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chahta hoon - 29th March 2004, 10:55 AM

Kuch is tarah karta hoon
mein mohabbat tumsey "merey maalik"
tujhme hi jeeta hoon aur terey
ahsaas mein hi maut chahta hoon

jubaan per aaj bhi aa hi jata hai
na chah kar tera naam
faristhon se nahi mera lena dena koi
per tujhsey phir milna chahta hoon

kyon ab nahi koi barsaat kahin
kyon ankhon ka dariya sookh gaya
phir aajaye woh aur ek jakhm de jaye
ek jakhm aur is jigar per chata hoon

woh chod ke peeche chal diya
per main to waqt se bhi aagey nikagaya
kuch aur nahi ho jaye bus ki
phir waqt se haar jana chata hoon

yeh kis shaher mein hoon
koi jahan apna nahi paraya nahi
tujhsa yaar nahi dushman nahi tujhsa
phir apney shaher laut aana chahta hoon



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29th March 2004, 03:37 PM

that was just a great

dear dost i like a lot your creation
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29th March 2004, 06:06 PM

Keisein hein aap? Hope you are well. I am fine, actually feeling great. This is really so beautiful. Keya baat hein aapka. Aaj mujhein bohot achha laga yeaha par akar. It has been a long time when I was here but now I am here again & it feels great. Aapka tarif karna mere baas ki baat nehi hein. Alfaz nehi milti hein toh mein keya karun! Yunhi likhtein rahiyega. Dilki gehraion se shukriya kabool kijiyega. Khush rahiye yeh Duwaon ke sath izazat chahungi. Take care. God bless you.

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29th March 2004, 06:24 PM

Hi AAkash


meri shayri padney ka shukriya bus jo bhi likha hai woh dil mein aata gaya aur mein likhta gaya .

aapko meri shayri pasand aayee uskey liye ek baar phir tahe dil se shukriya

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29th March 2004, 06:30 PM

Hi Shimul jee


Mein bahut acha hoon & really nice to see u here again tahnks for ek nacheej ki shayri ko itni ijjat deney ke liye
malik se aapki khushiyon ki dua karonga per aap itni taarif likhti hain tau bus kuch puraney pal yaad aajatey hain chaliye meri yaadoon ke dhundley aainey par phir tab laaney ke liye shukriya
Haan aap ko ek baat batana chahengey woh jinkey liye hum yeh sub likhtey hain unhey bhi is dard bhari mehfil mein aana pada humney kuch unki bhi shayri padhi chaliye ab ijajat chhonga
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29th March 2004, 06:42 PM

Shukriya aapka. Lekin meine aapka tarif toh kar nehi paayi. Haan, ek baat bataiyein kishki shayri pada hein aapnein? Humein bhi toh batatein jaaiyein? Would Love to read hers too. Thank you once again for your reply. Khushi huyi bohot. Khush rahiyein. Take care. God bless you.

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29th March 2004, 06:57 PM

kyon ab nahi koi barsaat kahin
kyon ankhon ka dariya sookh gaya
phir aajaye woh aur ek jakhm de jaye
ek jakhm aur is jigar per chata hoon


fantastic!....very nice..bahut acha likha hai....keep it up
byee take care


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tadap uthoon bhi toh zalim teri duhayi na doon
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