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14th June 2010, 12:01 AM
Media ke bande jaag,
Media ke bande jaag,
Jaag akal ke andhe jaag.
Dum hilana taktwar ke aage chhod de,
Desh hit mein lalach ka har bandhan tod de,
Chhod de lene chande jaag,
Media ke bande jaag.
Maana tera malik ik dukaandaar hai,
Uski chamchi marega to teri haar hai,
Torh de sare fande, jaag,
Media ke bande jaag.
Mana tujhko milti kam mazdoori hai,
Rishwat lena teri kiun majboori hai,
Na kar kaale dhande jaag,
-komal-
Media ke bande jaag.
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14th June 2010, 06:52 AM
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Media ke bande jaag,
Media ke bande jaag,
Jaag akal ke andhe jaag.
Dum hilana taktwar ke aage chhod de,
Desh hit mein lalach ka har bandhan tod de,
Chhod de lene chande jaag,
Media ke bande jaag.
Maana tera malik ik dukaandaar hai,
Uski chamchi marega to teri haar hai,
Torh de sare fande, jaag,
Media ke bande jaag.
Mana tujhko milti kam mazdoori hai,
Rishwat lena teri kiun majboori hai,
Na kar kaale dhande jaag,
-komal-
Media ke bande jaag.
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Komal ji aapne aacha likha hai , koshis aachi hai , likhte rahiyega. dua hai meri
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14th June 2010, 09:34 AM
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Originally Posted by komalparveen
Media ke bande jaag,
Media ke bande jaag,
Jaag akal ke andhe jaag.
Dum hilana taktwar ke aage chhod de,
Desh hit mein lalach ka har bandhan tod de,
Chhod de lene chande jaag,
Media ke bande jaag.
Maana tera malik ik dukaandaar hai,
Uski chamchi marega to teri haar hai,
Torh de sare fande, jaag,
Media ke bande jaag.
Mana tujhko milti kam mazdoori hai,
Rishwat lena teri kiun majboori hai,
Na kar kaale dhande jaag,
-komal-
Media ke bande jaag.
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Namaskaar Komal jee,
Shayri pariwar me.N aapka swagat hai.
Komal jee,
Aapne accha likha hai, aapke khayaalo.N se desh ke prati aapka rukh aur prem saaf jhalakta hai.
Ek change kar rahi hooN,
Agar pasaNd aaye to sucht kijiyega.
Media ke bande jaag,
Jaag akal ke andhe aaj.
Dum hilana taktwar ke aage chhod de,
Desh hit mein lalach ka har bandhan tod de,
Chhod de lene chande aaj,
Media ke bande jaag.
Maana tera malik ik dukaandaar hai,
Uski chamchi marega to teri haar hai,
Torh de sare fande aaj,
Media ke bande jaag.
Mana tujhko milti kam mazdoori hai,
Rishwat lena teri kyo.n majboori hai,
Na kar kaale dhande aaj,
Media ke bande jaag... Regards,
Ritu
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy...
Life smiles at you when you are happy..
But,
Life salutes you when you make others happy!!"
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14th June 2010, 09:44 AM
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Originally Posted by komalparveen
Media ke bande jaag,
Media ke bande jaag,
Jaag akal ke andhe jaag.
Dum hilana taktwar ke aage chhod de,
Desh hit mein lalach ka har bandhan tod de,
Chhod de lene chande jaag,
Media ke bande jaag.
Maana tera malik ik dukaandaar hai,
Uski chamchi marega to teri haar hai,
Torh de sare fande, jaag,
Media ke bande jaag.
Mana tujhko milti kam mazdoori hai,
Rishwat lena teri kiun majboori hai,
Na kar kaale dhande jaag,
-komal-
Media ke bande jaag.
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Parveen ji ye sandesh Media tak pahunchana bahut zaruri tha and mujhe yakeen tha ke keval aap hi aisa kar sakte hain !!
Shukriya !!
likhte raho !!
" Mushkil Bahut hai har waqt 'Rubru-e-Haqeeqat' rehna
Jeene ke liye kuch 'VEHAM' zaruri hain ! "
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14th June 2010, 10:51 AM
dear ritu ji
shukria aapne apnepan se kuchh change kia. lekin ek hammer attack ki tarah jaag ko punch line use kia hai. ummeed hai age chalke bhi aap mere se bavasta rahenge.
with regards,
parveen komal
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14th June 2010, 10:56 AM
dear ritu ji
shukria aapne apnepan se kuchh change kia. lekin ek hammer attack ki tarah jaag ko punch line use kia hai. ummeed hai age chalke bhi aap mere se bavasta rahenge.
with regards,
parveen...
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14th June 2010, 10:57 AM
dear ritu ji
shukria aapne apnepan se kuchh change kia. lekin ek hammer attack ki tarah jaag ko punch line use kia hai. ummeed hai age chalke bhi aap mere se bavasta rahenge.
with regards,
parveen...
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14th June 2010, 11:00 AM
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dear ritu ji
shukria aapne apnepan se kuchh change kia. lekin ek hammer attack ki tarah jaag ko punch line use kia hai. ummeed hai age chalke bhi aap mere se bavasta rahenge.
with regards,
parveen...
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jee bilkul.
Par aapne ek hi reply 2 baar post kar diya hai.
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy...
Life smiles at you when you are happy..
But,
Life salutes you when you make others happy!!"
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14th June 2010, 11:25 AM
main abhi naya hoon bahut si baaton ke lie. kai baar pata hi nahin chalta. vaise hi ho jata hai.
thanks a lot
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17th June 2010, 04:00 PM
komal ji aam aadmi ki bhadash toaapne nikl di, par yakeen maaniye media ke hardcore se jude hone ke kaaran keh sakt huN ki vartmaan ki stithi media ke andar waise suhavni aur ahchi nahiN hai jaisi ki camera ke upar dikhti hai,jaruri nahiN ki aap ghoos leN aur na hi media me paisekam milte hiN, par jo story reporter laye uska credit editor ya channel ka owner kha jata hai ya use bech diya jata hai bina chalaaye, jo sach ko dhoond ke laateN haiN unki jaan ke peeche log pad jaate haiN,na jaane ab v kitne reporters undrground hain, prblm media ke bandoN ki nahiN hai balki media ke commercialisation ki hai, ab agar channel ka malik paise nhin kamayeg to channel chalaayega kaise,salaries kaise deg,kharcha kaise nikaalega...!! bahut sari baateN haiN, par umeed hai ki itna jaan.ne ke bd apki bhadash jarur thodi kam hui hogi...!! gar meri kisi bat se apko bura laga ho to maiN maafi chaahunga....!!
Aapka GHAYAL...!!
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17th June 2010, 07:53 PM
Well i really loved the work by Komal Jee and equally i loved the reply by Ghayal saheb.........Keep going guys.
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...
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18th June 2010, 12:56 AM
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komal ji aam aadmi ki bhadash toaapne nikl di, par yakeen maaniye media ke hardcore se jude hone ke kaaran keh sakt huN ki vartmaan ki stithi media ke andar waise suhavni aur ahchi nahiN hai jaisi ki camera ke upar dikhti hai,jaruri nahiN ki aap ghoos leN aur na hi media me paisekam milte hiN, par jo story reporter laye uska credit editor ya channel ka owner kha jata hai ya use bech diya jata hai bina chalaaye, jo sach ko dhoond ke laateN haiN unki jaan ke peeche log pad jaate haiN,na jaane ab v kitne reporters undrground hain, prblm media ke bandoN ki nahiN hai balki media ke commercialisation ki hai, ab agar channel ka malik paise nhin kamayeg to channel chalaayega kaise,salaries kaise deg,kharcha kaise nikaalega...!! bahut sari baateN haiN, par umeed hai ki itna jaan.ne ke bd apki bhadash jarur thodi kam hui hogi...!! gar meri kisi bat se apko bura laga ho to maiN maafi chaahunga....!!
Aapka GHAYAL...!!
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bura nahi koi na hi ham change hain
media ke hamam me sab nange hain
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18th June 2010, 12:57 AM
bura nahi koi na hi ham change hain
media ke hamam me sab nange hain
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18th June 2010, 01:00 AM
Ham khabron ki khaal utarte hain,
Pahle ganja dhoondte hain
fir baal utarte hain.
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18th June 2010, 01:30 AM
hahahahahaha, aapko lagata hai media se bahut jyada chiddh hai,shayad meri nakaamyabi ya majburi kahiye ki maiN aapko androoni cheezon se chaah kar ru-ba-ru nahin kara saka....!! koi nahiN, ek aam aadmi ki soch ke hisab se aap bhi galat nahiN haiN, pehle maiN bhi kuch aisa hi sochta tha jab iska hisaa nahiN tha,par haqeeqat jab dekhi aur sahi tab pata chala baat kitni gehri aur badi thi....!!
waise mishaal me maza nahin aaya, aapko kehna chahiye tha ki ganja dhundte haiN unke baal ugaate haiN aur fir un baalon ko utaarte haiN...!!
carry on writing maam...!!
Aapka GHAYAL...!!
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18th June 2010, 10:58 AM
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hahahahahaha, aapko lagata hai media se bahut jyada chiddh hai,shayad meri nakaamyabi ya majburi kahiye ki maiN aapko androoni cheezon se chaah kar ru-ba-ru nahin kara saka....!! koi nahiN, ek aam aadmi ki soch ke hisab se aap bhi galat nahiN haiN, pehle maiN bhi kuch aisa hi sochta tha jab iska hisaa nahiN tha,par haqeeqat jab dekhi aur sahi tab pata chala baat kitni gehri aur badi thi....!!
waise mishaal me maza nahin aaya, aapko kehna chahiye tha ki ganja dhundte haiN unke baal ugaate haiN aur fir un baalon ko utaarte haiN...!!
carry on writing maam...!!
Aapka GHAYAL...!!
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Ghayal sahib Namskaar ..
Muafi chahta hoon par aapke comments padh padh ke mujhe akhir likhna pada ..
aap ne apne comments mein kayi baar Komal ji ke saamne ' AAM AADMI ' ka zikar kiya, shayad aap komal ji se achi tarah ROOBROO nahi hue hain - unka TRAINEE hone ke naate main khud hi aapko bta deta hoon unke bare mein ek baat jo shayad vo kabhi na btaye -- WELL MR. PARVEEN KOMAL ji is a prominent personality of MEDIA, He is President of Press Club and also an International Chairman of All India Human Rights Organization of Police Public Press. Unke 3 News WEBPORTALS chal rahe hain Direct from U.S.A.. and personally main khud maanta hoon ke MEDIA ke baare mein unhe bhi achi khaasi jaankari hai.agar kabhi samay laga to unse itminaan se baat karke dekhiye aap khud samajh jayenge k vo media mein rehkar aam aadmi se kitna jude hue hain. muafi chahunga agar kuch bura laga ho .. khush rahen !!
aapka dost Abhinav
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Jeene ke liye kuch 'VEHAM' zaruri hain ! "
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18th June 2010, 10:59 AM
aur sahib ek baat batani to bhool gya ke Har jagah media ka haal ek jaisa nahi hota !!
" Mushkil Bahut hai har waqt 'Rubru-e-Haqeeqat' rehna
Jeene ke liye kuch 'VEHAM' zaruri hain ! "
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18th June 2010, 12:24 PM
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Media ke bande jaag,
Media ke bande jaag,
Jaag akal ke andhe jaag.
Dum hilana taktwar ke aage chhod de,
Desh hit mein lalach ka har bandhan tod de,
Chhod de lene chande jaag,
Media ke bande jaag.
Maana tera malik ik dukaandaar hai,
Uski chamchi marega to teri haar hai,
Torh de sare fande, jaag,
Media ke bande jaag.
Mana tujhko milti kam mazdoori hai,
Rishwat lena teri kiun majboori hai,
Na kar kaale dhande jaag,
-komal-
Media ke bande jaag.
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aapka thought process bahut acha hai
variety hai sahi maiN
soch ka dayra bhi hai
ye sab kabhi mujhme bhi tha
keep it
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18th June 2010, 12:31 PM
thanks janu ji,
ummeed hai isi tarah mera housla badhate rahenge.
nachheej ki cheej ki taraf dhyan dene ke lie shukria huzoor.
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23rd June 2010, 11:43 AM
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Ghayal sahib Namskaar ..
Muafi chahta hoon par aapke comments padh padh ke mujhe akhir likhna pada ..
aap ne apne comments mein kayi baar Komal ji ke saamne ' AAM AADMI ' ka zikar kiya, shayad aap komal ji se achi tarah ROOBROO nahi hue hain - unka TRAINEE hone ke naate main khud hi aapko bta deta hoon unke bare mein ek baat jo shayad vo kabhi na btaye -- WELL MR. PARVEEN KOMAL ji is a prominent personality of MEDIA, He is President of Press Club and also an International Chairman of All India Human Rights Organization of Police Public Press. Unke 3 News WEBPORTALS chal rahe hain Direct from U.S.A.. and personally main khud maanta hoon ke MEDIA ke baare mein unhe bhi achi khaasi jaankari hai.agar kabhi samay laga to unse itminaan se baat karke dekhiye aap khud samajh jayenge k vo media mein rehkar aam aadmi se kitna jude hue hain. muafi chahunga agar kuch bura laga ho .. khush rahen !!
aapka dost Abhinav
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Abhinav sahab tak mera salaam pahuNche,
janaab ye dekh kar khushi hui ki aap jinse seekh rahe haiN unki itni izzat karte haiN.. par maiN bas ek baat kahunga, ki press club ke 2009-2010 ke tenure me Parvez Ahmed sahab chairman haiN, waise ye behas ke mudde nahiN haiN, maiN maanta huN mujhe medi me jyada waqt nahiN hua par maiN apni khud ki ek nayi soch rakhne me yakeen karta hooN, hum ye keh ke ki media bura hai,use nahiN sudhar sakte,balki hume kuch aisa karna hoga ki ye badle,aur uske liyr sahi waqt tak rukna bahut jaruri hai...ye bas aapki praveen sahab ki aur meri soch ka masla hai, shayad meri soch thodi alag hai, waise jaankariyaaN mujhe kuch khaas nahiN,na hi jyada media ki samajh hai aur na hi likhne k bas ghumte firte padh likh lete haiN thoda sa....
Haan ek bat aur media ka haal har desh me kamovesh ek jaisa hi hota hai bas har media house ki apni priorities,principles aur working style se thoda badlaav laate haiN...!!
Agar meri kisi bhi bt se aapki ya praveen sahab ko thes pahuNchi ho to maiN maafi ka talabgaar hooN, nausakhiya aur chota samajh kar maaf kar dijiyega.....!!
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