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Sochti hu, hai viswasghat - 1st May 2010, 10:15 AM

Sochti hu, hai viswasghat, fir bhi kiye ja rahi hu
K, khud se khud ko bhulaake jiye ja rahi hu
Dukho k is daldal se ladna hai mushkil
aankhe band kiye fir b chali ja rahi hu
na darr hai mout ka, na khushi jeene ki
fir b khud se swaal mai kiye ja rahi hu
Sochti hu, hai viswasghat, fir bhi kiye ja rahi hu
Jane na, kaha le jaayegi mujhe meri kismat
bina soche smjhe mai badi ja rahi hu
kabhi to aayegi jeevan me khushiya
unhe soch soch ke mai muskra rahi hu
Janti hu k ye dukho ka zehar
fir b khushi se piye ja rahi hu
Sochti hu, hai viswasghat, fir bhi kiye ja rahi hu
K, khud se khud ko bhulaake jiye ja rahi hu


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Sochti hu, hai viswasghat, fir bhi kiye ja rahi hu
K, khud se khud ko bhulaake jiye ja rahi hu

Dukho k is daldal se ladna hai mushkil
aankhe band kiye fir b chali ja rahi hu

na darr hai mout ka, na khushi jeene ki
fir b khud se swaal mai kiye ja rahi hu

Jane na, kaha le jaayegi mujhe meri kismat
bina soche smjhe mai badi ja rahi hu

kabhi to aayegi jeevan me khushiya
unhe soch soch ke mai muskra rahi hu

Janti hu k ye dukho ka zehar
fir b khushi se piye ja rahi hu

Sochti hu, hai viswasghat, fir bhi kiye ja rahi hu
K, khud se khud ko bhulaake jiye ja rahi hu
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Naresh ji,

Mujhe aapki kisi baat ka bura nahi lga.... balki mai khud chah rahi thi koi mujhe btaaye ki kaise mai behtar likh skti hu.... mujhe likhne ka shhok to hai but sahi se likhna nahi aata..... aapne mujhe itne ache tareeke se btaaya uske liye bahut bahut dhanyawad..... mai aapki baato par jarur gaur karungi.... aur apni gajal ya shayari ko aur achi trah likhne ki koshish karungi...... mujhe aap jaise dosto ki jarurat hai jo meri andar ki khamiyo ko door karne me meri help kare......

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kavita ji,

aapki rachna mujhe behad pasaNd aayee...
aapke sochne ki ek disha hai, jo ki behad zaroori hoti hai..
jis tarha aapne ek ehsaas meiN gehra utar kar, use byaaN kiya hai wo qabil-e-tareef hai, naresh saheb ki rae zaroor maniega...jald hi aap behtreen likhne lageNgi...
aapki i's koshish par daad haazir hai, qubuul kijiyega...
koshish zari rakhiye...

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koSiSh Khuub rahi.N aur ehsaas mujhe bahot pasaNd aaye.N... Yu.Nhi mehfil sajaate rahiye.. liKhte rahe.N aage bhee... dil se daad!

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kavita ji,

aapki rachna mujhe behad pasaNd aayee...
aapke sochne ki ek disha hai, jo ki behad zaroori hoti hai..
jis tarha aapne ek ehsaas meiN gehra utar kar, use byaaN kiya hai wo qabil-e-tareef hai, naresh saheb ki rae zaroor maniega...jald hi aap behtreen likhne lageNgi...
aapki i's koshish par daad haazir hai, qubuul kijiyega...
koshish zari rakhiye...

vikram
Shukriya Vikram ji,

mai puri koshish karungi aur achi trah likhne ki........


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namaste!

koSiSh Khuub rahi.N aur ehsaas mujhe bahot pasaNd aaye.N... Yu.Nhi mehfil sajaate rahiye.. liKhte rahe.N aage bhee... dil se daad!

KhuSh rahe.N... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.N

duaao.N ke saath ijaazat

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maine aapki rachnaaye b padhi hai.... mujhe bahut pasand aai..... aap sab se hi thoda thoda sikh kar likhne ki koshish ki...... baki aap sab ka sath raha to mai apni koshish me kamyaab rahungi......


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Sochti hu, hai viswasghat, fir bhi kiye ja rahi hu
K, khud se khud ko bhulaake jiye ja rahi hu
Dukho k is daldal se ladna hai mushkil
aankhe band kiye fir b chali ja rahi hu
na darr hai mout ka, na khushi jeene ki
fir b khud se swaal mai kiye ja rahi hu
Sochti hu, hai viswasghat, fir bhi kiye ja rahi hu
Jane na, kaha le jaayegi mujhe meri kismat
bina soche smjhe mai badi ja rahi hu
kabhi to aayegi jeevan me khushiya
unhe soch soch ke mai muskra rahi hu
Janti hu k ye dukho ka zehar
fir b khushi se piye ja rahi hu
Sochti hu, hai viswasghat, fir bhi kiye ja rahi hu
K, khud se khud ko bhulaake jiye ja rahi hu
bahut acchi lagi koshish aapki
aap naturally wazn ke kareeb kareeb likhti hai....
quite rhythmic flow of thoughts..........
andaz bhi accha laga bahut apka.........
aur apka matla agar thoda andar jaake socho to kafi touchy hai
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Kavita jee Aadaab!

Bahut achchi lagi aapki koshish..... aapne jo paheli line kahi hia apne aap mein
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Dil se daad hazir hai .... Likhati rahiye...

Aap bahut jald hi bahut achcha likhengi yeh aapki is kalaam se saaf hai....

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Sochti hu, hai viswasghat, fir bhi kiye ja rahi hu
K, khud se khud ko bhulaake jiye ja rahi hu


Nice work Kavita jee......


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kavita vaqaui mai bahut sundar ban gayi hai.......zidd saheb ki baato main bhi vazan hai...gaur farmaye.....magar ehsaasso ka gala na ghote

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bahut acchi lagi koshish aapki
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quite rhythmic flow of thoughts..........
andaz bhi accha laga bahut apka.........
aur apka matla agar thoda andar jaake socho to kafi touchy hai
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Thanks a lot Zidd ji...........................


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Kavita jee Aadaab!

Bahut achchi lagi aapki koshish..... aapne jo paheli line kahi hia apne aap mein
woh bahut gehri kahi hai.... ek misra hi ek sher ke baraber ho gaya... baki sabhi
lines aapne bahu achchi kahi hai aur aapki soch aapki likhawat mein nazar aa
rahi hai.... bahut khoob....

Dil se daad hazir hai .... Likhati rahiye...

Aap bahut jald hi bahut achcha likhengi yeh aapki is kalaam se saaf hai....

Keep writting .....
Khuda Hafez.....

Dil se shukriya Khawaish ji......................


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Nice work Kavita jee......


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Sochti hu, hai viswasghat, fir bhi kiye ja rahi hu

K, khud se khud ko bhulaake jiye ja rahi hu

na darr hai mout ka, na khushi jeene ki

fir b khud se swaal mai kiye ja rahi hu
Kavita.......jitni tareef karuN tumhari utna hi kam hoga....tum jaisi ho tumhe padhkar lagta nahi k ye sach mein tumne likha hoga....
ek baar fir se tumhare liye wohi tap-tap-tap...taliyaaN !!!

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Sochti hu, hai viswasghat, fir bhi kiye ja rahi hu
K, khud se khud ko bhulaake jiye ja rahi hu
Dukho k is daldal se ladna hai mushkil
aankhe band kiye fir b chali ja rahi hu
na darr hai mout ka, na khushi jeene ki
fir b khud se swaal mai kiye ja rahi hu
Sochti hu, hai viswasghat, fir bhi kiye ja rahi hu
Jane na, kaha le jaayegi mujhe meri kismat
bina soche smjhe mai badi ja rahi hu
kabhi to aayegi jeevan me khushiya
unhe soch soch ke mai muskra rahi hu
Janti hu k ye dukho ka zehar
fir b khushi se piye ja rahi hu
Sochti hu, hai viswasghat, fir bhi kiye ja rahi hu
K, khud se khud ko bhulaake jiye ja rahi hu

Kavita ji,
bahut khoob..... is umdaa kalaam pe dil se daad hazir hai.... likhte rahe...khush rahiye....


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kavita jee
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sundar ehsaason ke liye dil se daad
duaon ke saath


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Kavita.......jitni tareef karuN tumhari utna hi kam hoga....tum jaisi ho tumhe padhkar lagta nahi k ye sach mein tumne likha hoga....
ek baar fir se tumhare liye wohi tap-tap-tap...taliyaaN !!!

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bahut khoob..... is umdaa kalaam pe dil se daad hazir hai.... likhte rahe...khush rahiye....
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sundar ehsaason ke liye dil se daad
duaon ke saath
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Aapka dil se shukriya... .... Aise hi saath dete rahiye...


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