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bazeecha-e-atfaal... - 8th August 2010, 02:27 PM

aadaab dosto,

Ghalib Sahaab ka yeh sher mere dil ke bahot kareeb hai..jab bhi padhta hun aisa lagta hai ab kisi aur ko kuch kehne ki zaroorat nahi..ek gustaakhi kar raha hun..uss sher ke khyaal ko ek aur sher se kehna chahunga..

bazeecha-e-atfaal hai duniyaa mere aage
hota hai shab-o-roz tamaasha mere aage

woh hai jo usse hi ukkta gaye haiN 'Ghalib'
woh hai jo karte haiN dikhaawa mere aage


duaoeN ke saath,
aapka dost,

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8th August 2010, 02:56 PM

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bazeecha-e-atfaal hai duniyaa mere aage
hota hai shab-o-roz tamaasha mere aage

woh hai jo usse hi ukkta gaye haiN 'Ghalib'
woh hai jo karte haiN dikhaawa mere aage


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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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9th August 2010, 01:17 AM

Bismil Sahab AadaaB!

Kaise hai janab ?

Yaar aapse baat huye bhi arsa bit gaya aur aapki koi kalaam padhe Bhi lamba waqt ho gaya.....

kuch likhiye sahab aur bazm ko roshan kariye ....... ab ilteja e guzarish hi kar sakte hai aur ummid hai aap jaldi hi puri kareNge...

Sher to behad gazab ka hai, behad gehrai hai janab kya hua kisne dhoka diya Jo aisa khayaal aa gaya....

Khair aapna khayaal rakhiye ....
Khush rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez....


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