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aa dil abb to tu samajh ja** -
28th February 2007, 12:04 PM
Aa mera mola ish dil ko tu samjha da
Wo bafafa tha ,abb to tu isha bata da samgha da isha uska harr wada jhuta tha uska wo sath harr mulakat jhuta tha mill gaya sakun usko mera dil dukha ka abb to uski yado ko tu iss dil sa mita da ya khatam kar da mera iss wazod ko ashiki mai name mera bhi tu shamil kar dai abb uska intzarr ko iss dil sa tu mita da bawafa tha wo iss dil ko tu samjha da..... .................................................. ................... katl karna tha to hath kyo thama tha todna tha dil to dil kyo lagaya tha apni barukhi ki wazah to bata ta jaan da data hum bass sath to nibhata......... aapki dost~saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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28th February 2007, 12:11 PM
Tera intzar me ye ankhen ab tak soye nahi,
eak arsa sa ya hasi ya royi nahi, tum say bas ik baat kahni hai mujhay , tum khush raho yah hi bas khushi hai meri.. har haal main hum tum ko bhoola na payegay kui ki zindagani hai meri tum say .. aarzoo kay ish jahan main hum nay bhi ik aarzoo aap ki ki to kya hau jo woh puri na ho saki.... |
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28th February 2007, 02:16 PM
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kai baar ye dil samjhne par samjhta nahi hai. kyun ki ye to bas dard se gujrata hai. uske jane ke dard se uske sath bitaye palo ki yadoin ke dard se, aur bas lagta hai tu jo nahi to kuch bhi nahi bacha hai. par dost yaisa nahi hai.... woh gya par woh to hai na jinke karan ham hai. ham uske karan nahi hai jo chala gya ham to uske karan hai jo har pal hamare sath hai. chahe ham galti kare ya koi acha kaam .yani hamare maa baap...isliye apka wajod unke liye hamesha rahe yahi kahungi. aur unke sapnoin ko leke jeena hi sabse jayada khushi dene wala hoga. keeps smile always dear. sakhi with love शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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28th February 2007, 02:21 PM
trishraj ji,
tum say bas ik baat kahni hai mujhay , tum khush raho yah hi bas khushi hai meri.. har haal main hum tum ko bhoola na payegay kui ki zindagani hai meri tum say .. aarzoo kay ish jahan main hum nay bhi ik aarzoo aap ki ki to kya hau jo woh puri na ho saki.... acha likha hai aapna parr kya khush rahna itna asan hai. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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28th February 2007, 02:23 PM
sakhi ji,
agar aap jasi dost sath ho to harr dard ko bhula daga hum.thik hi kaha hai aapna parr aap bhi janti hai kahna jitna asan hota hai kar pana utna hi muskil. aap har wakt muskurata rahiyaga..........yahi dua karta hai hum aapki dost~saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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28th February 2007, 06:34 PM
Well Written Ajnabi!
In fact there are more pains then we have seen of felt:- aarzu-e-barbad inteha to abhi baki hei laash to ban chuke, dabna to abhi baki hei Intezaam-e-maut kar chuka hun sush Ilzaam-e-zindagi to baki hei Regards Inspired इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं! lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein |
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1st March 2007, 12:20 PM
aarzu-e-barbad inteha to abhi baki hei
laash to ban chuke, dabna to abhi baki hei Intezaam-e-maut kar chuka hun sush Ilzaam-e-zindagi to baki hei acha likha hai aapna.aur hamari shayri aapko pasand aye yan hamari khushkismati hai. "dard kuch asa diya hai jalim tuna........ uss dard ko baya karna ka sabd hi nahi milta". bass uhi hamara sath data rahiyaga ~saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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2nd March 2007, 12:33 AM
ajnabi ji ko ghayal ka salaam,
kuch grammatical mistakes haiN jinhe main nazarandaaz kar raha huN...! uske baad yakeeN maaniye kalaam kaafi ahcha hai...! bahut dard tapkaya hai aapne is kalaam me...! wah to nahi karunga, kyunki dard pe wah karna shayad khud me ek gunaah hai...! haaN par shayad kahin na kHin dukh hi hua is dukh ko dekh kar...! par maiN sushel bhai ki bat se behad sehmat huN, ki jahaaN me aise na jaane kitne dard pade haiN jinke saamne humare dard baune se nazar aate haiN, bas ye mat dekhiye aapne kya khoya hai, balki ye dekhiye ki kya cheezeN paayi haiN aapne is dauraan khoyi hui cheezoN ka gum karne se ahcha hai, jeeti hui cheezoN ki khushi manayeN, aapne pyar khoya ho, par zindagi ne aapko kayi dost v to diye isi baat ki khushi manaaiye...! kuch jyada keh gaya huN agar to maafi ka talabgaar huN, umeed karta huN ki aap aage v yuNhi likti rahiyega...!...! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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2nd March 2007, 01:35 PM
saloni jee namksaar:
dard se bhari aapki yeH kosisH dil ko chhu gayi har lafzoN meiN se dard chHalaktaa hai ..dua karta huN ki dard aapse door raheN..aur khushiyaaN aapke kareeb raheN aise hi kosisH karte rahiye saloni jee aap isse bhi achHa liKh sakti ho.. apna khayal rakeN aur khusH raheN duaoN ke sath ijaazat aapka dost dhaval |
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2nd March 2007, 04:08 PM
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abb uska intzarr ko iss dil sa tu mita da, bawafa tha wo iss dil ko tu samjha da. bahut achaa laga per ke apne ahsaas ko bahut achee tarah pesh kiya hai. mujhe apne likhe ye line yaad aati hai. wo mujhe tanah chor gaya to yah yakee hua, koi sakhsh zaroori nahi kisi ke liye. aap isee tarah likhti rahe or hum dua karege ki aap hamesha hanste or muskurate rahe..amin apna kyaal rakhiye take care byee Aapka dost SHAAN Gam kabi fareb na denge khushi ki tarah. ........Shaan...... |
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2nd March 2007, 07:03 PM
lucky jii,
khushi hui hamko ki aapko humari shayri pasand aye. thik hi kaha hai aapna huma bahut pyarra pyarra dost mila aur yaki maniya hum dukhi nahi .wo to kabhi kabhi yado ka gharokha akho ka aga sa chala jata hai to dil phir sa kisi ko yad kar lata hai. yad karka aa jalim tujha dard badhana ki himat abb nahi.... umid karti hu ki aap asa hi sath data rahaga.aur bahut jaldi hi aapki naye rachna padhna ko milagi.............aur jyada kuch nahi kaha aapna........aap humara dost hai itna to kah hi sakta hai. aapki dost~saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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2nd March 2007, 07:07 PM
dhaval jii,
kasa hai aap? aapka dil ko chu gaye mari rachna ya jaan ka hama apni kosis safal lagi.......... asa hi hamara sath data rahiyaga.yaki maniya aap dosto ka hota hua ya gam huma chu bhi nahi shakta.......... aapki dost~saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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2nd March 2007, 07:21 PM
shaan jii,,
aapko yaha dakh ka bahut khusi hui wo mujhe tanah chor gaya to yah yakee hua, koi sakhsh zaroori nahi kisi ke liye. achi line hai aapka sath raha to yakinan hum issa bhi acha likhaga.aur rahi khush hona ki bat to aap dosto ka sath hai to gamm kasa ho shakta hai huma. bass asa hi sath data rahiyaga. aapki dost~saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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