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Sare baazaar kuch nilaam hua - 4th October 2010, 03:51 PM



"दिले नादां तुझे हुआ क्या है "
की तरज़ पे

तू बता दे तेरा पता क्या है,
कैसा दिखता है पहनता क्या है.

हैं यहां पे क्यूं ये पैमाने,
जो बताते नहीं ज़रा क्या है.

यहां कैसे का कुछ सवाल नहीं,
देखते सब हैं के मिला क्या है.


तेरे चेहरे पे किसका चेहरा है,
मेरे आस्तीं में ये छुपा क्या है.

आज सर पे जो ताज रखता है,
कल को देखेगा के हुआ क्या है.

झूठ की इक दिवार रखता है,
तेरे इमान में बचा क्या है.

वो जमीं से फ़लक पे जा पहुंचा,
मेरी नज़रों से ये गिरा क्या है.

सरे बाज़ार कुछ निलाम हुआ,
ये ना पूछो के ये बिका क्या है.

सबको बस रोश्नी की है चाहत,
जानता दिल ही है जला क्या है.

जिनको मतलब नहीं ख्यालों से,
क्या बताएं उन्हें कहा क्या है.

दिले गुस्ताख है जुबां आतिश,
उस "अनाड़ी" का ये ब्यां क्या है.

"अनाड़ी"
4th Oct. 2010




"dile naadaa.n tujhe huaa kyaa hai "
kii taraz pe

too bataa de teraa pataa kyaa hai,
kaisaa dikhataa hai pahanataa kyaa hai.

hai.n yahaa.n pe kyoo.n ye paimaane,
jo bataate nahii.n zaraa kyaa hai.

yahaa.n kaise kaa kuchh sawaal nahii.m,
dekhate sab hai.n ke milaa kyaa hai.


tere chehare pe kisakaa cheharaa hai,
mere aastii.n me.n ye chhupaa kyaa hai.

aaj sar pe jo taaj rakhataa hai,
kal ko dekhegaa ke huaa kyaa hai.

jhooTh kii ik diwaar rakhataa hai,
tere imaan me.n bachaa kyaa hai.

wo jamii.n se falak pe jaa pahu.nchaa,
merii nazaro.n se ye giraa kyaa hai.

sare baazaar kuchh nilaam huaa,
ye naa poochho ke ye bikaa kyaa hai.

sabako bas roshnii kii hai chaahat,
jaanataa dil hii hai jalaa kyaa hai.

jinako matalab nahii.n khyaalo.n se,
kyaa bataae.n unhe.n kahaa kyaa hai.

dile gustaakh hai jubaa.n aatish,
us "anaa.Dii" ka ye byaa.n kyaa hai
.

"Anaarhi"
4th Oct. 2010


पुराने लिबासों में लाखों हैं पैवंद,
ख़यालों को चोला नया दे रहा हूँ .

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सरे बाज़ार कुछ निलाम हुआ,
ये ना पूछो के ये बिका क्या है.


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"दिले नादां तुझे हुआ क्या है "
की तरज़ पे

तू बता दे तेरा पता क्या है,
कैसा दिखता है पहनता क्या है.

हैं यहां पे क्यूं ये पैमाने,
जो बताते नहीं ज़रा क्या है.

यहां कैसे का कुछ सवाल नहीं,
देखते सब हैं के मिला क्या है.


तेरे चेहरे पे किसका चेहरा है,
मेरे आस्तीं में ये छुपा क्या है.

आज सर पे जो ताज रखता है,
कल को देखेगा के हुआ क्या है.

झूठ की इक दिवार रखता है,
तेरे इमान में बचा क्या है.

वो जमीं से फ़लक पे जा पहुंचा,
मेरी नज़रों से ये गिरा क्या है.

सरे बाज़ार कुछ निलाम हुआ,
ये ना पूछो के ये बिका क्या है.

सबको बस रोश्नी की है चाहत,
जानता दिल ही है जला क्या है.

जिनको मतलब नहीं ख्यालों से,
क्या बताएं उन्हें कहा क्या है.

दिले गुस्ताख है जुबां आतिश,
उस "अनाड़ी" का ये ब्यां क्या है.

"अनाड़ी"
4th Oct. 2010




"dile naadaa.n tujhe huaa kyaa hai "
kii taraz pe

too bataa de teraa pataa kyaa hai,
kaisaa dikhataa hai pahanataa kyaa hai.

hai.n yahaa.n pe kyoo.n ye paimaane,
jo bataate nahii.n zaraa kyaa hai.

yahaa.n kaise kaa kuchh sawaal nahii.m,
dekhate sab hai.n ke milaa kyaa hai.


tere chehare pe kisakaa cheharaa hai,
mere aastii.n me.n ye chhupaa kyaa hai.

aaj sar pe jo taaj rakhataa hai,
kal ko dekhegaa ke huaa kyaa hai.

jhooTh kii ik diwaar rakhataa hai,
tere imaan me.n bachaa kyaa hai.

wo jamii.n se falak pe jaa pahu.nchaa,
merii nazaro.n se ye giraa kyaa hai.

sare baazaar kuchh nilaam huaa,
ye naa poochho ke ye bikaa kyaa hai.

sabako bas roshnii kii hai chaahat,
jaanataa dil hii hai jalaa kyaa hai.

jinako matalab nahii.n khyaalo.n se,
kyaa bataae.n unhe.n kahaa kyaa hai.

dile gustaakh hai jubaa.n aatish,
us "anaa.Dii" ka ye byaa.n kyaa hai
.

"Anaarhi"
4th Oct. 2010
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Annarhi ji namshkar ek bar fir aapki peshkesh ne dil jeet liyaa
वो जमीं से फ़लक पे जा पहुंचा,
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वो जमीं से फ़लक पे जा पहुंचा,
मेरी नज़रों से ये गिरा क्या है.


सरे बाज़ार कुछ निलाम हुआ,
ये ना पूछो के ये बिका क्या है.


Anaarhi ji, bahut khoob....dil ka haal bayaN kar gaye ye do sher Daad kabool kijiyega

Likhte rahiye....
Namaste !!!


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तेरे चेहरे पे किसका चेहरा है,
मेरे आस्तीं में ये छुपा क्या है.


झूठ की इक दिवार रखता है,
तेरे इमान में बचा क्या है.

वो जमीं से फ़लक पे जा पहुंचा,
मेरी नज़रों से ये गिरा क्या है.

सरे बाज़ार कुछ निलाम हुआ,
ये ना पूछो के ये बिका क्या है.

सबको बस रोश्नी की है चाहत,
जानता दिल ही है जला क्या है.
Anaarhi ji,

awesome indeed..... very very impressive... dil chhu gaye aapke ye ehsaas.... upar ke kuch sher dil ke bahut kareeb rahe...dil se daad hazir hai... likhte rahiye.... khush rahiye...


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Very Impressive Creation ......Anaarhi Ji !

Bahut kuch keh diya aapne ... apni peshkash me ... khoob rahe sabhi ehsaas !
dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi khoobsurat ehsaasoN ke saath aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ....

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"दिले नादां तुझे हुआ क्या है "
की तरज़ पे

तू बता दे तेरा पता क्या है,
कैसा दिखता है पहनता क्या है.

हैं यहां पे क्यूं ये पैमाने,
जो बताते नहीं ज़रा क्या है.

यहां कैसे का कुछ सवाल नहीं,
देखते सब हैं के मिला क्या है.


तेरे चेहरे पे किसका चेहरा है,
मेरे आस्तीं में ये छुपा क्या है.

आज सर पे जो ताज रखता है,
कल को देखेगा के हुआ क्या है.

झूठ की इक दिवार रखता है,
तेरे इमान में बचा क्या है.

वो जमीं से फ़लक पे जा पहुंचा,
मेरी नज़रों से ये गिरा क्या है.

सरे बाज़ार कुछ निलाम हुआ,
ये ना पूछो के ये बिका क्या है.

सबको बस रोश्नी की है चाहत,
जानता दिल ही है जला क्या है.

जिनको मतलब नहीं ख्यालों से,
क्या बताएं उन्हें कहा क्या है.

दिले गुस्ताख है जुबां आतिश,
उस "अनाड़ी" का ये ब्यां क्या है.

"अनाड़ी"
4th Oct. 2010




"dile naadaa.n tujhe huaa kyaa hai "
kii taraz pe

too bataa de teraa pataa kyaa hai,
kaisaa dikhataa hai pahanataa kyaa hai.

hai.n yahaa.n pe kyoo.n ye paimaane,
jo bataate nahii.n zaraa kyaa hai.

yahaa.n kaise kaa kuchh sawaal nahii.m,
dekhate sab hai.n ke milaa kyaa hai.


tere chehare pe kisakaa cheharaa hai,
mere aastii.n me.n ye chhupaa kyaa hai.

aaj sar pe jo taaj rakhataa hai,
kal ko dekhegaa ke huaa kyaa hai.

jhooTh kii ik diwaar rakhataa hai,
tere imaan me.n bachaa kyaa hai.

wo jamii.n se falak pe jaa pahu.nchaa,
merii nazaro.n se ye giraa kyaa hai.

sare baazaar kuchh nilaam huaa,
ye naa poochho ke ye bikaa kyaa hai.

sabako bas roshnii kii hai chaahat,
jaanataa dil hii hai jalaa kyaa hai.

jinako matalab nahii.n khyaalo.n se,
kyaa bataae.n unhe.n kahaa kyaa hai.

dile gustaakh hai jubaa.n aatish,
us "anaa.Dii" ka ye byaa.n kyaa hai
.

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4th Oct. 2010
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सरे बाज़ार कुछ निलाम हुआ,
ये ना पूछो के ये बिका क्या है.


bahut khoob anari ji...
kamal likha hai aapne..
accha laga aapko padh kar...
daad kubul keejiye
Shipra ji ,

Thanks for appreciation.

Regards
"Anaarhi"


पुराने लिबासों में लाखों हैं पैवंद,
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5th October 2010, 02:01 PM

तू बता दे तेरा पता क्या है,
कैसा दिखता है पहनता क्या है.


जिनको मतलब नहीं ख्यालों से,
क्या बताएं उन्हें कहा क्या है.


Vry Impressive.........!!! Liked it.........!!!

God Bless You.........!!!


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Ishk ji, Secret Admirer ji, Lamha ji,

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5th October 2010, 10:17 PM

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"दिले नादां तुझे हुआ क्या है "
की तरज़ पे

तू बता दे तेरा पता क्या है,
कैसा दिखता है पहनता क्या है.

हैं यहां पे क्यूं ये पैमाने,
जो बताते नहीं ज़रा क्या है.

यहां कैसे का कुछ सवाल नहीं,
देखते सब हैं के मिला क्या है.


तेरे चेहरे पे किसका चेहरा है,
मेरे आस्तीं में ये छुपा क्या है.

आज सर पे जो ताज रखता है,
कल को देखेगा के हुआ क्या है.

झूठ की इक दिवार रखता है,
तेरे इमान में बचा क्या है.

वो जमीं से फ़लक पे जा पहुंचा,
मेरी नज़रों से ये गिरा क्या है.

सरे बाज़ार कुछ निलाम हुआ,
ये ना पूछो के ये बिका क्या है.

सबको बस रोश्नी की है चाहत,
जानता दिल ही है जला क्या है.

जिनको मतलब नहीं ख्यालों से,
क्या बताएं उन्हें कहा क्या है.

दिले गुस्ताख है जुबां आतिश,
उस "अनाड़ी" का ये ब्यां क्या है.

"अनाड़ी"
4th Oct. 2010




"dile naadaa.n tujhe huaa kyaa hai "
kii taraz pe

too bataa de teraa pataa kyaa hai,
kaisaa dikhataa hai pahanataa kyaa hai.

hai.n yahaa.n pe kyoo.n ye paimaane,
jo bataate nahii.n zaraa kyaa hai.

yahaa.n kaise kaa kuchh sawaal nahii.m,
dekhate sab hai.n ke milaa kyaa hai.


tere chehare pe kisakaa cheharaa hai,
mere aastii.n me.n ye chhupaa kyaa hai.

aaj sar pe jo taaj rakhataa hai,
kal ko dekhegaa ke huaa kyaa hai.

jhooTh kii ik diwaar rakhataa hai,
tere imaan me.n bachaa kyaa hai.

wo jamii.n se falak pe jaa pahu.nchaa,
merii nazaro.n se ye giraa kyaa hai.

sare baazaar kuchh nilaam huaa,
ye naa poochho ke ye bikaa kyaa hai.

sabako bas roshnii kii hai chaahat,
jaanataa dil hii hai jalaa kyaa hai.

jinako matalab nahii.n khyaalo.n se,
kyaa bataae.n unhe.n kahaa kyaa hai.

dile gustaakh hai jubaa.n aatish,
us "anaa.Dii" ka ye byaa.n kyaa hai.

"Anaarhi"
4th Oct. 2010

aadaab
bhai kachhi oumr me aor ye rang main to aap ke khiyaalaat dekh kar dang rah gayaa waah waah waah kiyaa khiyaal aaraayi hai kiyaa nuktaa aafareeni hai kiyaa haalaat e haazerah ki chapqalash ka maajra hai kiyaa samaaj ke wahshat zadah chere par tanz hai kiyaa isteaarah hai kiyaa kenaayah hai kiyaa rwaangee hai kiyaa shaaistagi hai kiyaa barjastagi hai kiyaa fikr ki roshan khiyaali hai kiyaa khiyaal ki aazaadaanah rawish hai kiyaa jazbon ki udaan hai kiyaa parwaaze takhaiul hai kiya sadah lafzon me purkaari hai kiyaa salaasat hai kiyaa salees nashtar zanee hai kiyaa oumdah pairaayah hai kiyaa ehsaase zeyaan ki khalish ki tafseer hai kiya tarz etahreer hai kiyaa husn e taqreer hai kiyaa kiya jahar e shamsheer hai kiyaa nigaarish hai
daad hi daad mohabbat hi mohabbat doa hi doa haazir hai
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6th October 2010, 09:28 AM

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Bohat khoob..................................
Zainy ji ,

Shukriyaa bahut bahut is peshkash ko dil se lagane ke liye. aap ne khamoshi se bahut kuch keh diya.

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6th October 2010, 09:37 AM

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Very Impressive Creation ......Anaarhi Ji !

Bahut kuch keh diya aapne ... apni peshkash me ... khoob rahe sabhi ehsaas !
dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi khoobsurat ehsaasoN ke saath aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ....

duaaon ke saath ....
Badhe Bhai Sahab,
ehsaason ko mehsoos kerna ka aur sarahne ka tahe dil se shukerguzaar houn.

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6th October 2010, 10:06 AM

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Annarhi ji namshkar ek bar fir aapki peshkesh ne dil jeet liyaa
वो जमीं से फ़लक पे जा पहुंचा,
मेरी नज़रों से ये गिरा क्या है.

Ye sher pasindida raha

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Hi Pawan,

"sare bazaar kuch nilaam hua" ko pasand kerne ka shukriya. is gazal ka her ik sher muzeh bhut pasand hai, bhut dil se likhi hai ye ek shaks ko saamne rakh ke jo ke sirf paise ko hi badha samazta hai, us ke liye akal ke koi mayne nahin hai, yhan bus matle ko byan kerta houn . uska pet dialog hai ke aadmi ki pehcaan uska ADDRESS aur DRESS hai. ab ise matle se jod lo to kaisee steek byaani hai, mazza aa gya. Aaj bas itnii hi khud ki tareef bahut hai, ek hafta badiya katne wala hai.
Khush raho

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7th October 2010, 10:05 AM

Wah wah mere bhai kya kehne bas ek baat ka khayaal rakhna............aainda kabhi tarz mat likhna........yeh galti maine bhi ki thi kabhi.......aur sab usi tarz ki buniyaad par ulajh kar reh gaye...........tum jante ho yeh kalam sahi bahr me hai.......bas ab baki kaam samaieen ke hatho me chod do.........ya to aap khud tarannum me sunaye woh alag baat hai.

Aur ek choti si guzarish.........aapki is ghazal me bohat zabardast sher kahe hai aapne........lekin unhi me ek sher yeh bhi kaha hai aapne.......misaal ke taur par.

yahaa.n kaise kaa kuchh sawaal nahii.m,
dekhate sab hai.n ke milaa kyaa hai.

Ab yeh sher baki shero ke mukable bohat kamzor lag raha hai........bechara soch raha hoga ke kaha pehalwano ke beech mujhe khada kar diya gaya...........

Baat bhale mazaak me kahi hai par mujhe yaqeen hai aap samajh rahe hoge main kya kehna chah raha hu.

Yeh sher bohat pasand aaye...



aaj sar pe jo taaj rakhataa hai,
kal ko dekhegaa ke huaa kyaa hai.



wo jamii.n se falak pe jaa pahu.nchaa,
merii nazaro.n se ye giraa kyaa hai.


sabako bas roshnii kii hai chaahat,
jaanataa dil hii hai jalaa kyaa hai.

Yeh sher mere liye kaha hai aapne shayed....hahahahahah

jinako matalab nahii.n khyaalo.n se,
kyaa bataae.n unhe.n kahaa kyaa hai.



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aadaab
bhai kachhi oumr me aor ye rang main to aap ke khiyaalaat dekh kar dang rah gayaa
waah waah waah kiyaa khiyaal aaraayi hai
kiyaa nuktaa aafareeni hai
kiyaa haalaat e haazerah ki chapqalash ka maajra hai
kiyaa samaaj ke wahshat zadah chere par tanz hai
kiyaa isteaarah hai
kiyaa kenaayah hai
kiyaa rwaangee hai
kiyaa shaaistagi hai
kiyaa barjastagi hai
kiyaa fikr ki roshan khiyaali hai
kiyaa khiyaal ki aazaadaanah rawish hai
kiyaa jazbon ki udaan hai
kiyaa parwaaze takhaiul hai
kiya sadah lafzon me purkaari hai
kiyaa salaasat hai
kiyaa salees nashtar zanee hai
kiyaa oumdah pairaayah hai
kiyaa ehsaase zeyaan ki khalish ki tafseer hai
kiya tarz etahreer hai
kiyaa husn e taqreer hai
kiyaa kiya jahar e shamsheer hai
kiyaa nigaarish hai

daad hi daad mohabbat hi mohabbat doa hi doa haazir hai
masood hassaas
masood sahib,

shukriya aapka,
kiyaa is bacche ki taqdeer hai, ke aap jaise jaheen , jaankaar aur mohabbat se labrez insaan se dua hi dua mili.

Aapka
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Wah wah mere bhai kya kehne bas ek baat ka khayaal rakhna............aainda kabhi tarz mat likhna........yeh galti maine bhi ki thi kabhi.......aur sab usi tarz ki buniyaad par ulajh kar reh gaye...........tum jante ho yeh kalam sahi bahr me hai.......bas ab baki kaam samaieen ke hatho me chod do.........ya to aap khud tarannum me sunaye woh alag baat hai.

Aur ek choti si guzarish.........aapki is ghazal me bohat zabardast sher kahe hai aapne........lekin unhi me ek sher yeh bhi kaha hai aapne.......misaal ke taur par.

yahaa.n kaise kaa kuchh sawaal nahii.m,
dekhate sab hai.n ke milaa kyaa hai.

Ab yeh sher baki shero ke mukable bohat kamzor lag raha hai........bechara soch raha hoga ke kaha pehalwano ke beech mujhe khada kar diya gaya...........

Baat bhale mazaak me kahi hai par mujhe yaqeen hai aap samajh rahe hoge main kya kehna chah raha hu.

Yeh sher bohat pasand aaye...



aaj sar pe jo taaj rakhataa hai,
kal ko dekhegaa ke huaa kyaa hai.



wo jamii.n se falak pe jaa pahu.nchaa,
merii nazaro.n se ye giraa kyaa hai.


sabako bas roshnii kii hai chaahat,
jaanataa dil hii hai jalaa kyaa hai.

Yeh sher mere liye kaha hai aapne shayed....hahahahahah

jinako matalab nahii.n khyaalo.n se,
kyaa bataae.n unhe.n kahaa kyaa hai.



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Sajid Bhai,

Namaskaar,

bhai ab hafta nahin lagta hai zindgi hi badiya katne wali hai, aap ne muze padha aur apni suggestions se nawaaza. aaj wo mil gya jo SDC join kerne ke baad se chah raha tha.

aap ki yahi khasiyat hai ke aap kankar pehchante hain, heere to sub ko door se hi nazar aa jate hai. aap ki baat maine ghanth baand li, poora khyal rahega aainda. jo ishaara aapne ne apne liye kaha hai main wo gustaakhi nahin ker sakta aapke saath, aap wo bhi samazten hain jo na kha gya ho.
per haan jin ke liye wo kaha hai wo bhi samzen to samzoonga ke baat main kuch aser tha.

aapka ghayal (Kayal)

Anaarhi


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