*~*ChAl MeRe SaAtH cHaL*~*

[Taish]

Ek baar fir se bazm ko is nacheez ghayal ka aadaabb.ek baar fir se pesh hun aapki bazm me mehfil sajane ko.bas haalaat humse bahut khafa hain.aur zindagi humse naaraazz fir v majbur tha kalam chalane ko.so aa gaya ek aur ghayal klaam ke saath.isi umeed me ki aapko pasand aayega.ye pehle aapki shayri me post ki thi socha yahaan v kar dun taaki sab padh saken.


To pesh hai ek aur GHAYAL kalaam............


Har gali,har ghar pet era nisha dekhte hain,,tu hi dikhti hai,hum jahaan dekhte hain,,har ajnabee se hum tera pata poochte hain,,eh khuda,kyat hi meri khata? poochte hain,sheeshe ka dil hai mera patthar nahi,,par todne wale haathon ko,koi darr nahi……………

Sach me koi dar nahi……………..



Ye samaa ho na ho kal,chal,mere saath chal,
Zindagi ban jayegi ghazal, chal,mere saath chal.

Saath tere hum nahi,kaise kahen ki gum nahi,
Tu kyun yun gaya badal, chal,mere saath chal.

Wafayen ki,jafayen ki,humne sirf khatayen ki,
Zamane se zara sambhal, chal,mere saath chal.

Jab v teri yaad aayi,bas yahi fariyaad aayi,
Kabhi meri kabr pe tahal, chal,mere saath chal.

Aane wale dino ka pata kya,Aa mere kareeb aa,
Tujhme main jaun pighal, chal,mere saath chal.

Wafa ko milti bewafai,eh khuda,duhai!duhai!,
Fir v log wafa karte“Ghayal”,chal,mere saath chal.

Mohabat jo ki kisi se,nafrat ho gayi zindagi se,
Kuch yun kate humare pal, chal,mere saath chal.

[rajveeer]

ghayal ji appko raj ka salaam.......main aksar appko parhta hoon ....appki har gazal behad purasar hoti hai....or hum aapke kayal hai....app jo bhee nasehat is nacheez ko dete ho us par amal karne ki koshish karta hoon.....appka adna sa dost ......raj......

[pooja_d]

ghayal ji aap bahot achha aur umda likhte hai...... shabd nahi hai mere paas...
chal mere saath chal........
bahot khub likha hai.

pooja

[Taish]

Originally posted by rajveeer
ghayal ji appko raj ka salaam.......main aksar appko parhta hoon ....appki har gazal behad purasar hoti hai....or hum aapke kayal hai....app jo bhee nasehat is nacheez ko dete ho us par amal karne ki koshish karta hoon.....appka adna sa dost ......raj......

janaab pehli baat to aap adne nahi hain.aur hume v kuch nahi aata.bas jo thodi bahut wahi sabse baantne ki kosish kar raha hun aur kuch v nahi. umeeed hai ki aap aage v yunhi hume padhne ka kasht uthate rahenge.

[Taish]

Originally posted by pooja4588
ghayal ji aap bahot achha aur umda likhte hai...... shabd nahi hai mere paas...
chal mere saath chal........
bahot khub likha hai.

pooja

shukriya pooja ji.ye humari khusnaseebi ki aapko humara likha pasand aaya.umeed bas yahi karta hun aapse ki aap aage v yunhi hume padhne ka kasht uthati rahengi.

[kaif_sk]

ghayal sahab aap k kalaam ko padha..aap ka likha yeh kalaam bahoot pasand aaya hai hume...daad kabool kijiye...aur aap se umeed hai k aap aagey bhi aise hi achche kalaam likhte rahenge..
apna khayal rakhna

[Taish]

Originally posted by kaif_sk
ghayal sahab aap k kalaam ko padha..aap ka likha yeh kalaam bahoot pasand aaya hai hume...daad kabool kijiye...aur aap se umeed hai k aap aagey bhi aise hi achche kalaam likhte rahenge..
apna khayal rakhna

janab aappko pasand aayi humari khushkismati hai ye.bas guzarish yahi hai ki aap aage v hume yunhi padhte rahiye hum v apni nadaan kosisen karte rahenge ki aapko pasand aane layak kalaam likhte rtahen.