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Sad Kahi Kuch Kami Hai Tere Bager :( - 27th August 2010, 12:04 PM

Kahi kuch kami hai tere bager...
Na rang hai na roshni hai tere bager...

Maousam bhi karvat ab badal raha hai
Waqt apni raftaar se chal raha hai
Bas dhadkan meri thami hai tere bager

Kahi kuch kami hai tere bager...

Ho gye kathin ab mere liye raste
Ujaale hi ujaale hai duniya ke vaste
Low mere jivan ki thami hai tere bager

Kahi kuch kami hai tere bager...

Milta nahi mujhse parwaana ab mera
Khushiyo ko bhi dikhta nahi thikaana ab mera
Mere hi ghar me gami hai tere bager

Kahi kuch kami hai tere bager...

Chu kar mujhe hawa bhi kehti kuch nahi
Sath mera mout bhi deti ab nahi
Jeene ki aas bhi nahi hai tere bager

Kahi kuch kami hai tere bager...


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Kahi kuch kami hai tere bager...
Na rang hai na roshni hai tere bager...

Maousam bhi karvat ab badal raha hai
Waqt apni raftaar se chal raha hai
Bas dhadkan meri thami hai tere bager

Kahi kuch kami hai tere bager...

Ho gye kathin ab mere liye raste
Ujaale hi ujaale hai duniya ke vaste
Low mere jivan ki thami hai tere bager

Kahi kuch kami hai tere bager...

Milta nahi mujhse parwaana ab mera
Khushiyo ko bhi dikhta nahi thikaana ab mera
Mere hi ghar me gami hai tere bager

Kahi kuch kami hai tere bager...

Chu kar mujhe hawa bhi kehti kuch nahi
Sath mera mout bhi deti ab nahi
Jeene ki aas bhi nahi hai tere bager

Kahi kuch kami hai tere bager...
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bahut khoob.......sundar ehsaason ke liye dil se daad
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27th August 2010, 12:29 PM

pahle apko pada hi hoga magar shayad itna kabhi mutaasir nahi hua hu mai jo aaj hua...

is baar magar aapne kamaal kar diya...
aisa laga jaise shayri apne zabaan se kuch bol rahi ho.........
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format bhi apka kabile taareef hai is baar

is kalaam ke liye dher saari daad haazir hai

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kavita ji bhot sunder peshkesh hai.N aapki

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27th August 2010, 02:23 PM

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bahut khoob.......sundar ehsaason ke liye dil se daad
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Aapka bahut bahut dhanyawaad ishq ji


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27th August 2010, 03:02 PM

Khoobsurat peshkash Kavita jee.....


Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...

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27th August 2010, 05:09 PM

Chu kar mujhe hawa bhi kehti kuch nahi
Sath mera mout bhi deti ab nahi

Jeene ki aas bhi nahi hai tere bager

good one kavita ji..
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pahle apko pada hi hoga magar shayad itna kabhi mutaasir nahi hua hu mai jo aaj hua...

is baar magar aapne kamaal kar diya...
aisa laga jaise shayri apne zabaan se kuch bol rahi ho.........
aapne metaphors bahut acche istemaal kiye hai

on the whole ek bahut hi acchi koshish....
format bhi apka kabile taareef hai is baar

is kalaam ke liye dher saari daad haazir hai

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Aapko yahan dekh kar bahut khushi hui....!!! Dil se shukriya....


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Kahi kuch kami hai tere bager...
Na rang hai na roshni hai tere bager...

Maousam bhi karvat ab badal raha hai
Waqt apni raftaar se chal raha hai
Bas dhadkan meri thami hai tere bager

Kahi kuch kami hai tere bager...

Ho gye kathin ab mere liye raste
Ujaale hi ujaale hai duniya ke vaste
Low mere jivan ki thami hai tere bager

Kahi kuch kami hai tere bager...

Milta nahi mujhse parwaana ab mera
Khushiyo ko bhi dikhta nahi thikaana ab mera
Mere hi ghar me gami hai tere bager

Kahi kuch kami hai tere bager...

Chu kar mujhe hawa bhi kehti kuch nahi
Sath mera mout bhi deti ab nahi
Jeene ki aas bhi nahi hai tere bager

Kahi kuch kami hai tere bager...
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bahut sundar likha hai aapne...ehsaas behad achhe lage mujhe...
aapke is qalaam pe daad haazir hai, qubuul kijiyega...


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Kavita Ji ... Ab tak ki sab se umdaa peshkash lagi mujhe ... bahut hi khoobsurati se aapne ehsaasoN ko prastut kiya hai...dil ko chhuune me kaamiyaab rahi ... aapki rachna .... bahut khoob .... Very Impressive Indeed... ! SuperB Creation...dil se daad hazir hai... yunhi likhi rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...

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good one kavita ji..
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Thanx a lot Shipra ji...............


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bahut sundar likha hai aapne...ehsaas behad achhe lage mujhe...
aapke is qalaam pe daad haazir hai, qubuul kijiyega...

Shukriya Vikram ji,
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Kavita Ji ... Ab tak ki sab se umdaa peshkash lagi mujhe ... bahut hi khoobsurati se aapne ehsaasoN ko prastut kiya hai...dil ko chhuune me kaamiyaab rahi ... aapki rachna .... bahut khoob .... Very Impressive Indeed... ! SuperB Creation...dil se daad hazir hai... yunhi likhi rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...

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Kahi kuch kami hai tere bager...
Na rang hai na roshni hai tere bager...

Maousam bhi karvat ab badal raha hai
Waqt apni raftaar se chal raha hai
Bas dhadkan meri thami hai tere bager

Kahi kuch kami hai tere bager...

Ho gye kathin ab mere liye raste
Ujaale hi ujaale hai duniya ke vaste
Low mere jivan ki thami hai tere bager

Kahi kuch kami hai tere bager...

Milta nahi mujhse parwaana ab mera
Khushiyo ko bhi dikhta nahi thikaana ab mera
Mere hi ghar me gami hai tere bager

Kahi kuch kami hai tere bager...

Chu kar mujhe hawa bhi kehti kuch nahi
Sath mera mout bhi deti ab nahi
Jeene ki aas bhi nahi hai tere bager

Kahi kuch kami hai tere bager...
A very nice creation indeed...! My compliments, Kavita Ji...!

Reminds me of a song by late Rafi Ji :

Kaise kategi zindagi tere bagair tere bagair
PaaouNga har shay kami tere bagair tere bagair

Keep penning and take care, ok...?



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A very nice creation indeed...! My compliments, Kavita Ji...!

Reminds me of a song by late Rafi Ji :

Kaise kategi zindagi tere bagair tere bagair
PaaouNga har shay kami tere bagair tere bagair

Keep penning and take care, ok...?

Shukriya Mushkil ji........

aise hi sath dete rahiyega......

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Ho gye kathin ab mere liye raste
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Low mere jivan ki thami hai tere bager
Kavita....mere paas in shabd nahi hain kuch kahne ko shayad is liye kyun ki main bhi aaj kal kuch issi daur se guzar raha hoon....
Bahut accha likhti ho.......keep writing !!!

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Kavita....mere paas in shabd nahi hain kuch kahne ko shayad is liye kyun ki main bhi aaj kal kuch issi daur se guzar raha hoon....
Bahut accha likhti ho.......keep writing !!!

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Kavitaa jii,

Bahut hii sundar ehsaas.. aur utana si sundar bayaan.. dil se daad qabool kare..

duwao ke sath..
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duwao ke sath..
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shukriya Omi ji

Daad dil se qabool hai Omi JI,,,,,


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Hey kavita mujhe ye apki koshish bht hi achi lagi.....apka har lafz aur har soch beshaq kabil e tareef hai....apka har ehsas bht hi pyara aur khubsurat hai.....ese hi likhte rahiye aur SDC ko sajate rahiye.....
   
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