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Apni Zindagi se na kar juda mujhe - 21st May 2010, 05:36 PM

Apni Zindagi Se Na Kar Juda Mujhe
Ya Fir Zindagi Bhar So Jaane Ki Sja De De

Tumhari Yaado Se Door Jaana Hai Mushkil Ab
Mujhe Bhi Gero Ki Panaaho Me Jaane Ki Wajah De De

Kabhi To Hogi Kisi Ki Inaayat Mujh Par Bhi
Ae Bewafa Jhooti Wafa Jataane Ki Ada De De

Mai Yaad Me Teri Tadpu Na Raat Bhar
Tu Mujhe Bhool Jaane Ki Khata De De

Tu Mjhse Door Jaane Ki Koshish Na Kar
Bas Mujhe Paas Na Aane Ki Wajah De De

Gar Mumkin Ho Ske, To Do Pal Ka Sath Hi De
Aur Kuch Pal Zindagi Jeene Ki Rja De De


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21st May 2010, 05:43 PM

Kavita jee:

namaste!

koShiSh bahot achChhi hay.. yuuNhi liKhate raheN aage bhee! mehfil ko rauShan karte rahiye!

daad!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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namaste!

koShiSh bahot achChhi hay.. yuuNhi liKhate raheN aage bhee! mehfil ko rauShan karte rahiye!

daad!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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21st May 2010, 05:49 PM

Kavita Ji.....Aapki tehreer ke ehsaas acche lage mujhe.....kuch lines badi ho gai...kahi kahi qaafiye me gadbad bhi lagi mujhe....woh sab ab likhte likhte aur samajhte samajhte theek ho jayega....koshish acchi ki hai aapne....aage aur behtar koshish ke saath aate rahen....khush rahen...

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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21st May 2010, 06:04 PM

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Kavita Ji.....Aapki tehreer ke ehsaas acche lage mujhe.....kuch lines badi ho gai...kahi kahi qaafiye me gadbad bhi lagi mujhe....woh sab ab likhte likhte aur samajhte samajhte theek ho jayega....koshish acchi ki hai aapne....aage aur behtar koshish ke saath aate rahen....khush rahen...

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
Shukriya Naresh ji,,
Mai dhyan rakhungi aage se... aur behtar likhne ki koshish karungi.....
bs... aap sab mera sath isi trah dete rehna........


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21st May 2010, 06:23 PM

Kavita jee,,

Na jane kyuN mujhe to aapki shayri acchi lagi .. haalaNki kamiya hai .. aur likha bhi kaccha pakka sa hai .. par kahin na kahin is post pe masoomiyat jyuN ki tyuN hai ... mujhe acchi lagi aapki peshkash .. umeed karunga aap Shayri ke qaide seekhne ki koshish karte hue bohat accha likheNgi...

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21st May 2010, 08:10 PM

Pata nahi kya baat hai jo batein mere dimag me chal rahi hoti hai woh hubahoo lafzo ki shakl me Kunaal saheb ki zubaa.N se ada ho jati hai..........main bas Kunaal saheb ki bato me itna sa addition karuga ke 2nd sher pasandida raha.

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22nd May 2010, 10:08 AM

Kunaal nd Sajid Ghayel ji,

aap dono ko bahut bahut dhanyawad...........
koshish abhi jaari hai aur mai behater likhne ki puri koshish karungi......
bas aap log mera sath dete rahiye.... meri kamiya mujhe btaate rahiye.. taki mai usme sudhar la sku.........


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Ya Fir Zindagi Bhar So Jaane Ki Sja De De

Tumhari Yaado Se Door Jaana Hai Mushkil Ab
Mujhe Bhi Gero Ki Panaaho Me Jaane Ki Wajah De De

Kabhi To Hogi Kisi Ki Inaayat Mujh Par Bhi
Ae Bewafa Jhooti Wafa Jataane Ki Ada De De

Mai Yaad Me Teri Tadpu Na Raat Bhar
Tu Mujhe Bhool Jaane Ki Khata De De

Tu Mjhse Door Jaane Ki Koshish Na Kar
Bas Mujhe Paas Na Aane Ki Wajah De De

Gar Mumkin Ho Ske, To Do Pal Ka Sath Hi De
Aur Kuch Pal Zindagi Jeene Ki Rja De De
Kavita jee,
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"gar tujhe pasaNd nahi,mera tere thread per repyly karna,
Tu likhna mat chhoD,bus mujhe reply na karne ki vajah de de.."

bahut bahut khoob.
Yeh Shuruwat hai.....to aage to aap bahut accha likhenGi. Aisa mujhe vishvas hai.
duao.n ke sath,
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Apni Zindagi Se Na Kar Juda Mujhe
Ya Fir Zindagi Bhar So Jaane Ki Sja De De

Tumhari Yaado Se Door Jaana Hai Mushkil Ab
Mujhe Bhi Gero Ki Panaaho Me Jaane Ki Wajah De De

Kabhi To Hogi Kisi Ki Inaayat Mujh Par Bhi
Ae Bewafa Jhooti Wafa Jataane Ki Ada De De

Mai Yaad Me Teri Tadpu Na Raat Bhar
Tu Mujhe Bhool Jaane Ki Khata De De

Tu Mjhse Door Jaane Ki Koshish Na Kar
Bas Mujhe Paas Na Aane Ki Wajah De De

Gar Mumkin Ho Ske, To Do Pal Ka Sath Hi De
Aur Kuch Pal Zindagi Jeene Ki Rja De De
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Ritu ji,
Aapka dil se shukriya ki aap yaha aai.... aur reply kiya......... mujhe pasand hai jab koi mujhe aur acha likhne ke liye prerit karta hai......... aur mujhe bilkul b bura nahi lgta........smjhane ki liye hi sahi... itna to hai aap sab mujhe par dhyaan to de rhe ho...... Aap sab ka pyar aur sath isi trah milta rhe to mai jarur acha likhungi......


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bhout khoob kavita ji .........achci koshish hai ..aisay hi likhti rahiyega .....god bless u ........aapka vichitra

Vichitra ji,

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kavita ji,

aapke ehsaas achhe lage, byaN karne ka tariqa bhi achha laga...
likhti rahiye, jo kuchh khamiyaN nazar aa rahi haiN....vo sirf likhne se hi jayeNgi...
aapke paas sochne ki zameen hai, alfaaz bhi haiN...koshish zari rakhiyega....

meri daad qubuul kijiyega...

aapka dost,
vikram....


'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
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kavita ji,

aapke ehsaas achhe lage, byaN karne ka tariqa bhi achha laga...
likhti rahiye, jo kuchh khamiyaN nazar aa rahi haiN....vo sirf likhne se hi jayeNgi...
aapke paas sochne ki zameen hai, alfaaz bhi haiN...koshish zari rakhiyega....

meri daad qubuul kijiyega...

aapka dost,
vikram....
Vikram ji,
Aapki daad dil se qubool hai ji.......... koshish zari rahegi.....!!!


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kavita ji kese hai app?

apki gazal aaj pehli baar padhi aur dil me utar gayi.
kyu ki me itni achi gazal likh nahi sakta magar kisi ko ache se padh sakta hu.

apki ye line muje bahut hi pasnad aayi hai.

Tu Mjhse Door Jaane Ki Koshish Na Kar
Bas Mujhe Paas Na Aane Ki Wajah De De



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kavita ji kese hai app?

apki gazal aaj pehli baar padhi aur dil me utar gayi.
kyu ki me itni achi gazal likh nahi sakta magar kisi ko ache se padh sakta hu.

apki ye line muje bahut hi pasnad aayi hai.

Tu Mjhse Door Jaane Ki Koshish Na Kar
Bas Mujhe Paas Na Aane Ki Wajah De De


khush rahiye hamesha dua ke sath

m fine dinesh ji......
aapne mujhe padha aur saraaha,,,,, iske liye dil se shukriya.....


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Apni Zindagi Se Na Kar Juda Mujhe
Ya Fir Zindagi Bhar So Jaane Ki Sja De De

Tumhari Yaado Se Door Jaana Hai Mushkil Ab
Mujhe Bhi Gero Ki Panaaho Me Jaane Ki Wajah De De

Kabhi To Hogi Kisi Ki Inaayat Mujh Par Bhi
Ae Bewafa Jhooti Wafa Jataane Ki Ada De De

Mai Yaad Me Teri Tadpu Na Raat Bhar
Tu Mujhe Bhool Jaane Ki Khata De De

Tu Mjhse Door Jaane Ki Koshish Na Kar
Bas Mujhe Paas Na Aane Ki Wajah De De

Gar Mumkin Ho Ske, To Do Pal Ka Sath Hi De
Aur Kuch Pal Zindagi Jeene Ki Rja De De

kavitajee
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bade sundar ahsaas hain.......dil se daad.........yun hi likhti rahen sudhaar apne aap aa jaayega........prem ke dard ko vyakt karna aasaan nahi hai
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bade sundar ahsaas hain.......dil se daad.........yun hi likhti rahen sudhaar apne aap aa jaayega........prem ke dard ko vyakt karna aasaan nahi hai
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Mai bahut khush hu ki aapne mujhe padha aur saraaha...... mujhe aapki sabhi najam pasand hai....jo ab tak maine padhi hai yaha.....

Dil se shukriya....
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Mai Yaad Me Teri Tadpu Na Raat Bhar
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Tu Mjhse Door Jaane Ki Koshish Na Kar
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Tu Mjhse Door Jaane Ki Koshish Na Kar
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Ehsaas acche haiN Kavita ji.............
Dhanyawaad Zainy ji,,,,,
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Kavita jee,

Ek aur bahut hi aachi ghazal ....

likhtii rahe...

take care

duaaon ke saath

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Kavita jee,

Ek aur bahut hi aachi ghazal ....

likhtii rahe...

take care

duaaon ke saath

aapki

mandeep
Shukriya Mann ji............................


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hmmmm....Kavita mujhe to yakeen hi nahi ho raha hai k ye tumne likha hai...phri wo kavita koon hai jise main janta hoon...

waise tumhe dekh kar esa lagta to nahi hai k tum itni dil-jali ho

mujhe ye sher bahut pasand aaya hai....

shayri-e-dard se bahar nikal kar bhi kuch likho...
aur haan....taliyaaN tap..tap...tap...specially tumhare liye tumhe bahut pasand hai na

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hmmmm....Kavita mujhe to yakeen hi nahi ho raha hai k ye tumne likha hai...phri wo kavita koon hai jise main janta hoon...

waise tumhe dekh kar esa lagta to nahi hai k tum itni dil-jali ho

mujhe ye sher bahut pasand aaya hai....

shayri-e-dard se bahar nikal kar bhi kuch likho...
aur haan....taliyaaN tap..tap...tap...specially tumhare liye tumhe bahut pasand hai na

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Thanx secret ji, Tap tap taaliyoo ke liye Aise hi tap tap krte rahiye...

Shayri-e-dard se bahar bhi likhungi.. abhi w8 kro...


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