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29th October 2003, 07:24 PM
Bewafa SHaHaR me HumsafaR DHooNDHteiN HaiN
MoHaBBat kaHaN HaiN maGaR DHooNDHteiN HaiN O jaNe waLe , ja ke BHuLaaNe waLe , teRe .. NisHaN Hai jaHaN vo DaGaR DHooNDHteiN HaiN DaRD Hota Hai too asHQoN se DHOO Dete HaiN HaR zakHm me sitamGaR tujHe DHooNDHteiN HaiN yaaD too AB BHi CHALi aati Hai tumHaRi Hum yaDoN me apNa kHoya mukaDDaR DHooNDHteiN HaiN yaaD ka kya Hai aa Hi jauNGa maiN tumHe ..taB KaHoGe Aie CHaaHNe waLe Hum tujHe DHooNDHteiN HaiN SeekH jayeNGe teRi taRaH Hum BHi NiGaaHeiN BaDaLNa ABHi kHuD ko BaDaLNe waLi NazaR DHooNDHteiN HaiN |
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Bewafa SHaHaR me HumsafaR DHooNDHteiN HaiN
MoHaBBat kaHaN HaiN maGaR DHooNDHteiN HaiN O jaNe waLe , ja ke BHuLaaNe waLe , teRe .. NisHaN Hai jaHaN vo DaGaR DHooNDHteiN HaiN DaRD Hota Hai too asHQoN se DHOO Dete HaiN HaR zakHm me sitamGaR tujHe DHooNDHteiN HaiN wah...wah...kshitiz bhai.. kya khoob likha hai,,,sachi jhalakti hai aap ke kalaam se....aapke alfaazon ko padh kar dard ko mehsoos kar sakta hoon.,,,,bahoot hi umda likha hai,,aur saral bhi..hamari daad kubool kijiye... -Manoj karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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29th October 2003, 07:49 PM
Bewafa SHaHaR me HumsafaR DHooNDHteiN HaiN
MoHaBBat kaHaN HaiN maGaR DHooNDHteiN HaiN O jaNe waLe , ja ke BHuLaaNe waLe , teRe .. NisHaN Hai jaHaN vo DaGaR DHooNDHteiN HaiN DaRD Hota Hai too asHQoN se DHOO Dete HaiN HaR zakHm me sitamGaR tujHe DHooNDHteiN HaiN wah...wah...kshitiz bhai.. kya khoob likha hai,,,sachai jhalakti hai aap ke kalaam se....aapke alfaazon ko padh kar dard ko mehsoos kar sakta hoon.,,,,bahoot hi umda likha hai,,aur saral bhi..hamari daad kubool kijiye... -Manoj karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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29th October 2003, 08:05 PM
MaNoJ BHai ..
TaReef ke Liye BeHaD SHkRGuzaaR HuN MaGaR Bhai .. TaReef se BHala kaHaN Hota Hai Hum too ek SHaks ki NazaR e kaRam DHooNDHte HaiN KHaiR .. HausLa afzai ke Liye DiL aaGe BHi taa umaR muNTziR RaHeGa .. Aap Jaise Hi Dost HaiN JINke SaHaRe Hum yaHaN mauzooD HaiN .. aapke mijaaz kaise HaiN BataiyeGa KHaiRIyaT se RaHiye |
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30th October 2003, 12:08 AM
Dear Kshitiz, bohot khub kalam tha aapka. Nice one. Pyaar kabhi kaam nehi karna koi sitam karlena maar jayenge Ashiq barna itna karam karlena!! Ruthkar hum unhe bhul jane lage! Woh hume aur bhi yaad anelage!! Aise hi likhte rahna. Shukriya. Aapna khayal rakhna. God bless you.
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30th October 2003, 10:33 AM
kshitiz.....Mere bhai dinn ba dinn ap kamaal mahaRth hasil karte ja rahe hai...apnne jassbaton ko alfazoN mai taBdil karne mai...waah iss baar bhii behatariN..kalaaM bann kar samne aayaa hai..bass yu hi likhte rahe aur iss dard ko humsaa hone de..BaaKhuda bada sakun hai apse wakiF hone mai...jinndagii rahii tau ek roZ apse millne kii tamanNa hai.....humne bhi kuch likha hai ap jitnna tau achha nahi parr kuch kar guZare hai jo ap ki nazaroN se wakif karana chahata hu.....
LaboN parr sirf silwate hii bakii hai kuch Jo muskuraye the_y kabhii uske nishaa hai bakii kuch... Khata huvii jo diwaane huve hum unnke kuch IshaRa unka thaa kuch aur humse gunnaH huva ye kuch... NissBat ab unhe humse nahii kuch Hote jaa rahe hai unnke raste manZil ki jaaNiB kuch... Asmaa mai hai sitarOn ka hujUm sa kuch Kitnne Durr the_y wo kitnne pass ChaanD se kuch kuch....SuNjj Jawab ka intazar rahe gaa.....ap ka saa Sanju muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame.. ..... |
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30th October 2003, 02:12 PM
kshtiz ji,
bohot dard hai aapke kalaam mein!sachai bhi hai! Bewafa SHaHaR me HumsafaR DHooNDHteiN HaiN MoHaBBat kaHaN HaiN maGaR DHooNDHteiN HaiN yaaD too AB BHi CHALi aati Hai tumHaRi Hum yaDoN me apNa kHoya mukaDDaR DHooNDHteiN HaiN waah!is khoobi se tho aap hee jazbaaton ko alfaaz de sakte hain!waise ek baat poochen!?aap jaise insaan ko kaun itna dard de gaya hai?!  bohot badnaseeb hai( jo bhi hai) jo aapko pehchaan na saka!agar kuch galat keh diya ho tho muafi chahtee hoon!heena |
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30th October 2003, 03:37 PM
Bewafa SHaHaR me HumsafaR DHooNDHteiN HaiN
MoHaBBat kaHaN HaiN maGaR DHooNDHteiN HaiN beautiful.. subhanAllah... jaane kahan se laate hain aap itna ghum... khud ke toh nahin.. khareede huay zaroor lagte hain... Gudiya |
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30th October 2003, 03:44 PM
Miss Gudiya,
Duniya mein khushiyan tau bohot logon ko milti hai, aur jab wo khush hote hain tau khshiyan baantne wale bhii bohot aa jaate hain, magar GHUm wo aisi cheez hai jo kisi ko hi milte hain aur Gum hone se insaan zindagi ki doosri surat dekh leta hai. Aur ghum kabhi khareede nahi jaate , wo tau aise hi kisi se pyaar karne mein mil jaate hain, aap bhi kisi se sachcha pyaar karke dekhiye fir ghum kya hai aap jaan jayenge. Good luck and best wishes. Dua karna hamare liye. |
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30th October 2003, 05:56 PM
Kshitij ji,
aap ki rachanaye main padhta hoon.per samay ki kami ke karan, main sabko reply nahi de pata. aap ek achchhe shayar hain, yaha her koi janta hai.bahut achchhi rachana es baar phir aapne pesh ki hai. aapki yah line bahut achchhi lagi. SeekH jayeNGe teRi taRaH Hum BHi NiGaaHeiN BaDaLNa ABHi kHuD ko BaDaLNe waLi NazaR DHooNDHteiN HaiN Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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30th October 2003, 08:52 PM
i m kshitiz ye saHiBa apNa accont close karna BHooL gayiN auR pata NaHI MaiNe JOBHi LIKHa Vo INki id se kaisse post Ho gaya THaa .. actually i m in cafe well i deleted wat i wrote sorry for tht apni GaLti suDhaRne ki koshish kar raha huN
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30th October 2003, 09:05 PM
SHimuL ..
Kaisi HO ... waQt HO Gaya GUftGu kiye Hue aapse KHaiRiyat too ??? JawaB PaDHa aaapka too LaGa THeeK HaiiN , TaReef ke Liye SHukRiya , auR KHaiRIyat taLaB kaRNe ka BHi .. ApNa KHYaaL RaKHiye SaNjoo BHai .. kaise HaiN aap ... BHai DaRD kaB taK RaHeGa iss ka ANDazaa Too NaHi Hume MaGaR jaB taK BHI RaHeGa wayDaa Hai , kshitiz yaHiN RaHeGa .. BHai .. ye BaHut pasaND aaya LaboN parr sirf silwate hii bakii hai kuch Jo muskuraye the_y kabhii uske nishaa hai bakii kuch... Khata huvii jo diwaane huve hum unnke kuch IshaRa unka thaa kuch aur humse gunnaH huva ye kuch aapke juzbaToN pe too Hum HamesHa Hi itmiNaaN RaKHte HaiN auR iss KHyaaL se BHi Hum Zuda NaHi BaHut KHooBsuRat LikHa Hai .. Ek SHikayat Hai aapse ... BHai KaHteiN HaiN Hume auR ye BHi kaHte HaiN ki aap ka LiKHNa Humse ZuDa Hai yakiNaN aap HaR LiHaj se Humse BeHtaR LiKHte HaiN .. Dekhiye BHai Hum BHi kitNI CHoti Baat KaH Gaye yaHaN .. ye too Vo aLfaaz HaiN JO ShayaD HumaRi UNkaHi ki sazza HaiN kaGaz pe utaR utaR ke ZiNDGi guzaaR RaHe HaiN .. KHaiR Aapka juzBaat BeHaD kHooBsuRat THe HamesHa ki taRaH PaDH kaR waHi sukuN miLaa .. APNA KHYaaL RaKHiye .. HeeNa Jee .. Rote Rote JO Hum muskuRaNe LaGe DostoN ke kaRaM yaaD aaNe LaGe KaL JO pocHa UNHe ZiNDGi HaiN KaHaN TOD kaR PHooL Humko DikHaaNe LaGe .. Doo ChizoN pe kaBHi aitBaaR NaHi kaRNa CHaHiye INsaaN auR waQt pe .. Na JaNe kaB BaDaL JayeiN .. auR DaRD BatNaa too INsaaN ki fitRaT Hoti Hai usse kya GiLa KaRNa JO MiLa Vo NaseeB JO MiLeGa VO BHi HumaaRe NaseeB Ka Hi miLeGa fiR kaisi Shikayat .. AB too saRi ShikayateiN ek satH upaR waLe ke samNe Hi kaRenGe ... KHaiR .. Aapka muaafi maNGNa ekDuM GaLat Hai RaHam kaR ke aaaiNDa iss taRah se mat BoLiyeGa KHaRaaB LaGta Hai .. aap HumaRi nazaRoN me izzat RaKHti HaiN too aapke aisa kaHNe se Hume SHaRMiNDGi maHsoos Hoti Hai .. Baki aapka jawaB paDH kaR acHHa LaGa TaReef ke Liye SHukRiya aDaa Hai KHyaaL RakHiye GuDiya Jee .. KHaRiDe too NaHi kaHiN se MaGaR kisi ki meHaRBaNi Hai , aiHsaaN HaiN HumaRi ZiNDGi pe .. SHayaD kaBHi UtaaR Na payeiN auR AGaR Na BHi utaaR paye too GiLaa NaHi aiHssaaN UtaRNe ke Liye NaHi ta umaR maaN Ne ke Liye Hote HaiN HausLa Afzai ke Liye shukRguzaR HaiN KHaiRiyat se RaHiye UmmeHaNi jee .. GumoN se kya GiLaa kaRNa JO KHusHiyaN HumNe Naa payiN MiLi TaQDeeR kucH aisi BHaReiN Raas naa aayiN MuQaDDaR Ne Hume Bhatka Diya uss ZiNDGaaNi pe ki meRe BaN gaye HumDum UDaasi auR taNHai aapse kafi HaD tak ittefaak RakHte HaiN Hum auR Dost aaap kaH kya RaHe HaiN .. pyaaR too HamesHa hi sacHHa Hota Hai Jo kucH BHi JHooth vo pyaaR kaise HO sakta Hai KhaiR .. RaaySHumaRi ka SHukRiya AkaNt Jee BaHut acHHa LaGa aapko yaHaN DekH kaR maiNe BHi aapko BaHut maRtBe PaDha Hai .. aap KHud me BaHut acHHa LIKHNe waLoN me se HaiN .. apNa waQt Diya yaHaN beHaD KHusHi Hui SHukRiya QaBuL faRmaiye KHyaaL RaKHiye |
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31st October 2003, 01:50 PM
UmmeHani ji..
aapne kuch sahi farmaya.. khushiyan baatne waale bohot miljaate hain.. par UmmeHani ji... gham khareede bhi jaate hain... woh yun... ke kisiki mohabbat mey gar itni gehraai ho.. ke wo uske mehboob ke gham na dekh sake.. magar mehboob usay apna bhi na samjhe, apni khushiyaan kya.. gham tak na dena chaahe... toh woh insaan, gham 'khareedne' lagta hai... maayoosi mein.. ya khud ko aur ghum dene lagta hai...in other words uski yaad mey apne aap ko itna bhula deta hai, ke usay apne mehboob ke alava kuch nazar hi nahi aata.... aur wo apni mohabbat apne dil mey liye kabhi galiyaan kabhi chauraahe... toh kabhi alfaaz banake is site pe le aata hai... ye meri thinking hai, koi concept nahin...  isliye gar aap meri baat se sehmat nahin toh muafi chahungi....aapko aapki mohabbat mubarak ho... dua hai aapki mohabbat kamyaab hojaye aur khuda na kare kisi ko bhi kabhi woh din dekhne pade jo kismat ne mujhe dikhaye hain....AmeenAll the best to u too.. kshitiz ji.. bilkul sahi farmaya aapne.. pyaar kabhi jhoota nahi hosakta.. kabhi us 'meharbaan' se mulaqat bhi toh karvaiye..? maine manoj ji se bhi kaha tha ke apni mehbooba ki tareef mey ghazal likh dein.. aap bhi hame shayari karke bataiye naaa.. kaisi dikhti'n hain woh..  Gudiya |
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31st October 2003, 04:11 PM
Kshitiz bhai..
Hamesha ki tarah ye kalaam bhi aapka chhu gaya is dil ko aur hamesha ki tarah aaj phir hum aaye to hain aapki tareef karne ke liye magar der se.. Magar bhai is ghazal ne khoob asar kiya hai dil par.. Aasha hai aise hi likhte rahoge.. chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai... |
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31st October 2003, 09:49 PM
kshitiz ji..
Bahut achaa likha hai ... Gudiya ji aapne bilkul sahi poocha gum khareed ki layee hoo ? Ji mohbbat ka bazar hai janah loog khusiyaan mool de kar gum khareed lete hain ... |
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1st November 2003, 12:17 AM
Dear Kshitiz, keise ho? Ha mujhe pata hein. Aaj kaal online nehi horahi hu lekin asha karti hu bohot jaldh baate hogi. Kaal shayed mein online aayu. Shukriya. Aapna khayal rakhna. God bless you.
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1st November 2003, 12:19 AM
Dear Hani Jee, Aapki baate mujhe achha lagta hein. Kyu ke aap meri dilki baate kehdete hein, ish liye. Shukriya. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you.
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1st November 2003, 12:21 AM
Zamane meh sabhi ko milte hein gum tum na ghabrana yeaha haar raat ki subha hein humdum tum na ghabra na.
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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1st November 2003, 12:42 AM
Janab Kshitiz lucknowi Sahab
der se aane ki maazrat talab karta hoon aap se bahot din beet gaye aap ki nazm ki kya tareef karon bahoton ne kar di hain hum sooraj ko diya nahi dekhane wali aaemako ki harkat nahi kar sakta Aap Ka Dost AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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1st November 2003, 12:48 AM
Shimul jee,
Bohot khushi hui aapko meri baatein achchi lagti hai. Nice to know that. Dua karna mere liye, khuda meri pareshani door kare aur mera khoya pyaar mujhe lauta de.Waise aapka naam kya hai?? Ho sake tau mujhe PM karna. Mein intezar karoongi. Aur jaise aapne likha ki har raat ke baad subah hai tau sach hai ki har raat ki taariqi ke baad subah ka ujaala hamara intezaar karta hai, isliye har ghum ke baad khushiyan zaroor hoti hai. Mein bhi un khushiyon ka intezar kar rahi hoon. Khuda hafiz. Ummehani Shariq. |
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1st November 2003, 06:50 PM
namaste sirkar
kya bhai kasie hoo yar... kya chal raha hai... aare.. bahut khoob likha hai bade bhaai apne.. bahut khoob yar... dil ko chu gayi.. apki .. nazm.. bahut shaandaar hai yar..specially these lines... Bewafa SHaHaR me HumsafaR DHooNDHteiN HaiN MoHaBBat kaHaN HaiN maGaR DHooNDHteiN HaiN yaaD too AB BHi CHALi aati Hai tumHaRi Hum yaDoN me apNa kHoya mukaDDaR DHooNDHteiN HaiN yaaD ka kya Hai aa Hi jauNGa maiN tumHe ..taB KaHoGe Aie CHaaHNe waLe Hum tujHe DHooNDHteiN HaiN aise hi likhte rahiye.. aur mehfil sajte rahiye... bye and take care Zindagi Maut ke pehlu mein soo rai hai... Us bewafa se na pucho meri maut ki wajah... Woh to bus zamane ko dikhane ke liye roo rai hai... |
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1st November 2003, 06:50 PM
namaste sirkar
kya bhai kasie hoo yar... kya chal raha hai... aare.. bahut khoob likha hai bade bhaai apne.. bahut khoob yar... dil ko chu gayi.. apki .. nazm.. bahut shaandaar hai yar..specially these lines... Bewafa SHaHaR me HumsafaR DHooNDHteiN HaiN MoHaBBat kaHaN HaiN maGaR DHooNDHteiN HaiN yaaD too AB BHi CHALi aati Hai tumHaRi Hum yaDoN me apNa kHoya mukaDDaR DHooNDHteiN HaiN yaaD ka kya Hai aa Hi jauNGa maiN tumHe ..taB KaHoGe Aie CHaaHNe waLe Hum tujHe DHooNDHteiN HaiN aise hi likhte rahiye.. aur mehfil sajte rahiye... bye and take care Zindagi Maut ke pehlu mein soo rai hai... Us bewafa se na pucho meri maut ki wajah... Woh to bus zamane ko dikhane ke liye roo rai hai... |
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2nd November 2003, 09:33 PM
VaRNDaR BHai JaB jaB aapko DekHta HuN DiL ko BaDi KHusHi miLti HaiN .. ap aye yaHi BaHut Hai DeR saBeR too INsaaN ki mazBuRiyaN Hoti HaiN .. BHai taReef ke Liye BaHut BaHut SHukRiya .. apNa KHyaaL RaKHiye ..
Joker jee .. aapki Baat BHi BaHut acHHi LaGi .. BaHut GaHRi Baat kaHi aapNe HausLa Afzayi ke Liye BaHut BaHut sHukRiya .. LikHte RaHiye .. apNaa KHyaaL RaKHiye .. SHimuL .. Koi Baat NaHi Aap acHHi HO itNa Hi JaaN kaR BeHaD KHusHi Hi apNa KHyaaL RakHiye SHaRaD BHai .. taKaLLuF ka DamaN CHoRiye aap jaNte HaiN iss DiL ko kis Cheez ki taLaB Hai .. fiR taReef HumaRi CHaHat ke DaRmiyaN kaHaN se Gayi kHaiR ap yaHaN aaye BaHut BaHut SHukRiya .. KHyaaL RakHiye .. MaNisH BHai .. Kaise HaiN aap .. ? UmmeeD kaRta HuN aapki KHaiRiyat ki .. BHai izzat O afzaayi ke Liye ye BHai HamesHa Hi SHukRGuzaaR RaheGa .. aap issi taRaH se aate jate RaHiye .. AuR ApNa KHYaaL RaKHiye .. |
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4th November 2003, 12:25 AM
Doston Likhna sirf likhna nahi hota hai. Insaan Kabhi kabhi jo baatein kah nahi paata hai wo kalam ki zubani bayaan kar deta hai.
Meri aadaton main taareef karna kabhi shumaar na raha magar KHUDA ki Kayenaat main jo cheezein bhi khabil-e-taareef hoti hain unki sadkeeniyon ko chupaane ke gunaah se bachne ke liye kagaz bharne ka kaam kiya karta hoon. Aaj mera khalam aaise hi ek nauo jawaan ke baare main kuch moti bekherna chahata hain Jinke kalaamon main ek anokhi kashish hein, wo kashish jo kisi bhi Banjar dil main Pyar ke Phool khila de, wo kashish jo sawan ki ghata ko wapis laa de, wo Kashish jo Sooraj ko na doobne ke liye majboor kar de , wo kashish jo amaawas ke chaand ko poornima ka chand banne main majboor kar de.... Ji haan main Lucknow ke Mashoor Shayar Janaab KSHITIZ TRIPATHI ke baare main kitaabat kar raha hoon. Haala ki main ek aimaKH ki tarhaan aftaab ko diya dikhane wali harkat kar raha hoon.. Ghazal wo nagma hain jisi gaa ke sunaya jaaye to sunne wale surro main doob jaate hain or padd kar sunaya jaaye to jazbaaton ke raoun main bah jaate hain.Janaab Kshitiz sahab ko Allah ne wo naayaab hunar ataa kiya hai jise baya karne ke liye shayad kainaat ke jamaa alfaaz bhi kam pad jaayenge....... AAP KA DOST |
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4th November 2003, 02:37 PM
aap ka dost ji,
agar kshitiz ji ki kisi ne sahee dhang se tareef kee hai tho woh aap hain!he deserves every single word tht u've sed in his praise!tareef karna bhi ek hunar hai!aur aap is hunar ke mahir lagte hain!shayad hum mein se koi unhein us tareef se nahin nawaz paye jinke woh sahee haqdaar hain!par aaj aapki post padh kar laga ki kuch hadd tak uska haq ata ho gaya!thanx a lot! kshtiz ji , sorry maine jab inka reply padha tho i cudnt abstain myself frm replying!inhone blkl meri dil ki baat bayan kardee!neways agar kuch galat kiya ho tho muafi chahoongi! heena |
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4th November 2003, 05:47 PM
Bewafa SHaHaR me HumsafaR DHooNDHteiN HaiN
MoHaBBat kaHaN HaiN maGaR DHooNDHteiN HaiN O jaNe waLe , ja ke BHuLaaNe waLe , teRe .. NisHaN Hai jaHaN vo DaGaR DHooNDHteiN HaiN DaRD Hota Hai too asHQoN se DHOO Dete HaiN HaR zakHm me sitamGaR tujHe DHooNDHteiN HaiN Kshtiz sahaab, Bahut khoob!!! Bahut hi pyara sa dilkash Gazal likha hai aap ne. Tareff kubool kijiye. Manish. |
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4th November 2003, 09:15 PM
JaNaB aap ka Dost SaHaB.
Ek zaRRa-e-HakeeR ko AaftaaB BaNa Diya aap Ne. Iss KHaak saaR ki ZiNDGi itni izzat O afzaayi ke DaRmiyaN BasaR NaHi kaRti Hai .. Main Hasti E CHiRaaG HuN jiski zinDGi CHaND DostoN ki MauHtaaZ Hai .. DaRkHuast kaRNa CHaHuNGa , MaiN us tareef ke kaBiL katai NaHi tha jo aap ne ataa ki .. Baki Aap ke NiHaayat paak zaHeN or Nafees DiL ka asaR Hai JO ksHitiz aaj BHi mauzooD Hai .. JitNe BHi juzBaat Jo aapki ZuBaN ke jaRiye ALfaazoN me DhaL kaR HumaRi HausLa afzayi me GauHaR ke taRaH CHamke .. UNN see iss DiL ka CHamaN HamesHa RausHaN RaHeGa .. PyaaR ke SaatH .. |
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4th November 2003, 09:29 PM
HeeNa Ji ..
SHayaD maiNe paHLe BHi kaHa THaa aapse ki muaafi jaise Lafz aGaR aapki zuBaaN paR aayeNGe too aap aNDaaz NaHi LaGa sakti HaiN , Hum apNi Hi NazaRoN me kiN HaDoN tak SHaRaMsaaR Ho JayeNge .. Muaafi too siRf ALLaHtaLa se maaNGi jati Hai Vo BHi kisi GuNaaH ke Liye auR KHuDa naa KaRe ki aapke HatHoN kaBHi koi aisa kaam Ho Jisse aapko upaR waLe ke aaGe Safai taLaB kaRNi paDe DauHaRaNa CHaaHuNGa .. ki aap HumaRi NiGaHoN me BaHut izzat RaKHti HaiN issi Naate aaiNDa Hum pe aiHsaaN kaR ke iss taRaH mat kaHiyeGa .. AL Batta Humse kisi taRaH ki BHooL ke Liye HumaRi MUaafi saBHaaL kaR RaKHiyeGa SHayaD Hume kaBHi zaRoRat paD jaaye .. KHuDa Hafiz |
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4th November 2003, 09:35 PM
MaNisH Ji ..
HausLa BaDHaNe ke Liye BaHut BaHut SHukRiya .. Aap Ne apNa Keemti waQt NikaLa yaHaN .. AiHsaaN MaND HuN |
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11th November 2003, 08:55 AM
kshitiz nawaab,
ab itni der se yaha aayi hu ooski maafi maangu ya har wakt ki tarah kamaal pash kiya ooski taarif karu? yahi kahungi jo likha dil ko chhu gaya. |
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11th November 2003, 08:12 PM
MeeNa .. BHai urf . . . KHaiR ChoRiye aBHi kisi Naam se NaHi NawazeNGe aapko ..
Bas iTNa samjhiye ki ye muaafi naaM ke lufz ko apNi RaDDi ki tokRi me DaaL Di jiye Hume kam se kam Hume aapse ye Lafz aDaayGi NaHi CHaHiye .. auR aap yahaN aa GayiN yaHi TaReef Ho gayi HumaRi .. apNI seHat ka kHYaaL RaKHiye MuskuRaHaT ke satH .. |
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