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Chalo Ishq Ki Unhain Saza Dety hain -
29th May 2008, 01:52 PM
Aslam u Alaikum , Adab Dosto ..........
Aik bar phir mujh nacheez ke kuch toty phooty alfaz appki bazm mein hazir hain ..... aur muntazir hain app ki raaey ke liye ...Apna Keemti waqt deny ka behad Shukriya..... chalo ishq mein ajj unhain saza dety hain rahien who khush unhain dua dety hain Dua-e-Dil pe ger unhain hai nhi yakeen chalo utha k haath hont bhi hila dety hain de ker unhain aram makhmal ke bistar ka hum kanton pe bister apna bana lety hain anjan ik shajer pe likhi thi dastan kabhi ab yad nhi shajer to gulshan hi jala dety hain ban na jaien tery orooj mein rukawat kabhi ye soch ke hum khud ko hi mita dety hain kuch dair mera janaza na uthao logo dekh ker hum unhain akhri sada dety hain nadan na samjh kiyon keh rahy hain "Mujeeb" na aye ga koi ab chalo dafna dety hain Muntazir Mujeeb |
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29th May 2008, 02:20 PM
Good Work Keep it Up....... Bye |
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29th May 2008, 04:13 PM
wah mujeeb....bahut hi badhiya ghazal hain...........har ashaar acche hain kaunsa chunu samajh nahin aa raha
 dil se daad! yunhi likhte raho.....bas "A" mat kha jaao... aur dety nahin shayad "dete" likhna thik hain.........tum dekh lena... mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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29th May 2008, 04:15 PM
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uffffffff mujeeb ji kis shair ki tareef karoon aur kis ki nahi bohat zaberdast likha hai aik aik shair mukammal hai dil se nikli daad qobool kijiye mere pas mazeed alfaz nahi ke main aapki tareef ker sakoon bohat khoob. apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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29th May 2008, 04:44 PM
Mujeeb itna achha likh kar BACHE KI JAAN LEGA KIYA ?
just kidding yar.... aap ke rachna vakai Bemisal hai... keep it up... Rishi Aasha ka Deep Jalaye Baitha HooN
Mann mein tujhe Basae Baitha HooN Aana hai to jaldi aa E DosT, Zindgi apni to kiyA, Udhaar ki bhi Khaye Baitha HooN. |
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31st May 2008, 04:09 PM
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Shukriya Mohteram !!!! |
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31st May 2008, 05:21 PM
Hello Mujeeb G
Sabse pehle to aapse muaafi chahta hun ke aapki iss khoobsoorat nazm par bahut der se aya. Lekin aapne sach mein kamaal ka likha hai.... Kaam mein itna busy tha ke socha ke iss post ko padhunga sirf reply baad mein kar dunga par jaise padhte hi khud-b-khud reply karne ke liye ungliyan chal padi. Mujhe aapki yeh nazm bahut hi achhi lagi aur jazbaat bahut gehre lage. Khuda aapki kalam ko aur jaan bakshe.. Khush raihye.............. Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
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31st May 2008, 09:46 PM
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wahhhhhhhhhhhh....bahut khub MUJEEB....har ek sher kabil-e-tarif hai...dil ko chu liya aap ki is ghazal ne....u hi mehfil ki shobha badhate rahiyega..........  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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31st May 2008, 10:50 PM
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Aslam u alaikum , Baji Actually ajj lunch nahi kiya tha is liye "a" kha gya or ainda koshish keron ga k "a" na khaon lunch ker k ghazal post kiya keron and bundle of thanx Baji for appreciating me i hope k ainda bhi app ko apni shayri se manoos kerta rahon Mujeeb |
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31st May 2008, 11:05 PM
bahut khoob dost,bahut accha likha hai apne,sabhi sher bahut acche hai,ye mujhe khuch khas laga..
Dua-e-Dil pe ger unhain hai nahi yakeen chalo utha k haath hont bhi hila dete hain likhate rahe,sukriya,take care apka..........baagi. khuda baagi kahi hai,kahi baagi khuda hai. |
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1st June 2008, 02:29 AM
de ker unhain aram makhmal ke bistar ka
hum kanton pe bister apna bana lety hain ban na jaien tery orooj mein rukawat kabhi ye soch ke hum khud ko hi mita dety hain zabardastt asharr..bahut acha likha hai ..yeh do ashaar behad pasand aaye/..likhte raho yunhin gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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1st June 2008, 08:24 AM
hi mujeeb
yeh ghazal bhi bahut pyaari hai ... yu hi likhte raha karo mmeri daad kabul ki jeye take care mandeep ~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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DIL KI BAAT DIL TAK
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1st June 2008, 04:57 PM
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rahien who khush unhain dua dety hain Assalam-o-Alaykum Mujeeb bhai kese hain aap ? janaab kya baat hai aapke kalaam ki aapne saza bhi di wo bhi bahut khoob khush rehne ki. janaab itni umda shayri itne lajawab ehsaas kamaal hai Mujeeb sahab khuch hunar apna hame bhi de dijiye.........khaksaar ki daad kubool kijiye Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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1st June 2008, 05:17 PM
hi salam,
bohat acha likha hai appne aisay hi likhte rahay app mujeeb........ |
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1st June 2008, 05:21 PM
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Wah janaab wah.......Kya khoob alfaaz hain...!!!! 9968002713 |
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1st June 2008, 05:24 PM
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Wah janaab wah.......Kya khoob alfaaz hain...!!!! Aamir:-) 9968002713 9968002713 |
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22nd July 2008, 09:59 AM
chalo ishq mein ajj unhain saza dety hain
rahien who khush unhain dua dety hain Dua-e-Dil pe ger unhain hai nhi yakeen chalo utha k haath hont bhi hila dety hain de ker unhain aram makhmal ke bistar ka hum kanton pe bister apna bana lety hain anjan ik shajer pe likhi thi dastan kabhi ab yad nhi shajer to gulshan hi jala dety hain ban na jaien tery orooj mein rukawat kabhi ye soch ke hum khud ko hi mita dety hain kuch dair mera janaza na uthao logo dekh ker hum unhain akhri sada dety hain nadan na samjh kiyon keh rahy hain "Mujeeb" na aye ga koi ab chalo dafna dety hain mujeeb bahut umda likha hai aapne....har baar ki tarah es baar ahsaas behad asardaar rahe....yoon hi likhte rahiye....kush rahiye aapki baaji .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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24th November 2008, 06:35 PM
chalo ishq mein ajj unhain saza dety hain
rahien who khush unhain dua dety hain Dua-e-Dil pe ger unhain hai nhi yakeen chalo utha k haath hont bhi hila dety hain kuch dair mera janaza na uthao logo dekh ker hum unhain akhri sada dety hain bahut khoob mujeeb saheb.....bahut khoobsurat ehsaas hain apke......yuhi likhte rahiye... zainy Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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10th December 2008, 12:34 PM
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HUM NAYE DAUR KI TAHZEEB SE WAAQIF NA HUYE BEWAFA-ON KO BHI HUM APNI WAFA DETE HAIN. JAAN-TE HAIN KI WO HAR IK SE KAHEGA PHIR BHI HAAL-E-DIL HUM USE KHUL KAR KE BATA DETE HAIN. KAL TALAK JO MUJHE PLKON PE LIYE PHIRTE THE VASL KO AAJ WO MEHFIL SE UTHA DETE HAIN. |
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21st December 2008, 01:21 AM
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Sabse pehle maiN baaqi dostoN se maazrat chahta hoN keh maiN unhaiN jawab pehle nahi day raha ... moHteram janab prashant saaheb ! namaskaar ! Aadaab ! Aslaam u alaikum ! sab se pehle to yeh kahoN ga keh prashaant jee , zameen us ghazal ki hoti hai jiski beHr theek ho , aur app khud ahle-e-elm haiN na to is ghazal ki koi zameen hai aur na hi is maiN koi rawani hai , haan albatla aHsaas shayad appko ache lage hoN kiyoN keh yeh aik nihat garam sa mouzoo hai shayad is liye appko passand aaye ... aur rahi baat ijaazat ki to maiN yehi kahoN ga keh dar asal is se pehle is ghazal ki koi zameen nahi thi mager app ke in sheroN ne is ki zameen bana dee hai . app ka teh dil se shuker guzaar hoN keh waQt inaayat ker ke meri ghazal per nazer caani ki ... ALLAH appko hamesha khush rakhieN (Aameen) Mujeeb |
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24th March 2009, 03:57 PM
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mazrat khuwa hoN keh bahut waqt ke baad , app ka shukriyah ada ker raha hoN , appko mere TooTey phooTey alfazoN ka majmoo'a pasand aaya yeh mere liye bahut hi khushi ki baat hai tareef ke liye shukriyah saath banaey rakhiye Mujeeb |
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24th March 2009, 03:59 PM
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Aadaab ! Mohteram ! mere azeez dost , app ka saath hi hamesha kuch acha likhne meN madad daita hai , bus saath banaiye rakhiye aainda bhi acha likhne ki bherpoor koshish keroNga Mujeeb |
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24th March 2009, 04:03 PM
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Aadaab ! izat ma-aab janab jasdeep jee ! us waqt app mazrat khuwa they ke app mere ghazal per dair se aaye mager mer dost ab mere pass to mazrat kerne ki bhi gunjaaish nahi rahi kiyoN ke maiN app se bhi bahut zyada late ho gaya hoN app ko jawab daine maiN , mujhe is baat ki nihayat shermindagi hai . yeh app ka baRhapan hai jo mujh jaise na ahl ko is kabil samjhte haiN , app ki zara nawazi ke liye bahut shuker guzaar hoN umeed hai aagey bhi app is apna pan ko qaaim rakhieNge Mujeeb |
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24th March 2009, 04:05 PM
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Aadaab ! moHtermaa ! app ko khud bhi bahut acha likhti haiN , mere kalaam per nazar daalne ke liye shukeriyah , umeed hai aainda bhi yeh sharf Hasil rahe ga Mujeeb |
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24th March 2009, 04:06 PM
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Aadaab ! app ke asl naam se to nawaakif hoN aur bhaagi likhna mujhe kuch na mayoob sa lag raha hai , ghazal ko sarahne ke liye beHad shuker guzaar hoN , umeed hai aainda bhi app ka saath youNhi rahe ga Mujeeb |
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26th March 2009, 09:32 PM
mujeeb bhai good yaar excellent thought
GAIRO SE SAHE TUMHE DIL KA LAGANA AA TO GAYA DUNIYA MAIN KISEKE HO TO GAYE TUMHE PYAAR NIBHANA AA TA GAYA MUSA KHAN |
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