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9th October 2010, 04:48 PM
रंगीनिया इधर की अगर हैं गुनाह उस पार जा के, सफरे दश्त को छोड़ो जी क्या करना है उस पार जा के. जैसी करनी वैसी भरनी तो रोज़ ए हश्र से डर कैसा, साकी वही पिला दे और जो पीना है उस पार जाके. इस आलम के आईने भी झूठे हैं इंसाँ की तरह, जालिम कितने स्याह दिल हैं जानना है उस पार जा के. उसके ज़ुल्म ओ सितम का मैं कह दूँगा इंसाफ़ हुआ, मरदूद को मेरे कदमो पर गर आना है उस पार जा के, क्या हाले जाँ बताएँ हम इस तन को है आराम कहाँ, सफ़र यहाँ इक करना है इक करना है उस पार जा के. संग पे सर को पटके है बुतो पे झूठी तोहमत भी, शायद उस "अनाड़ी " को कुछ भरना है उस पार जा के. "Anaarhi" 09 Oct 2010 Rangeeniya idher ki agar hain gunah us paar ja ke, safer e dast ko chhodo ji, kya karanaa hai us paar ja ke. jaisee karnee waisee bharnee, to roz e hashr se dar kaisa, saaki wahi pilaa de aur, jo peena hai us paar ja ke. is aalam ke aaine bhii, jhoothe hain insaa.n kii tarah, jalim kitne syah dil hai.n jaananaa hai us paar ja ke. us ke julm o sitam ka main, keh doonga insaaf hua, mardood ko apne kadmon par, gar pana hai us paar ja ke. kya haale jaan batayen hun, is tan ko hai aaraam kahan, safar yahan ik karna hai, ik karana hai us paar ja ke. sang pe sar ko patke hai, buton pe zoothii tihmat bhii, shayad us "anaarhi" ko kuch bharna hai us paar ja ke. "Anaarhi" 09 Oct. 2010 ख़यालों को चोला नया दे रहा हूँ . |
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9th October 2010, 05:05 PM
Bahut hee khoob likha hai anaarhi jee, dil se daad deta hoon aapko.
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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9th October 2010, 05:18 PM
kya haale jaan batayen hun,
is tan ko hai aaraam kahan, safar yahan ik karna hai, ik karana hai us paar ja ke Kya baat hai.....rep +++ Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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9th October 2010, 09:28 PM
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anaarhi bhai radhe radhe bahut khoob................... Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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10th October 2010, 01:29 PM
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sher pasand kerne ka shukriya, saari gazal ik isi sher ke ird girg hi buni hai magar aik achcha khyal kamzor byaani mein dub gya hai shayad. "is aalam ke aaine bhii jhoothe hain insaa.n kii tarah, jalim kitne syah dil hai.n jaananaa hai us paar ja ke." yahan jaannaa ke bazai dekhna hota to kuch aur achcha lagta shayad. kyonki jaannee ke bazay dekhna jeyada appropriate hai aaine ke liye "is aalam ke aaine bhii jhoothe hain insaa.n kii tarah, jalim kitne syah dil hai.n dekhna hai us paar ja ke." koshish jari hai, aashirwaad barkraar rakhna. Regards aapka ghayal (Kayal) "Anaarhi" ( rep +++++ kerte ka shukriya, magar add nahi huee  )Aru ji, Namaskaar Ishk ji, Namaskaar peshkash pasand kerne ka bhut shukarguzaar houn. Regards "Anaarhi |
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10th October 2010, 10:59 PM
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bahut achchi nazm hai Daad khubool kerna razia |
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11th October 2010, 04:00 AM
khoob bhut achay.................likhte rahiye janaab
aslam behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho |
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11th October 2010, 12:35 PM
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Sarahne ka bahut bhaut shukria. Regards "ANAARHI" |
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11th October 2010, 12:48 PM
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Adaab, bhai bhut achcha lagata hai jab koi senior kisi naye talib e ilm kii hausla afjaai kerta hai, dil ko maano muh mangi muraad mill jati hai. aapka kalaam padta rehta houn SDC par, bhut achcha aur gehra likhte hain aap. Tahe dil se hai ji Shukriyaa Aapka regards "Anaarhi" |
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11th October 2010, 03:10 PM
Kya baat hai.N dost kamal kar diya aapne..
aapse ek drkhwasat hai.N roj kuch na kuch post kijiye taki roj sdc mai.N aane ki wajah mil jaye........ Ye sher dil ko chu gaya kya haale jaan batayen hun, is tan ko hai aaraam kahan, safar yahan ik karna hai, ik karana hai us paar ja ke. Pawan (Shayari) |
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12th October 2010, 09:42 AM
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are are ye kya keh rahe ho Pawan bhai ,itne jaheen logo ki mehfil hai ye aur main kya houn? "Hai kasa e fakeer tu rakh khairaat se matlab apna, tu mast jis sharaab se hai wo jaam hi kisi aur ka hai Ab aaiyaariya teri sab jag mein zahir ho chukin ban ke "anaarhi" de raha wo paigaam hi kisi aur ka hai" (Bhikhari ka bartan) Dost tum dil se saath ho, ye jaan gay hain- pehchaan gaye hai. Regards Anaarhi |
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