Udas na hona mere humrahi

[puregold]

Udasi k saye me aaj phir ghira hai koi
wo apna sa hai ya phir humrahi hai koi
dil me har pal jaise ek kasak hai uski
jaane kya soch kar yun khamosh hai koi


uski ye khamoshi kaise chubhti hai dil me
dil ki is chubhan se ab anjaan hai koi
milkar baantege hum khusiyaan,
dukh bhi milkar sahenge hum....
kiye hue is waadon se ab mukar raha hai koi



par yaaro...
sachhi dosti kisi ko rulati nahi,
tum bhale hi bhul jao par ye tumhe bhulati nahi
hum tum sachhe dost hai aaj ye tumhe yaad dila raha hai koi.....

[puregold]

hiii, frnds

I've posted this poem 4 those frnds jo udas bahut rehte hain par ......puchne par hume kuch batate hi nahi......jaise hum unke dost hain wo bhul jate hain.....hope u'll like this...............

[sneha123]

Originally Posted by puregold

Udasi k saye me aaj phir ghira hai koi
wo apna sa hai ya phir humrahi hai koi
dil me har pal jaise ek kasak hai uski
jaane kya soch kar yun khamosh hai koi


uski ye khamoshi kaise chubhti hai dil me
dil ki is chubhan se ab anjaan hai koi
milkar baantege hum khusiyaan,
dukh bhi milkar sahenge hum....
kiye hue is waadon se ab mukar raha hai koi



par yaaro...
sachhi dosti kisi ko rulati nahi,
tum bhale hi bhul jao par ye tumhe bhulati nahi
hum tum sachhe dost hai aaj ye tumhe yaad dila raha hai koi.....

Hey puregold ji,,,,,really i like your poem very much ,,,bahut dard he en chand shabdon me,,,,,,dil per chha jate he ye,,,,,thanks for nice sharing,,,,,

[sneha123]

Originally Posted by puregold

hiii, frnds

I've posted this poem 4 those frnds jo udas bahut rehte hain par ......puchne par hume kuch batate hi nahi......jaise hum unke dost hain wo bhul jate hain.....hope u'll like this...............

Hi. ,,,,,,,,,,I think, aapki baat sach nahi he......sachchi dosti apne sachche dost ko kabhi rulati nahi,,,dost,,,,,its very true !!!!!!!!!!

[puregold]

shukriya sneha ji...............

main itna umda shayr to nahi hoon..........main to bas jo bhi feel karta hoon........ya observe karta hoon.........bas unko apne shabdo me dhal deta hoon...........
jo aap logon tak aasani se pahunche...............

[sannu123]

Hello puregold ji,,,,nice posting ki he aapne,,,,bahut hi umda poem he ,,,,apki feeling ke kya kahne,,,,,really i like your poem,,,,,,,,,,,,

"uski ye khamoshi kaise chubhti hai dil me
dil ki is chubhan se ab anjaan hai koi
milkar baantege hum khusiyaan,
dukh bhi milkar sahenge hum....
kiye hue is waadon se ab mukar raha hai koi".......

[puregold]

shukriya sannu ji.............

kya kare kabhi hota hai aisa hamare saath......ki humare dost udas rehte hain par pata nahi kyun wo batana nahi chahte........shayad unhe lagta hai ki hum bhi preshan ho jayenge.....par wo shayad nahi jante ye unki khamoshi jyada preshan karti hai.......hai na.....

[sameer'shaad']

Acchi koshish rahi aapki janaab... mujhe aapke ehsaas behad acche lage.. likhte rahiyega..

sachhi dosti kisi ko rulati nahi,
tum bhale hi bhul jao par ye tumhe bhulati nahi
hum tum sachhe dost hai aaj ye tumhe yaad dila raha hai koi.....

khush rahiye.

shaad...