraanaa mujh ko

tum ko aankhon mein tasavur ki tarah rakhataa hu
dil mein dhadakan ki tarah tum bhi basaanaa mujh ko

baat karane mein jo mushkil ho tumhe mehfil mein
main samajh jaunga nazaron se bataanaa mujh ko

vada utanaa hi karo jitanaa nibhaa sakate ho
Khvaab pura jo na ho vo na dikhaanaa mujh ko

apane rishte ki nazaakat ka bharam rakh lenaa
main to aashiq hu divaanaa na banaanaa mujh ko....


Never love a love that hurts, never hurt a love that loves

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Beautiful..
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Thumbs up Beautiful.. - 4th November 2001, 05:08 PM

Shukriya neelo ji ...itni acchi ghazal post karne ke liye..!!

Bahut hi umda likha hai Asrar Ansari ji ne...

especially ye lines hume bahut acchi lagi...

vada utanaa hi karo jitanaa nibhaa sakate ho
Khvaab pura jo na ho vo na dikhaanaa mujh ko


just too good....umeed hai aage bhi aap aise hi kuch collections lekar pesh hongi...

duaoon ke saath,
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4th November 2001, 08:16 PM

Thanx Shumaila ji

I agree with u ......bahut hi achi ghazal hai.

Aur rahi baat hamari... ji hum to post karte hi rahenge.....yeh baat aur hai ke kabhi kabhi gap kuch dino ka ho jaata hai

God bless U


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Exclamation 29th November 2001, 02:35 PM

hi neelo ji

u r absolutely right and i like ur shers very much . keep writing.
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very good neelo
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very good neelo - 3rd December 2001, 01:54 PM

good shers neelo! keep it up!


wo mere dil ko kuchal ke chala gaya
anjane me muzko wo shayar bana gaya
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