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16th August 2014, 03:38 PM
Jaana tha tumhe jaana* to chale jaate,
Milte bas hanste hue aur chale jaate,
(Jaana*= my love)
Na milte hum har shaam yahan rote hue,
Gar us roz tum humse milne chale aate,
Doori kabhi na lagti hume doori sanam,
Gar ek aawaaz pe tum meri daude chale aate,
Na hoti hame tumse kabhi shikayat sanam,
Gar bas tum 'aru' se milke gale jaate...
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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16th August 2014, 03:53 PM
Waaaaaaaaaah Aaaaaaru ki kya baat hai ..Her lafz mein
dard tapkta hai , har sher mein ek aah nikalti hai ..
bahut chot khaye ho bhai aisa mijhe dikhta hai aap ki nazm mein.
meri do lines aap ke dard mein shareek hain...
yun dil torna tha ek din tau dil se dil milaya kyon tha ,
yun saath chorna tha ek din tau itne lass bulaya kyun tba.
khud ko bewafa samajj loon ye humein nahin kabool,
tuj pe aitbaar karke mujh se hui hai bahut bhool.
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16th August 2014, 04:05 PM
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Jaana tha tumhe jaana* to chale jaate,
Milte bas hanste hue aur chale jaate,
(Jaana*= my love)
Na milte hum har shaam yahan rote hue,
Gar us roz tum milne chale aate,
Doori kabhi na lagti hume doori sanam,
Gar ek aawaaz pe tum daude chale aate,
Na hoti tumse kabhi koi shikayat hame,
Gar tum 'aru' se bas milke gale jaate...
waaaahhhhh waahhh
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bahut khuuuuuuuubbbbb aru bhai.....................
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16th August 2014, 04:08 PM
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Jaana tha tumhe jaana* to chale jaate,
Milte bas hanste hue aur chale jaate,
(Jaana*= my love)
Na milte hum har shaam yahan rote hue,
Gar us roz tum milne chale aate,
Doori kabhi na lagti hume doori sanam,
Gar ek aawaaz pe tum daude chale aate,
Na hoti tumse kabhi koi shikayat hame,
Gar tum 'aru' se bas milke gale jaate...
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Wah aru ji bahut khoob poem. ...dil se nikli huyi ek aur poem k liye dil se waaah.....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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16th August 2014, 09:11 PM
wahhh! Arvind jii,,
Bohat bohat khoob! Tehreer meiN ishQ aur dard ki jhalak
bakhoobi nazar aa rahi hai...... dherooN daad!
Likhte rahiye,
DuaooN ke saath,
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17th August 2014, 08:25 PM
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Jaana tha tumhe jaana* to chale jaate,
Milte bas hanste hue aur chale jaate,
(Jaana*= my love)
Na milte hum har shaam yahan rote hue,
Gar us roz tum milne chale aate,
Doori kabhi na lagti hume doori sanam,
Gar ek aawaaz pe tum daude chale aate,
Na hoti tumse kabhi koi shikayat hame,
Gar tum 'aru' se bas milke gale jaate...
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waahh kya baat hai aru bhai.... kamaal ka kalaam likha hai aapne, dard se labrez kalaam... likhte rahen
Shaad.....
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18th August 2014, 09:26 PM
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Waaaaaaaaaah Aaaaaaru ki kya baat hai ..Her lafz mein
dard tapkta hai , har sher mein ek aah nikalti hai ..
bahut chot khaye ho bhai aisa mijhe dikhta hai aap ki nazm mein.
meri do lines aap ke dard mein shareek hain...
yun dil torna tha ek din tau dil se dil milaya kyon tha ,
yun saath chorna tha ek din tau itne lass bulaya kyun tba.
khud ko bewafa samajj loon ye humein nahin kabool,
tuj pe aitbaar karke mujh se hui hai bahut bhool.
sanjay sehgal
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Thanx a lot sanjay jee...and what a song u hv posted...loved it..
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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19th August 2014, 12:24 AM
Waah bahaut khoobsurat ghazal Aru ji ! Bayaan mein taazgi lagi ! Dheron daad !
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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bahut khuuuuuuuubbbbb aru bhai.....................
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Wah aru ji bahut khoob poem. ...dil se nikli huyi ek aur poem k liye dil se waaah.....
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thanx madhu jee.....aise hee saath dete rahiye.........d
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एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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29th August 2014, 09:05 AM
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wahhh! Arvind jii,,
Bohat bohat khoob! Tehreer meiN ishQ aur dard ki jhalak
bakhoobi nazar aa rahi hai...... dherooN daad!
Likhte rahiye,
DuaooN ke saath,
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Thanx a lot hassan jee......bahut bahut shukriya aapka,jo apne apna keemti waqt nikal ke mera kalaam pada aur saraha....aise hee sath dete rahiye..
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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29th August 2014, 09:40 AM
Aru bhai, aapke ahsaas hame acche lge, par yeh wala sher hame khaas lga
Na hoti tumse kabhi koi shikayat hame,
Gar tum 'aru' se bas milke gale jaate...
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Poet- ajay sahaab -
29th August 2014, 11:36 AM
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Jaana tha tumhe jaana* to chale jaate,
Milte bas hanste hue aur chale jaate,
(Jaana*= my love)
Na milte hum har shaam yahan rote hue,
Gar us roz tum milne chale aate,
Doori kabhi na lagti hume doori sanam,
Gar ek aawaaz pe tum daude chale aate,
Na hoti tumse kabhi koi shikayat hame,
Gar tum 'aru' se bas milke gale jaate...
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wAHHHH BAHUT HE LAJAWAB ARVIND BHAI BAHUT KHUB....
रूठे हुए हैं रात के लम्हे तेरे बग़ैर
बिखरे हैं टूट कर मेरे हिस्से तेरे बग़ैर
हर लम्हे पर रखी हुई इक दर्द की सलीब
कैसे भला जहान में ,गुज़रे तेरे बग़ैर
तू ही ग़ज़ल की जान है ,खुशबू तू लफ्ज़ की
बेजान हो चले मेरे ,मिसरे तेरे बग़ैर
POET- AJAY SAHAAB
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31st August 2014, 10:46 AM
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waahh kya baat hai aru bhai.... kamaal ka kalaam likha hai aapne, dard se labrez kalaam... likhte rahen
Shaad.....
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thanx a lot shoiab bhai.......aapka saath yun hee bana rahe......
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
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Thanx a lot zarra jee.....aapne to aana hee band kar diya...par aapki yaadein abhi bhi aati hain....
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Jaana tha tumhe jaana* to chale jaate,
Milte bas hanste hue aur chale jaate,
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Na milte hum har shaam yahan rote hue,
Gar us roz tum humse milne chale aate,
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waaahh waaahh kyaa baat hai aru bhaai....
Doori kabhi na lagti hume doori sanam,
Gar ek aawaaz pe tum meri daude chale aate,
Na hoti hame tumse kabhi shikayat sanam,
Gar bas tum 'aru' se milke gale jaate...
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thanx naaz jee,..........................
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Aru bhai, aapke ahsaas hame acche lge, par yeh wala sher hame khaas lga
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Thanx sunita diiiii.....aapka sneh yun nee bana rahe......
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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