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Koi Rehnumai Na De - 15th April 2006, 02:05 PM
Saza-e-Ishq de de abb koi Sunvai na de
Doob jane de kashti ko koi Rehnumai na de

Na behne doon chhupa loon ye Ashq apne
Par usse chhupaoon kaise jo Dikhai na de

Hansi mein chhupane ki Koshish hai magar
Aahon ka shor hai kaise phir Sunai na de

Tere dar pe aayi hai "wafa" fariyad karne
Na de sacha pyar magar itni Bewafai na de

Gulshan ko ho jaye phir Sehra se pyar
Ya Khuda sehra ko itni bhi Rulai na de

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Re: Koi Rehnumai Na De - 15th April 2006, 02:12 PM
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ek arse baad aapko padh kar laga jaise sehra se hokar ek muddatton baad koi baadal gujra ho...wohi makhmali ehsaas aur wahi dil ko choo lene wale jazbaat,,jinhe aapne jubaan bakshi hai..aapka andaaz-e-bayaan ka mein kaayal hooon,isiliye aapse yeh ilteja hai ki apne behskeemti alfaazon ke gauhar gar ho sake to yahan aa kar lutaya kijiye.
meri daad kuboool kijiye...
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15th April 2006, 04:06 PM
Wafa Ji.........

Ek aali jasbaati bayan hai is kalaam mein..........aur dard ki shiddat bhi bahut hai....................guhar....magar iska koi saami nahi .............

hum naaz-o-karam uthate chale gaye............
vo sitam bar sitam dhaate chale gaye..............

apna haal-e-dil ^AMAN^ chupaate rahe............
vo apne gam humein sunate chale gaye...................

khush rahiye...............


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yoon laga - 15th April 2006, 09:31 PM
yoon laga aaj aisee hee kisee ghzal kee zehan ko zaroorat thee rooh ko talash thee bas mil gayee

bahut khoob kaha hai aur bahut hee gaharee lagee har baat yoon hee likhte rahana
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Re: Koi Rehnumai Na De - 16th April 2006, 12:17 PM
Tere dar pe aayi hai "wafa" fariyad karne
Na de sacha pyar magar itni Bewafai na de

Bohat achche lage aap ke likhe huye har aashar, Daad kabool kareN.. Aur ye sher hame aap ke is kalaam meN sab se achchha laga. YuN hi likhTi rahiye..

Daad Haazir hai..

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16th April 2006, 04:03 PM
wafa ji bhaut khoob likha hai aapne

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aapke har sher badhiya hai kisi ek ko chunna galat hoga

aapko padhkar bahut achha laga

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Re: Re: Koi Rehnumai Na De - 18th April 2006, 07:29 PM
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wafa ji
ek arse baad aapko padh kar laga jaise sehra se hokar ek muddatton baad koi baadal gujra ho...wohi makhmali ehsaas aur wahi dil ko choo lene wale jazbaat,,jinhe aapne jubaan bakshi hai..aapka andaaz-e-bayaan ka mein kaayal hooon,isiliye aapse yeh ilteja hai ki apne behskeemti alfaazon ke gauhar gar ho sake to yahan aa kar lutaya kijiye.
meri daad kuboool kijiye...
-MANOJ

Manoj ji

behad khushi hui aapko apne kalaam par dekhkar
kuch majbooriyan hain zindagi ki, main bhi yahan aana chahti hoon kyonki mujhe bhi dard se pyar hai
aapne yahan aakar mera hausla badha diya....bahut bahut shukriya...aapki daad sar ankhon par

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20th April 2006, 01:06 PM
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Wafa Ji.........

Ek aali jasbaati bayan hai is kalaam mein..........aur dard ki shiddat bhi bahut hai....................guhar....magar iska koi saami nahi .............

hum naaz-o-karam uthate chale gaye............
vo sitam bar sitam dhaate chale gaye..............

apna haal-e-dil ^AMAN^ chupaate rahe............
vo apne gam humein sunate chale gaye...................

khush rahiye...............


hum naaz-o-karam uthate chale gaye............
vo sitam bar sitam dhaate chale gaye..............

apna haal-e-dil ^AMAN^ chupaate rahe............
vo apne gam humein sunate chale gaye...................

4 lines mein jaise aapne sab kuch keh diya...jaise poori ek zindagi sama gayi in panktiyon mein...

aap yahan aaye...bahut bahut shukriya

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Re: yoon laga - 21st April 2006, 02:51 PM
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yoon laga aaj aisee hee kisee ghzal kee zehan ko zaroorat thee rooh ko talash thee bas mil gayee

bahut khoob kaha hai aur bahut hee gaharee lagee har baat yoon hee likhte rahana
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Re: Re: Koi Rehnumai Na De - 21st April 2006, 02:53 PM
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Tere dar pe aayi hai "wafa" fariyad karne
Na de sacha pyar magar itni Bewafai na de

Bohat achche lage aap ke likhe huye har aashar, Daad kabool kareN.. Aur ye sher hame aap ke is kalaam meN sab se achchha laga. YuN hi likhTi rahiye..

Daad Haazir hai..

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mere kalaam par gaur farmane ke liye..shukriya
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22nd April 2006, 05:07 PM
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wafa ji bhaut khoob likha hai aapne

keep writing
aapke har sher badhiya hai kisi ek ko chunna galat hoga

aapko padhkar bahut achha laga

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bahut bahut shukriya yahan aane ke liye...mere kalaam ko pasand karne ke liye...shukriya

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hi - 23rd April 2006, 01:41 PM
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acha laga bohat arse bad ap k lafzon ko dekh kar unhai parh kar.
really like the way u writting in ur stayle..keep it up
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Re: hi - 24th April 2006, 12:27 PM
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acha laga bohat arse bad ap k lafzon ko dekh kar unhai parh kar.
really like the way u writting in ur stayle..keep it up
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Re: Koi Rehnumai Na De - 24th April 2006, 01:53 PM
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Saza-e-Ishq de de abb koi Sunvai na de
Doob jane de kashti ko koi Rehnumai na de

Na behne doon chhupa loon ye Ashq apne
Par usse chhupaoon kaise jo Dikhai na de

Hansi mein chhupane ki Koshish hai magar
Aahon ka shor hai kaise phir Sunai na de

Tere dar pe aayi hai "wafa" fariyad karne
Na de sacha pyar magar itni Bewafai na de

Gulshan ko ho jaye phir Sehra se pyar
Ya Khuda sehra ko itni bhi Rulai na de
hi wafaa ji aap ka ye kalaam abhut hi khubsurat hai , mujhe pasand aauya khaas kae ye lines

Saza-e-Ishq de de abb koi Sunvai na de
Doob jane de kashti ko koi Rehnumai na de

Tere dar pe aayi hai "wafa" fariyad karne
Na de sacha pyar magar itni Bewafai na de

Gulshan ko ho jaye phir Sehra se pyar
Ya Khuda sehra ko itni bhi Rulai na de


jabardast likha hai aap ne har share mukammal hai.
take care
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kya likhu - 24th April 2006, 09:56 PM
hello wefa ji

kya likhu kuch kahne ko reha hi nehi aap ke is kelaam ne her kisi ke hoto se daad paayi hai aap ki taarif mey likhne ke liye koi lafz becha hi nehi verna jerur likh deta mager aap ne jo likha hai uski tarif mey tho har lafz kam lagta hai fir bhi kuch likh reha hu ager pasend aaye tho daad jarur chahuga ha mager yebhi beta du ye kisi aur ka likha hai mager fir bhi bhej reha hu


Meri bewafai ki dasta sunane se pahle
Muje itna beta jati chod jane se pahle
Ager koi sikvatumne mujse kiya hota
Mey mena leta tujko ruth jane se pahle........!

Chalta hu hamesha uhi aap likhti rahe yehi duwa karta hu

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Re: Re: Koi Rehnumai Na De - 26th April 2006, 03:23 PM
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hi wafaa ji aap ka ye kalaam abhut hi khubsurat hai , mujhe pasand aauya khaas kae ye lines

Saza-e-Ishq de de abb koi Sunvai na de
Doob jane de kashti ko koi Rehnumai na de

Tere dar pe aayi hai "wafa" fariyad karne
Na de sacha pyar magar itni Bewafai na de

Gulshan ko ho jaye phir Sehra se pyar
Ya Khuda sehra ko itni bhi Rulai na de


jabardast likha hai aap ne har share mukammal hai.
take care
wid regards
manu

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Mere kalaam ko pasand karne ke liye bahut shukriya..

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Re: kya likhu - 26th April 2006, 04:12 PM
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hello wefa ji

kya likhu kuch kahne ko reha hi nehi aap ke is kelaam ne her kisi ke hoto se daad paayi hai aap ki taarif mey likhne ke liye koi lafz becha hi nehi verna jerur likh deta mager aap ne jo likha hai uski tarif mey tho har lafz kam lagta hai fir bhi kuch likh reha hu ager pasend aaye tho daad jarur chahuga ha mager yebhi beta du ye kisi aur ka likha hai mager fir bhi bhej reha hu


Meri bewafai ki dasta sunane se pahle
Muje itna beta jati chod jane se pahle
Ager koi sikvatumne mujse kiya hota
Mey mena leta tujko ruth jane se pahle........!

Chalta hu hamesha uhi aap likhti rahe yehi duwa karta hu

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26th April 2006, 04:50 PM
wafa ji
jazbaat ko alfaz dena koi aap se seekhe amazing apka ek ek sher qabil-e-dad he

tah-e-dil se dad qubool kijiye

"na koi khuab na aaNsu na khayal
kya ajab qahat pada he mujh main
aks dar aks bikharna he mujhey
jane kya toot gaya he mujh main"

likhti rahiye
apna khayal rakhyega
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27th April 2006, 08:42 PM
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wafa ji
jazbaat ko alfaz dena koi aap se seekhe amazing apka ek ek sher qabil-e-dad he

tah-e-dil se dad qubool kijiye

"na koi khuab na aaNsu na khayal
kya ajab qahat pada he mujh main
aks dar aks bikharna he mujhey
jane kya toot gaya he mujh main"

likhti rahiye
apna khayal rakhyega
bye

aks dar aks bikharna he mujhey
jane kya toot gaya he mujh main
Rubeena ji
kya khoob kaha aapne……jane kya toot gaya hai mujh mein….bahut khoob!
aap yahan aayi…kalaam ko pasand kiya…..chand aashaar pesh kiye mere kalaam ko…..bahut bahut shukriya….
aur jab takk dard rahega wafa likhti rahegi

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