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lamhe shab-e-furqat ke (Ghazal) -
3rd September 2015, 06:31 AM
aadaab hazreeN,
taaza Ghazal agle hafte post karooNga, yeh koi 13-14 saal puraani Ghazal hai jo sau-fee-sadi iski asl soorat meiN phir se post kar raha hooN, ladakpan ka asar alfaaz se bi zaahir ho raha hai aur lehje se bhi  phir bhi kisi kaam ki ho shaayad, mula'iizaa farmaiiye :har Gham meiN mere shaamil, ye chaaNd sitaare haiN lamhe shab-e-furqat ke, gin gin ke guzaare haiN! ab ishq ke zaKhmoN kaa, Gham kaise kareiN saahib mittii meN cHupe chehre, ashqoN ne niikhaare haiN aiisey meN ghariiboN kii, kashtii ka khudaa haafiz toofaan ne gheraa hai, aur door kinaare haiN! tuu rooTh gayaa mujh se, Gham is ka naheeN koi! Gham hai ki tire gesoo, GhairoN ne saNvaare haiN! phailii haiN meri baaheN, vo dauR ke aate haiN kyaa mere tasavvur meiN, shaadaab nazaare haiN! is bazm-e-haseenaaN meiN, is jashn-e-chiraaGhaaN meiN kyooN ham ko koi poochhe? TooTe huye taare haiN!!! yooN palkeN miri nam haiN, kuchh bi to nahiiN dikhtaa yuN ashq tire Gham ne, aaNkhoN meiN utaare haiN maanaa ke rahe rooThe, maiiyaT pe to aaye haiN ab kuchh to kaho "maikash" vo paas tumhaare haiN rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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3rd September 2015, 09:08 AM
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Maikash ji....aapki yeh gazal maine pehle bhi padi hue hai aur aaj bhi esko padkar wahi ehsaas hai jaise pehli baar padne par thy, aapki kalam se nikla hua aik aik sher khud apni kahani kehta hai, highlight kiye hue sher to bas poochiye mat ki kadar dil ke kareeb rhe. bazm meiN aate rha kijiye, aapke aane se bazm meiN nikhaar aa jati hai  rabb raakha .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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3rd September 2015, 10:08 AM
waah behad umda ghazal hai maikash ji....share karne ka bahut bahut shukriya
Aate rahiye.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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3rd September 2015, 02:15 PM
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4th September 2015, 06:48 AM
MaikasH sahib ko nacheez ka adaab ! Kamaal ki ghazal hai saahb. yeh 13-14 saal puraani ho kar bhi itni maturity bhari hai, jawab nahi. yeh teen asha'ar bohot khaas lage: tuu rooTh gayaa mujh se, Gham is ka naheeN koi! Gham hai ki tire gesoo, GhairoN ne saNvaare haiN! yooN palkeN miri nam haiN, kuchh bi to nahiiN dikhtaa yuN ashq tire Gham ne, aaNkhoN meiN utaare haiN maanaa ke rahe rooThe, maiiyaT pe to aaye haiN ab kuchh to kaho "maikash" vo paas tumhaare haiN Ijaazat talab. **************** Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota |
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4th September 2015, 10:31 AM
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Maazrat khwaah hooon taakheer ke liye bade bhai....... na jaane kin haalaat me ye nageena nazar se chook gayaa..... behad aalaa kareegaree farmaayee hai aapne huzoor aur kin khoobsurtee se kalaam ke sher ko nakkaasha hai ke bas kyaa kahne...... behad inaayat inhe hamaare saath baantne ke liye...... aage bhi aapki aalatareen kalaam ka hame intzaar rahegaa...... shukriyaa tahe dil se..... duaaon me yaad rakhiyegaa.. shaad..... |
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4th September 2015, 10:29 PM
maikash jee bahut umda rahi aapki yeh ghazal
likhte rahen duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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5th September 2015, 05:31 AM
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jee maiN jaanta hooN, aapke ilaawa puraane aur naye dostoN ne shayad hi yeh Ghazal pehle padhi ho aap puraane dinoN ki saathi haiN aur itne saaloN se,ba-qaayda, mujh na-ehl ka hauNslaa badhaati aayi haiN jiske liye maiN aapka shukriya adaa jina bhi karne ki koshish karooN, kam hoga ba-har-haal farz ka taqaaza hai ke rasman maiN aapka shukurguzaar ho kar dikhaauN to jee shukriya dil ki aakhir teh se qabuul farmaaiye aur ummeed karta hooN ke aage bhi aapka saaTh youN hi milta rahega rab raakah maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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5th September 2015, 05:32 AM
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maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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Bohat khoob! |
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Bohat khoob! -
7th September 2015, 09:01 PM
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Maikash Bhai Kya khoob ghazal share ki hai aapne. Lutf aa gaya. yooN palkeN miri nam haiN, kuchh bi to nahiiN dikhtaa yuN ashq tire Gham ne, aaNkhoN meiN utaare haiN waah kyaa baat hai! Khaksaar Praveen manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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11th September 2015, 07:13 PM
waah Maikash sahaab..kya kehne...hum to aapke fann ke ek arse se muriid rahe hain. dil se nikli houi daad kubool kijiyega. yeh do sher khaas pasand aaye.
ab ishq ke zaKhmoN kaa, Gham kaise kareiN saahib mittii meN cHupe chehre, ashqoN ne niikhaare haiN maanaa ke rahe rooThe, maiiyaT pe to aaye haiN ab kuchh to kaho "maikash" vo paas tumhaare haiN Quote:
gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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12th September 2015, 10:55 AM
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Sifar Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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29th September 2015, 02:38 AM
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aap ek arsey se mujh nalaayiq ka hauNsla badhaate aaye haiN aur aapki muhabbatoN ka karz mujh par kayi barsoN se hai, aapki faraaKh-dill hai jo kisi qaabil samajhte haiN vagarna maiN to mere liye to yeh baaNvre mann ka shor hi hai daad ke liye behadd mashkoor hooN bhai aapka rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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