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14th July 2014, 10:07 AM
Ye Kitaboon Ke Qissen Fasaano Ki Baaten
Nigahon Ki Jhilmil Judai Ki Raaten Mohabbat Ki Qasmen Nibhane Ke Vaade Ye Dhoka Wafa Ka Ye Jhoote Iraade Ye Baaten Kitaabi Ye Nazmen Purani Na In Ki Haqeeqat Na In Ki Kahaani Na Likhna Inhen Na Hi Mehfooz Karna Ye Jazbe Hai Bas In Ko Mehsoos Karna...... NOT MINE safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara sa dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my tears bcz My smile is fake....... 
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14th July 2014, 11:00 AM
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 safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara sa dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my tears bcz My smile is fake.......
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14th July 2014, 12:07 PM
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kya lafzo.n ka khel aur mel nazar aata hai.. bhai aap to sikhnewalo.n kii nahi, sikhanewalo.n kii qataar me.n ho  behad khubsurat ehsaaso.n bharee tehreer pe dhero.n dhero.n daaaad aur mubarakbaad....... ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता 
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14th July 2014, 12:55 PM
Na Likhna Inhen Na Hi Mehfooz Karna
Ye Jazbe Hai Bas In Ko Mehsoos Karna... Bohat khoob Superb! Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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14th July 2014, 02:13 PM
Na Likhna Inhen Na Hi Mehfooz Karna
Ye Jazbe Hai Bas In Ko Mehsoos Karna... Wahhh.. Furqan Bhai... Boht khoob... DuaooN k saath,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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14th July 2014, 02:40 PM
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safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara sa dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my tears bcz My smile is fake.......
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14th July 2014, 02:45 PM
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bhai waise to abhi ham qataar tak bhi nahi pohche pehle qataar tak pohcah jaye phir faisla hoga kis qataar me lagna hai  safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara sa dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my tears bcz My smile is fake.......
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14th July 2014, 02:47 PM
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safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara sa dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my tears bcz My smile is fake.......
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14th July 2014, 02:50 PM
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safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara sa dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my tears bcz My smile is fake.......
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14th July 2014, 09:12 PM
bhaijaan aapki ghazlen to bade bade log churaa rahe hain.....
https://www.facebook.com/13249342693...levant_count=1 facebook waale bhi churaa rahe hain... http://www.nannu.info/forum/showthread.php?t=2474 aur shaayad kisiii aur ne bhi churaaai hogii 2009 me..... khair ab to aap qaafiyaa seekh hi gaye hain.. maqtaa bhi shaamil kijiye taaki inki chorii rokii jaa sake.... aap sabko thank you thank you kah rahe hain mujhe badaa tajjub hota hai... |
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14th July 2014, 09:35 PM
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Boht afsoos hua yeh dekh kar.. ke kisi aur ki ghazal ko aap apna bana kar pesh kar rahay ho..... you know is sites k kuch rules/regulations hain, jo tehreer ya ghazal ya nazm apni nahi hai .. us ke neche nm ya not mine mention karna zaroori hai... Kuch seekhne ki koshish karieN... umeed hai aainda aap aisa nahi karieN gay.. aur apni kisi achay kalaam k saath nazar aayeN gay.. DuaooN k saath ,,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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14th July 2014, 10:30 PM
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http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...444#post461444 ye Sdc pe meri pehli pesh kash hai aur apni pehli pesh kash me hi Maine Kaha tha k maine ab tak apni koi nazam nahi likhi hai aur jaisa k main kai baar bol Chuka hu k aksar main jo likhta hu wo kahi na kahi suni hui hai jo zehan me Aati hai to likh deta hu aur jaha tak mujhe yaad hai aapne mere Singh ka bhi puche the Qalam hai haath me khanjar ki kya zarurat hai.... parha likha hu saliqe se khoon karta hu........ k kya ye meri likhi hui hai us waqt bhi mera jawaab yehi raha hai k ye meri nahi kafi pehle kahi suna tha aur mujhe ye bhi yaad nahi k jo maine likha hai ye aise hi hai ya lafz Cheng hai aur rahi baat sabko thank u shukriya kehne ki jis tarha aap sab hosla afzai karte hai main us k liye hamesha aap sabka dil shukar guzaar raha hu ye meri nadani hai jo main ye samajh nahi paaya k aap sab meri galti k wajha se ab tak ye sab meri nazam samajhte rahe maafi chahta hu apni galti ki aur aynda is baat ka khayaal rakhuga k post k niche "NOT ME" bhi typ karna hai ummeed hai aap sab meri nadani ko maaf kar k aise hi hosla afzai karte rahege aur aapko the dil se shukriya Kehta hu k aap meri galti mujhe bataye thank u so much mujhe bohat khushi hui mujhe apni galti sudhaarne ka moqa mila safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara sa dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my tears bcz My smile is fake.......
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14th July 2014, 10:42 PM
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new hu yaha bhi aur shayri ki dunya me bhi is liye ziyada kuch nahi jaanta ummeed hai aap sab aise hi saath dete rahoge aur mujhe meri galtiya batate rahoge taaki main sudhaar saku dua hai aap sabka saath aise hi qayam rahe main bhi zarur Sikh jauga safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara sa dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my tears bcz My smile is fake.......
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14th July 2014, 10:45 PM
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 ummeed hai aap mujhe sikha dogi safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara sa dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my tears bcz My smile is fake.......
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15th July 2014, 12:11 AM
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don't mind n main tumhe nasamajh samajhta to sikhane kyu bolta??  safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara sa dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my tears bcz My smile is fake.......
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15th July 2014, 12:12 AM
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Koi mujhe bhi sikhaa do baatoN ko ghumaya kese jaata hai... ? tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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15th July 2014, 12:18 AM
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ye to naaz ji hi sikha sakti hai main bhi line me hu  :safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara sa dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my tears bcz My smile is fake.......
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15th July 2014, 12:27 AM
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Awww.... sach mein tareef kar rahi ho Naaz.. yaa yeh bhi baat ko ghuma rahi ho? tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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15th July 2014, 01:32 AM
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haan ab hazam ho gaya... but haajmola lene ke baad... tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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