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Bhookh se ek bachche ko bilakhte dekha
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Bhookh se ek bachche ko bilakhte dekha - 13th March 2008, 12:57 PM

Bhookh se ek bachche ko bilakhte dekha
Sir neecha kiye logon ko nikalte dekha
Humne baat ki jab jab insaniyat ki
Bheedh ko wahan se chante dekha
Khinchne baitha ek din jab tasveer duniya ki
Chitra jisne bhi dekha bigadte deka
Log hume ab tak sharif samajhte the
Aaaj tere ghar se nikalte dekha
Sochi jab jab "fakir" ne gulab ugane ki
Aaspas kaanton ko ugte dekha
   
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17th March 2008, 12:38 PM

mere bhai tu fakir nahi amir hai ......
keep it up....
   
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19th March 2008, 04:16 PM

really yaar aap ko ek baar padhkar bar bar padhne ko ji kar raha hain aap duniya ko duniya ki tasweer dikhate ho badhot khoob dost


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19th March 2008, 10:34 PM

Thank U bhai.
   
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19th March 2008, 10:35 PM

Yaar NIHAR dont u thing that we have the same bent of mind. Wanna meet u some day.

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20th March 2008, 02:11 PM

mat yaki karoo in hath ki lakero ka
nasib to unka bhee hota jenkey donoo hath nahi hotey
   
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29th July 2008, 02:11 PM

when ever you say dear
right now i m in dubai


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pahli baar meri ek game aapke saame
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Post pahli baar meri ek game aapke saame - 29th July 2008, 03:32 PM

main pahli baar ek game aapke saamne lekar aaya hoon saayad aap logo ko pasand aaye game hai kuch bhi likho par last main (pyaar kiya) aana chhaiye.

main suru karu
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29th July 2008, 04:06 PM

Bahut khoob bahut accha likha hai apne... dad hazir hai....


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HI FAKIR SAHEB,
PAHLI BAAR AAPKO PADHA AUR SACH ME BAHUT HI ACHHA LAGA AAPKO PADH KAR..

"Log hume ab tak sharif samajhte the
Aaaj tere ghar se nikalte dekha"


WAH KYA SHER KAHA HAI AAPNE, MAJAA AA GAYA,
PAR RAVITOMAR JI KA AAPKE THREAD ME NEW GAME SHURU KARNA
KUCHH SAMAJH NAHI AAYA.. UNKO NEW THREAD START KARKE GAME KHELNA CHAHIYE WO BHI KISI AUR TOPIC ME.. YE GAME NAHI GAZAL KA FORUM HAI..

KHAIR, AAPKI 4TH LINE ME LAST ME TYPING MISTAKE HAI SHAYAD..
MUJHE LAGTA HAI "CHALTE DEKHA" HONA CHAHIYE THA..
AAP COLOR ME GAZAL POST KARE AUR THODA SA BADAA SIZE ISTEMAAL KARE TO PADHNE ME ACCHA LAGEGA AUR EK BAAR FINAL POST KARNE SE PAHLE PREVIEW JARUR DEKH LIYA KAREin..
CHALTE CHALTE FIR SE AAPKO BADHAAYI..


GOPAL K. DAS
NAMAK BHARKAR MERE ZAKHMO PE TUM KYUN MUSKURATE HO?
MERE ZAKHMO KO DEKHO, MUSKURANA ISKO KEHTE HAIN...!!
   
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