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haal -e -dil - 26th September 2006, 11:07 PM

haal-e-dil apna ,ek muddat ke baad aaj likhne baid gaye.
fursat bhi mili hai aur tanhaai bhi,
tumhare prem saagar ki gehraai maapne baid gaye,
ret par jo banaye the sang nakshe kadam,
un nishanon ko ab dhoondne baid gaye,
tumhari nazron me jo dekha tha apna roop,
use aaine me utaarne baid gaye,
jin chandd bheege-2 lamho ko sajaya tha humne,
unhe aaj sawarne baid gaye..
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26th September 2006, 11:12 PM

aap achha likhne lagi ho bas kosish karo uhi aap

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thankss - 26th September 2006, 11:14 PM

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hi - 27th September 2006, 05:43 PM

bhut acha kaha keep writing bhumija take care .......raj.......


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