karke ye waada lo main chali
khila ke man me ek pyari si kali
karke ab unko kuch dikhana hai
jinke aangan me main ab tak pali
jinho ne kia hai ehsaan ye mujhpe
bhar diya hai har pal me rang mere
un ehsaano ka badla naa de paun
jo diye beshumar pyar ke ghere
har pal karte pyar jo mujhse
dekhe mujhe pyar se har ghadi
karke kuch ab unko dikhana hai
jinke aangan me main ab tak pali
jo karke roshni dikhayen manzil
bahon k ghere me rakhe har dam
vo puri karen meri sari hasrate
vo lele hum se khud pe har gam
sang rhe mere har pal har ghadi
karke ye waada lo main chali
khila ke man me ek pyari si kali
karke ab unko kuch dikhana hai
jinke aangan me main ab tak pali
If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
Last edited by gazzal; 1st July 2010 at 12:21 PM..
wah ek beti ka apne ghawaaloN ke prati sneh bahut ahchi tarah chitrit kiya hai, bas yahi kahunga ehsashon ko lafz deti raheN, haaN jabardasti rhyming ki kosish kabhi mat kijiyega...!! bahut ahche, aage v yuNhi likhti rahiye....!!
wah ek beti ka apne ghawaaloN ke prati sneh bahut ahchi tarah chitrit kiya hai, bas yahi kahunga ehsashon ko lafz deti raheN, haaN jabardasti rhyming ki kosish kabhi mat kijiyega...!! bahut ahche, aage v yuNhi likhti rahiye....!!
thanks ghayal ji...............
If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
karke ye waada lo main chali
khila ke man me ek pyari si kali
karke ab unko kuch dikhana hai
jinke aangan me main ab tak pali
jinho ne kia hai ehsaan ye mujhpe
bhar diya hai har pal me rang mere
un ehsaano ka badla naa de paun
jo diye beshumar pyar ke ghere
har pal karte pyar jo mujhse
dekhe mujhe pyar se har ghadi
karke kuch ab unko dikhana hai
jinke aangan me main ab tak pali
jo karke roshni dikhayen manzil
bahon k ghere me rakhe har dam
vo puri karen meri sari hasrate
vo lele hum se khud pe har gam
sang rhe mere har pal har ghadi
karke ye waada lo main chali
khila ke man me ek pyari si kali
karke ab unko kuch dikhana hai
jinke aangan me main ab tak pali
beti ke ehsaason ko khub achhi tarah pesh kiya hai tumne achha likha hai
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