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" Dheeyan " - 29th September 2010, 10:57 PM

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maaye tu taan sath chaddeya !!
hun main os khuda kol challiyan !!

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maaye je tu jamman dindi
wand laine si main 4 dukh tere


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loko sada yad rakheyo
jis ghar dhee jamdi, mehke othe hi fullan da angna



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29th September 2010, 11:05 PM

punjabi de galat shabad joD je nazar andaaz kar ditte jaan taa.n vi eh nawe andaaz de tappe raps de haqdaar han . dilo.n daad


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punjabi de galat shabad joD je nazar andaaz kar ditte jaan taa.n vi eh nawe andaaz de tappe raps de haqdaar han . dilo.n daad
ji daad ke liye bht shukriya !!
darasal Punjabi typing mein thoda haath tang hai !! sudharne ki koshish karunga !! !!


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5th October 2010, 10:40 PM

[QUOTE=abhinav;411641]ਕੁੰਡਾ ਕੁੰਡਾ ਕੁੰਡਾ !!
ਖੁਦਾ ਸਚੀਆਂ ਸਬਦੀਆਂ ਸੁਣਦਾ !!
ਮਾਏ ਤੂ ਮੈਨੂ ਮਾਫ ਕਰੀਂ !!
ਕੂਖੋ ਨਿਕਲੀ ਨਾ ਬਣ ਕੇ ਮੁੰਡਾ !!


ਫੀਤਾ ਫੀਤਾ ਫੀਤਾ !!
ਮਾਏ ਤੂ ਆ ਕੀ ਕੀਤਾ !!
ਬੇਗਾਨੇਆਂ ਦੇ ਲੜ ਲਗ ਕੇ !!
ਮੈਨੂ ਕੂਖੋ ਅਲਵਿਦਾ ਕੀਤਾ !!


ਛੱਲੀਆਂ ਛੱਲੀਆਂ ਛੱਲੀਆਂ !!
ਬੰਦ ਕਰ ਛੱਡੀਆਂ ਸਬ ਗਲੀਆਂ !!
ਮਾਏ ਤੂ ਤਾਂ ਸਾਥ ਛੱਡੇਆ !!
ਹੁਣ ਮੈਂ ਓਸ ਖੁਦਾ ਕੋਲ ਚੱਲੀਆਂ !!

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ਵੰਡ ਲੈਣੇ ਸੀ ਮੈਂ 4 ਦੁਖ ਤੇਰੇ


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ਕਦੋ ਅਊਗੀ ਧੀਯਾਂ ਦੀ ਵਾਰੀ ??
ਮੁੰਡੇਆਂ ਨੂ ਲਾਡ ਸਬਦਾ,
ਰਿਹੰਦੀ ਧੀ ਕਿਯੋਂ ਪੇਆਰ ਦੀ ਮਾਰੀ..


ਗੀਤ ਗੀਤ ਗੀਤ
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ਕੈਸੀ ਜਗ ਨੇ ਬ੍ਣਾ ਦਿਤੀ ਰੀਤ


ਕਾਵਾਂ ਕਾਵਾਂ ਕਾਵਾਂ
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ਮੁੰਡੇਓ ਵੇ ਰੋਕੋ ਜੱਗ ਨੂ
ਕਿਦੇ ਨਾਲ ਲਵੋਂਗੇ ਲਾਵਾਂ


ਕੰਗਨਾ ਕੰਗਨਾ ਕੰਗਨਾ
ਜਗ ਬਨੇਯਾ 'ਰੁਖ ਪਾਪ ਦਾ' ਸੰਗਨਾ,
ਲੋਕੋ ਸਦਾ ਯਾਦ ਰਖੇਯੋ
ਜਿਸ ਘਰ ਧੀ ਜਮਦੀ, ਮਹਿਕੇ ਓਥੇ ਹੀ ਫੁੱਲਾਂ ਦਾ ਅੰਗਨਾ


Kunda Kunda Kunda !!
khuda sachiyan sabdiyan sunda !!
maaye tu mainu maaf karin !!
kukho nikli na ban ke munda !!


feeta feeta feeta !!
maye tu ai ki keeta !!
beganeyan de lad lag ke !!
mainu kukho alvida kita !!


challiyan challiyan challiyan !!
band kar chaddiyan sab galiyan !!
maaye tu taan sath chaddeya !!
hun main os khuda kol challiyan !!

gere gere gere
veera hon te wande si pere
maaye je tu jamman dindi
wand laine si main 4 dukh tere


kyaari kyaari kyaari
kado aoogi dheeyan di vaari ??
mundeyan nu laad sabda,
rehndi dhee kyon pyar di maari..


geet geet geet
dheeyan da na reha koi meet
mundeyan nu hakk sab ne
kaisi lag ne bna diti reet


kavan kavan kavan
hond apni nu bhul gayian maawan
mundeyo ve roko jagg nu
kide naal lawonge laawaan


kangna kangna kangna
jag baneya 'RUKH PAAP DA' sangna,
loko sada yad rakheyo
jis ghar dhee jamdi, mehke othe hi fullan da angna
dear abhinav
ehsaas bahut change lagge ...............................jiwe.n jiwe.n practice karde rahoge punjabi bhi sudhar jawegi likhde raho khush raho


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awesome abhinav menu thode eh tappe bahut pasand aaye......great work......veere....kamal karti...
gere gere gere
veera hon te wande si pere
maaye je tu jamman dindi
wand laine si main 4 dukh tere

eh tappa behat pasand aaya.........
likhde raho....
   
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awesome abhinav menu thode eh tappe bahut pasand aaye......great work......veere....kamal karti...
gere gere gere
veera hon te wande si pere
maaye je tu jamman dindi
wand laine si main 4 dukh tere

eh tappa behat pasand aaya.........
likhde raho....


yes loveleen sister m agree wd uh........
ye tappa bhot vadiya hai...
good job abhinav bhayia


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Very Nice Creation ...... bahut khoob .......... dili daad




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29th December 2010, 01:38 AM

Eh tappe padhke taan tappan da dil karda hai. Bahut hi reez naal likhe lagde hun. Dilon daad haazar hai.
And thanks for sharing.
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