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dosti dushmano se ki JaaYe!! -
6th November 2004, 12:58 AM
Doston...
Phirse pesh kar raha hoon...ek khayaal.. jisme tanhaai hai dard hai par dard ka ehsaas nahi...jisme tarap hai par bhujaane waali pyaas nahi...aisi dillagi jo raag ki tarah har din ek mand muskaan liye mujhpar hasti hai....savehraa hota hai raat hoti hai phir ujaala par yeh tasavuur yeh khayalaat chand lamhon se kuch arson se ek jagah aapne paaon failaaye khade hai... dillagi jab bhi hum ko pee jaaye kaise dil se kahe, woh jee jaaye mehfil-e-gham mein rahi tanhaa kismat aisi kismat, kahii na di jaaye mazaa aab bhi hai khush mizaaz seene mein dosti dushmaano, se ki jaaye kaise dil se kahe, woh jee jaaye mein nahi aur sahi humsafar-e-nasiib jurm unke bhi, daad di jaaye chiirag-e-dil aab bhi hai kahi roshan ghar koi aur, 'mast' yunhi ji jaaye dillagi jab bhi hum ko pee jaaye kaise dil se kahe, woh jee jaaye jurm unke bhi daad di jaaye dosti dushmano se ki jaaye Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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6th November 2004, 12:11 PM
HI Mast Bhai,
Aapke yaha waapis paa kar bohot khushi hui. Aur hume ek aur umda kalaam se nawaz ne ke liye shukriya. Bohot hi pyaara laga aapka likha hua. Humari daad qabool kare. Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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Re: dosti dushmano se ki JaaYe!! -
6th November 2004, 12:48 PM
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yaad unko karna dil dukhane ke jaisa sitamgar ki adaye.. jaan le jayen kisi ka kissa raha adhura kyun kahani pyari ki... aao dafna jayeN mere dil main ek toofan si khwaish... bewafai unki, saza mujhe di jaye... tadpu jo main har ek katre ke girne pe maut seene mai, hont tera nam le jaye na milega hume jahan main "saccha_pyar" kisamt ki lakeeron se, isko mita jaye bhaiya ... yahi likh paya aapke noor ki roshni main... kuch koshish ki aapke noor ki roshni main kuch ijhafa ho jaye.... bhaiya bohat accha likha hai aapne ... daad dene ke kabil nahi main aapko... par tareef teh dil se karta hun ... aise hi kahaylat shere karte rehna .. aur apna khayal rakhna ye must hai ... aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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7th November 2004, 01:37 AM
anu saahab,
agar dosti dushmanon se karen ge, to unke hissoN kii dushmani kiske naam hogii? khair, bahot khoob likha hai yaar.. chiirag-e-dil aab bhi hai kahi roshan ghar koi aur, 'mast' yunhi ji jaaye «-- ..damn brother isii taraH dard baaNTe rahiiye "je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa, te bibba saada dil moD de..!" kya karooN? aisa hi hooN maiN.. |
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7th November 2004, 05:32 PM
hi anu bhai
bhut hi acha likha hai aap nai kuch jurm aur dushman aise bi hote hai jo dushman ho ke bi dill ke kareeb lagte hai shiad isliye dil se aiisi sada niklti hai. keep on writing bye |
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17th November 2004, 12:31 AM
Salim bhai...
umeed hai aap aache honge..eid aur diwali ki thakaan bhi dur ho gayi hogi...aur aap har baar ki tarah mere saath rehenge...aage bhi har kadam har pal... Behad shukriya bhai likhte rahiYeGaa -aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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17th November 2004, 12:34 AM
Kunal tumhari jugal bandi mein bhi aapne aap mein ek niraala pyaar hota hai..Bahut khoob likha bhai..
tumhari kabiliyat par aab kya bayaan karun..bas yunhi bhai saath dete rehNaa hamesha ki tarah... -tumhara apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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17th November 2004, 12:40 AM
aman bhai..
aapne is mehfil mein aakar mujhe izzat bakshi..nacheez khushnaseeb hai...koshish rahegi aage bhi ki aapko yunhi bulaata rahun mehfil mein.. sawaal to aapne sangiin khada kar diya hai..ki unke hisson ki dushmani kiske naam hogi...shayad jawaab nahi hai mere paas...isliye baat kismat par chode jaa raha hoon aage bhi yunhi saath dete rehNaa bhai -aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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17th November 2004, 01:11 AM
romana ji....shayad aapne hu bahuu dil ki baat padh li hai....
aage bhi yunhi saath dete rahiYeGaa shukriyaa -aapka panaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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