Qaafiyah nahiiN hai, lekin yeh eHsaas jis taraH pesh kiya hai - bahot pasand aaya.
Waise bhi, who says sher(s) have to rhyme; sirf jazbaatoN ka khel hai..
Maine to socha tha ki aap gaayab ho gaye, par yeh paD kar khushi hui.
Likhte rahiye,
Aman
"je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa,
te bibba saada dil moD de..!"
hey aman yaar how r u > thanks ki aapko jasbaat e dil pasand to aaye...areey humney kaha gayab hona hai mere finals chal rahe hai..so studying u know...hum to yahi hai...shayad aap hi hame dekh nahi paa rahe....
Luv Priya>>
Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......
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Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!