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This is my first poem {sahan da hakdar}
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This is my first poem {sahan da hakdar} - 15th November 2011, 06:56 PM

Jad Koi Inna Khas Ban Jave,
Ohde bare Sochna Ik Ehsas Ban jave,
Ta Mang Lyo Rabb To Ohnu Jindagi De lyi…
Is To pehla k Koi Hor LUCKY,
Ohde Saha Da hakdar ban jave..♥♥
   
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11th December 2011, 02:21 PM

Jad Koi Inna Khas Ban Jave,
Ohde bare Sochna Ik Ehsas Ban jave,
Ta Mang Lyo Rabb To Ohnu Jindagi De lyi…
Is To pehla k Koi Hor LUCKY,
Ohde Saha Da hakdar ban jave..♥♥

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11th December 2011, 03:54 PM

Bahut hi vadia likhya tusi... nd welcome to sdc
   
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12th December 2011, 09:35 AM

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Bahut hi vadia likhya tusi... nd welcome to sdc
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9th January 2012, 07:39 PM

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Jad Koi Inna Khas Ban Jave,
Ohde bare Sochna Ik Ehsas Ban jave,
Ta Mang Lyo Rabb To Ohnu Jindagi De lyi…
Is To pehla k Koi Hor LUCKY,
Ohde Saha Da hakdar ban jave..♥♥


Nyc creation..............................welcome jii....god bless u !!


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2nd May 2012, 10:16 PM

thanx to all of u .............................


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5th June 2012, 05:06 AM

Zabardast lucky g bahut khoob

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lucky Gbahut hi wadhiya. keep it up.
   
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