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Thumbs up kisi ko khushiyan mili jahan men,kisi ko gum, - 23rd June 2007, 12:19 PM
ADAAB dosto ek gazal lekar aaplogo ki janib hazir houn,apne khayalato se zaroor nawaze.
zindagi her qadam imtehan hai pyare,
zarre-zarre mei bhi jaan hai pyare.

koi phool bant raha hai koi shool,
sabka apna-apna imaan hai pyare.

mausam jo badal rahen hain apne rang roop,
yeh to sab kudrat ka nizam hai pyare.

kisi ko khushiyan mili jahan men,kisi ko gum,
yeh to sab kismat ka nizam hai pyare.

dunia ko lakiron se kyun bant te ho tum,
sabki zami sabka aasman hai pyare.

"Do Pal Ruka Khushio.n ka Karwan"


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23rd June 2007, 12:50 PM
hi kaseef
kese ho?

bahut khub, bahut khubsurat rachna hai aapki, mujhe aapke dil se nikle hue ehsaas pasand aaye

achchhi koshish rahi aapki aur se

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ADAAB dosto ek gazal lekar aaplogo ki janib hazir houn,apne khayalato se zaroor nawaze.
zindagi her qadam imtehan hai pyare,
zarre-zarre mei bhi jaan hai pyare.

koi phool bant raha hai koi shool,
sabka apna-apna imaan hai pyare.

mausam jo badal rahen hain apne rang roop,
yeh to sab kudrat ka nizam hai pyare.

kisi ko khushiyan mili jahan men,kisi ko gum,
yeh to sab kismat ka nizam hai pyare.

dunia ko lakiron se kyun bant te ho tum,
sabki zami sabka aasman hai pyare.

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dunia ko lakiron se kyun bant te ho tum,
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24th June 2007, 05:40 PM
kisi ko khushiyan mili jahan men,kisi ko gum,
yeh to sab kismat ka nizam hai pyare.

dunia ko lakiron se kyun bant te ho tum,
sabki zami sabka aasman hai pyare.

adaab kashif ji,
aaj pehle baar aapko padhne ka mauka mila,aapka kalaam qaabil-e-tareef hai.bahut zabardast likha aapne.yeh do ashaar bahut pasand aaye.sacchayi se baharpoor aapki is gazal per daad kabool karen.yunhin likhte rahen,khush rahen.

yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
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Love 24th June 2007, 07:51 PM
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ADAAB dosto ek gazal lekar aaplogo ki janib hazir houn,apne khayalato se zaroor nawaze.

zindagi her qadam imtehan hai pyare,zarre-zarre mei bhi jaan hai pyare.

koi phool bant raha hai koi shool,
sabka apna-apna imaan hai pyare.

mausam jo badal rahen hain apne rang roop,
yeh to sab kudrat ka nizam hai pyare.

kisi ko khushiyan mili jahan men,kisi ko gum,
yeh to sab kismat ka nizam hai pyare.

dunia ko lakiron se kyun bant te ho tum,
sabki zami sabka aasman hai pyare.

Wah Bahut Khoob Kashif Sahab Bahut Acchi Rachna Likhi Hai AApne... Esehi Likhte Sahiyega...

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24th June 2007, 08:59 PM
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ADAAB dosto ek gazal lekar aaplogo ki janib hazir houn,apne khayalato se zaroor nawaze.
zindagi her qadam imtehan hai pyare,
zarre-zarre mei bhi jaan hai pyare.

koi phool bant raha hai koi shool,
sabka apna-apna imaan hai pyare.

mausam jo badal rahen hain apne rang roop,
yeh to sab kudrat ka nizam hai pyare.

kisi ko khushiyan mili jahan men,kisi ko gum,
yeh to sab kismat ka nizam hai pyare.

dunia ko lakiron se kyun bant te ho tum,
sabki zami sabka aasman hai pyare.
SALAM kashif sahab bahut khoob likha hay aapne ese hi bazam ki ronaq badate rahey

Zubaan khamosh dil gumsum,
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Smile frnd 4 ever - 25th June 2007, 10:55 PM
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ADAAB dosto ek gazal lekar aaplogo ki janib hazir houn,apne khayalato se zaroor nawaze.

zindagi her qadam imtehan hai pyare,zarre-zarre mei bhi jaan hai pyare.

koi phool bant raha hai koi shool,
sabka apna-apna imaan hai pyare.

mausam jo badal rahen hain apne rang roop,
yeh to sab kudrat ka nizam hai pyare.

kisi ko khushiyan mili jahan men,kisi ko gum,
yeh to sab kismat ka nizam hai pyare.

dunia ko lakiron se kyun bant te ho tum,
sabki zami sabka aasman hai pyare.

ASSALAM WALEKUM KASHIF JI,
KAISE HAIN AAP?


wah kashif ji,kya baat hain
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yakin maniye apka ek_ek ashaar apne aap me kabile tarif hain,

bohot hi achha laga apko padh kar,
aage bhi esi hi koshishe post kiya kijiye,intezar rahega,
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nice - 26th June 2007, 10:35 AM
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ADAAB dosto ek gazal lekar aaplogo ki janib hazir houn,apne khayalato se zaroor nawaze.
zindagi her qadam imtehan hai pyare,
zarre-zarre mei bhi jaan hai pyare.

koi phool bant raha hai koi shool,
sabka apna-apna imaan hai pyare.

mausam jo badal rahen hain apne rang roop,
yeh to sab kudrat ka nizam hai pyare.

kisi ko khushiyan mili jahan men,kisi ko gum,
yeh to sab kismat ka nizam hai pyare.

dunia ko lakiron se kyun bant te ho tum,
sabki zami sabka aasman hai pyare.
kasif bhai ko raj ka adaab......janaab aapne bhut achi koshish ki hai.....isii zameen par jagjit ji ki gayii huyii ek gazal hai jo mujhe behad pasand hai......

ishq ki daastan hai pyare
apni apni zubaan hai pyare....

rakh qadam funk funk kar nadaan
zare zare mein jaan hai pyare.....

tu nahi main hoon main nahi tu hai
ab kush aisa gumaan hai pyare......

apne dil se ham intqaam to lein
ik hasee darmiyaan hai pyare.......

aapne bhi bhut umdaa koshish ki hai so mubaraqbaad deta hoon.....yun hi likhte rahiyega......raj.......

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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26th June 2007, 11:40 AM
kaashif jee AOA:

aik achchhii kosiSh aapkii aor seY paRHne ko milii..khayaalaat pasaNd aaYeN.guzaariSh haii kii yuuNhii bazm ko sajaate raheN..duaa hai Z^aor-e-qalaam aor baRHeN ziyaadaaH..

khuSh raheN..apnaa khayaal raKheN..duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

allaah haafiz

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26th June 2007, 12:00 PM
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ADAAB dosto ek gazal lekar aaplogo ki janib hazir houn,apne khayalato se zaroor nawaze.
zindagi her qadam imtehan hai pyare,
zarre-zarre mei bhi jaan hai pyare.

koi phool bant raha hai koi shool,
sabka apna-apna imaan hai pyare.

mausam jo badal rahen hain apne rang roop,
yeh to sab kudrat ka nizam hai pyare.

kisi ko khushiyan mili jahan men,kisi ko gum,
yeh to sab kismat ka nizam hai pyare.

dunia ko lakiron se kyun bant te ho tum,
sabki zami sabka aasman hai pyare.
kashif kaise ho.....aapki gazal behad pasand aaye....aise hi likhtey raho....ek baat kahu, aapki post par acchey acchey shayro.n ke review dekh kar bahut accha lagta hai.... jab phele din maine aapko aapki shayri mei.n kuch sudhar karne ko kaha tha, to tab mai.n dil hi dil mei.n soch rahi thi ki kahi aap bura na mano....par aaj bahut kushi hoti hai aapko yu aagey badtey dekh kar....kush raho.

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26th June 2007, 02:52 PM
kasif miyaa.n namaskar

kasie hain janab

aapki gazal to wakai main bahut khoobsurat hai janab
or is ek sher ne to kayamat hi la di hai

dunia ko lakiron se kyun bant te ho tum,
sabki zami sabka aasman hai pyare.


daad hazir hai kabool farmiayega

shukriyaa

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hi kaseef
kese ho?

bahut khub, bahut khubsurat rachna hai aapki, mujhe aapke dil se nikle hue ehsaas pasand aaye

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nice one .. Daad hazir hai janab
malli ji ko mera adab aapki daad sar ankho per aapka tahey dil se shukriya ada karta houn men...........apna khayal rakhey..........aapka dost

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Bahot khoobsurat!

Reshma,
SALAM rehma ji kesi hay aap gazal ko padne aur pasand karne ke liye banda aapka shukr guzar hay.............ALLAH HAFIZ

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kisi ko khushiyan mili jahan men,kisi ko gum,
yeh to sab kismat ka nizam hai pyare.

dunia ko lakiron se kyun bant te ho tum,
sabki zami sabka aasman hai pyare.

adaab kashif ji,
aaj pehle baar aapko padhne ka mauka mila,aapka kalaam qaabil-e-tareef hai.bahut zabardast likha aapne.yeh do ashaar bahut pasand aaye.sacchayi se baharpoor aapki is gazal per daad kabool karen.yunhin likhte rahen,khush rahen.
ADAB aapka bahut bahut hamare ashar pasand karne ka aapka reply se beinteha khushi hui,unhi sarahte rahiye.........khush rahiye hamesha..........aapka dost

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TAJ SAHAB KO MERA SALAAM...............bhai bahutr bahut shukriya aapka ki apne mera kalaam pasand kiya unhi hoslaafzai karte rahiye............aap ka kashif

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salaam kashif bhai,

kaise hain aap?

bahut hi ache ehsaas pesh kiye hain aapne. humein bahut ache lage. aakri line to bahut hi achi thi. yuhin likte rahein. apna khyaal rakein aur khush rahein

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ADAAB dosto ek gazal lekar aaplogo ki janib hazir houn,apne khayalato se zaroor nawaze.
zindagi her qadam imtehan hai pyare,
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koi phool bant raha hai koi shool,
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mausam jo badal rahen hain apne rang roop,
yeh to sab kudrat ka nizam hai pyare.

kisi ko khushiyan mili jahan men,kisi ko gum,
yeh to sab kismat ka nizam hai pyare.

dunia ko lakiron se kyun bant te ho tum,
sabki zami sabka aasman hai pyare.

Namaste Kashif Ji, har baar ki tarha aapka andaaze bayaan kuchh aur hai ...bahot khoob ... chand lafzon mai zindagi ka matlab samjhaati hui yeh poetry hume bahot pasand aayi .... bas yunhi likhate rahiye

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apki gazal acchi lagi...simple wordings...gr8...



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kasif bhai ko raj ka adaab......janaab aapne bhut achi koshish ki hai.....isii zameen par jagjit ji ki gayii huyii ek gazal hai jo mujhe behad pasand hai......

ishq ki daastan hai pyare
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rakh qadam funk funk kar nadaan
zare zare mein jaan hai pyare.....

tu nahi main hoon main nahi tu hai
ab kush aisa gumaan hai pyare......

apne dil se ham intqaam to lein
ik hasee darmiyaan hai pyare.......

aapne bhi bhut umdaa koshish ki hai so mubaraqbaad deta hoon.....yun hi likhte rahiyega......raj.......
RAJ Sahab apko meri koshish pasand ayi main apka bahut shukerguzaar hoon
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ADAAB dosto ek gazal lekar aaplogo ki janib hazir houn,apne khayalato se zaroor nawaze.
zindagi her qadam imtehan hai pyare,
zarre-zarre mei bhi jaan hai pyare.

koi phool bant raha hai koi shool,
sabka apna-apna imaan hai pyare.

mausam jo badal rahen hain apne rang roop,
yeh to sab kudrat ka nizam hai pyare.

kisi ko khushiyan mili jahan men,kisi ko gum,
yeh to sab kismat ka nizam hai pyare.

dunia ko lakiron se kyun bant te ho tum,
sabki zami sabka aasman hai pyare.
Kashif bhaaii,

aadaab!

na jaane yeh Ghazal kyon mere nazaro.n gaayeb thee ab tak.. lagbhag 4 mahine pahle aap ne isay post kiya hai aur mujhe aaj paRhne ka mauqa mila hai.. Ghazal kii zamiin aap ne behad pyaari chunii hai.. is zameen par jigar moradabadi saahab ne behad khuub-suurat Ghazal kahii hai... aur aap kashif moradabadi bhii lagta hai kii un ke naqsh-e-qadam par chal rahe hai.n

is zameen par ham ne bhii ek Ghazal kahii thee, bohat pahle aap ko link de raha huu.n waqt mile to paRhiyegaa zaruur... link hai dil nahii.n yeh jaan hai pyaare

aap kii yeh koshish hame behad achchhii lagii... haa.n behtarii kii gunjaaish bhii hai aur kuchh jagah 'takraar' bhii hai lekin likhate likhate yeh sab khaamiyan duur ho jaayegii.. ummeed hai aap aur bhetar likhe.nge...

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aik achchhii kosiSh aapkii aor seY paRHne ko milii..khayaalaat pasaNd aaYeN.guzaariSh haii kii yuuNhii bazm ko sajaate raheN..duaa hai Z^aor-e-qalaam aor baRHeN ziyaadaaH..

khuSh raheN..apnaa khayaal raKheN..duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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kashif kaise ho.....aapki gazal behad pasand aaye....aise hi likhtey raho....ek baat kahu, aapki post par acchey acchey shayro.n ke review dekh kar bahut accha lagta hai.... jab phele din maine aapko aapki shayri mei.n kuch sudhar karne ko kaha tha, to tab mai.n dil hi dil mei.n soch rahi thi ki kahi aap bura na mano....par aaj bahut kushi hoti hai aapko yu aagey badtey dekh kar....kush raho.

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sab ka apna apna iman hai pyare. bahut khoobsurat alfazon se sajaya hai aapne is gazal ko aakhir aap alfaz late kahan se hain achcha laga aapka ye kalam dad kubool kijiye.......rahnuma
   
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ADAAB dosto ek gazal lekar aaplogo ki janib hazir houn,apne khayalato se zaroor nawaze.
zindagi her qadam imtehan hai pyare,
zarre-zarre mei bhi jaan hai pyare.

koi phool bant raha hai koi shool,
sabka apna-apna imaan hai pyare.

mausam jo badal rahen hain apne rang roop,
yeh to sab kudrat ka nizam hai pyare.

kisi ko khushiyan mili jahan men,kisi ko gum,
yeh to sab kismat ka nizam hai pyare.

dunia ko lakiron se kyun bant te ho tum,
sabki zami sabka aasman hai pyare.
kashif jee der se reply karne ke liye maufee chahta hoon.aap ki ghazal ke jazbat hai vo bakhoobi aap ne bayaa.n kiye hai is ghazal men. aur mujhe padh kar behad achha laga ki aap jaise umda shayar is family ke saath jude hue hai. mere jaanib se dher saari daad kabool kare aur yunhii likhate rahe.

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kasif miyaa.n namaskar

kasie hain janab

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or is ek sher ne to kayamat hi la di hai

dunia ko lakiron se kyun bant te ho tum,
sabki zami sabka aasman hai pyare.


daad hazir hai kabool farmiayega

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kaise hain aap?

bahut hi ache ehsaas pesh kiye hain aapne. humein bahut ache lage. aakri line to bahut hi achi thi. yuhin likte rahein. apna khyaal rakein aur khush rahein

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Namaste Kashif Ji, har baar ki tarha aapka andaaze bayaan kuchh aur hai ...bahot khoob ... chand lafzon mai zindagi ka matlab samjhaati hui yeh poetry hume bahot pasand aayi .... bas yunhi likhate rahiye

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apki gazal acchi lagi...simple wordings...gr8...
Aadaab aapne meri gazal padhi aur pasand ki main aapka mamnoon hoon.hoslaafzai ka shukriya

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Kashif Jee!

Sabse Pehle To Maafii Chahuga Aap ki Ghazal par Der Se Reply Karne Ke liye!

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yun to apki sher sare acchey they lekin jinhone dil ko chua ve ye hain..
zindagi her qadam imtehan hai pyare,
zarre-zarre mei bhi jaan hai pyare

dunia ko lakiron se kyun bant te ho tum,
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ADAAB dosto ek gazal lekar aaplogo ki janib hazir houn,apne khayalato se zaroor nawaze.
zindagi her qadam imtehan hai pyare,
zarre-zarre mei bhi jaan hai pyare.

koi phool bant raha hai koi shool,
sabka apna-apna imaan hai pyare.

mausam jo badal rahen hain apne rang roop,
yeh to sab kudrat ka nizam hai pyare.

kisi ko khushiyan mili jahan men,kisi ko gum,
yeh to sab kismat ka nizam hai pyare.

dunia ko lakiron se kyun bant te ho tum,
sabki zami sabka aasman hai pyare.

Dear Kashif,

Bahut khoob likha hai aapne... Aakhiri sher khaas kar mujhe bahut hi pasand aaya... Ek khoobsoorat bayaani ke liye daad kubool karna dost...

Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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dunia ko lakiron se kyun bant te ho tum,
sabki zami sabka aasman hai pyare.

Its Too Good ........Kashif Bahi........Bahut khoob ! dil se daad...khush rahen...

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath.....



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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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