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tassavur se rishtaa nibhaye huye hai - 16th July 2015, 05:24 PM

Doston,

Kuch naye khayaal jo is baar ki di hui tasveer par aaye the unhe aapke saath share kar raha hoon..

aa gaye hai vo gali mein humari
kab se hum nazre bichaaye hue hai

deed ne aadha kiya hai diwaana
aadhe hum dil ke sataaye hue hai

umr ab dil ki nazar aa rahi hai
vo haathon mein ungli dabaaye hue hai

is zulf-e-sikhan ki khataa bhi nahi hai
yeh to duniya ke gam mein rangaye hue hai

aas paas waale logon ko kehte sunaa hai
aapke aage hum sar ko jhukaaye hue hai

zikr aane pe jiske barastaa hai sawaan
hum to ulfat mein aise nahaaye hue hai

meri jaa'n shehar ki khabar pe na jaana
yeh to jalte hai jalwe paraaye hue hai

hain ye maayus rabt-e-dilii kho gayi hai
'mast' tassavur se rishtaa nibhaye hue hai



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Doston,

Kuch naye khayaal jo is baar ki di hui tasveer par aaye the unhe aapke saath share kar raha hoon..

aa gaye hai vo gali mein humari
kab se hum nazre bichaaye hue hai

deed ne aadha kiya hai diwaana
aadhe hum dil ke sataaye hue hai

umr ab dil ki nazar aa rahi hai
vo haathon mein ungli dabaaye hue hai

is zulf-e-sikhan ki khataa bhi nahi hai
yeh to duniya ke gam mein rangaye hue hai

aas paas waale logon ko kehte sunaa hai
aapke aage hum sar ko jhukaaye hue hai

zikr aane pe jiske barastaa hai sawaan
hum to ulfat mein aise nahaaye hue hai

meri jaa'n shehar ki khabar pe na jaana
yeh to jalte hai jalwe paraaye hue hai

hain ye maayus rabt-e-dilii kho gayi hai
'mast' tassavur se rishtaa nibhaye hue hai
Waah waah Anu bhai!! bahut hi khoob!! Khoobsurat andaaz aur bayaani... mazaa aya padhkar... dil se daad kubool kijiye, yunhi likhte rahiye


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Doston,

Kuch naye khayaal jo is baar ki di hui tasveer par aaye the unhe aapke saath share kar raha hoon..

aa gaye hai vo gali mein humari
kab se hum nazre bichaaye hue hai

deed ne aadha kiya hai diwaana
aadhe hum dil ke sataaye hue hai

umr ab dil ki nazar aa rahi hai
vo haathon mein ungli dabaaye hue hai

is zulf-e-sikhan ki khataa bhi nahi hai
yeh to duniya ke gam mein rangaye hue hai

aas paas waale logon ko kehte sunaa hai
aapke aage hum sar ko jhukaaye hue hai

zikr aane pe jiske barastaa hai sawaan
hum to ulfat mein aise nahaaye hue hai

meri jaa'n shehar ki khabar pe na jaana
yeh to jalte hai jalwe paraaye hue hai

hain ye maayus rabt-e-dilii kho gayi hai
'mast' tassavur se rishtaa nibhaye hue hai
wah anu bhai bahut sundar rahi aapki yeh rachna
likhte rahe
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16th July 2015, 10:12 PM

waaaaah!jalwe....hmmm. tasweer par apne bahut hee khoobsoorat ghazal pesh ki hai waah......har ek sher muhabbat ki chashni me dooba hua..bahot dilkash...par ye sher kuch khaas pasand aaye

meri jaa'n shehar ki khabar pe na jaana
yeh to jalte hai jalwe paraaye hue hai

kya baat haiii.....

hain ye maayus rabt-e-dilii kho gayi hai
'mast' tassavur se rishtaa nibhaye hue hai

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Ghazal ke ash'aar khoob rahen... aapka andaaz e bayaan bhee qaabil e taareef rahaa.. dil se daad

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Doston,

Kuch naye khayaal jo is baar ki di hui tasveer par aaye the unhe aapke saath share kar raha hoon..

aa gaye hai vo gali mein humari
kab se hum nazre bichaaye hue hai

deed ne aadha kiya hai diwaana
aadhe hum dil ke sataaye hue hai

umr ab dil ki nazar aa rahi hai
vo haathon mein ungli dabaaye hue hai

is zulf-e-sikhan ki khataa bhi nahi hai
yeh to duniya ke gam mein rangaye hue hai

aas paas waale logon ko kehte sunaa hai
aapke aage hum sar ko jhukaaye hue hai

zikr aane pe jiske barastaa hai sawaan
hum to ulfat mein aise nahaaye hue hai

meri jaa'n shehar ki khabar pe na jaana
yeh to jalte hai jalwe paraaye hue hai

hain ye maayus rabt-e-dilii kho gayi hai
'mast' tassavur se rishtaa nibhaye hue hai

waahh anu bhai............ shaandaar ghazal hui aapki jaanib se is baar bhii....

yoon lag rahaa hai ishq ki chaashnii me iskaa ek ek lafz doobaa huaa hai... itnaa rawaan dawaan kalaam likhaa hai aapne jaise koi jharnaa shokhii se khamoshi se bahaa kartaa hai.... bahut khoob janaab....

meri taraf se daad pesh hain aapki ghazal ke liye bhai. ... aate rahen.. likhte rahen

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waaaaah!jalwe....hmmm. tasweer par apne bahut hee khoobsoorat ghazal pesh ki hai waah......har ek sher muhabbat ki chashni me dooba hua..bahot dilkash...par ye sher kuch khaas pasand aaye

meri jaa'n shehar ki khabar pe na jaana
yeh to jalte hai jalwe paraaye hue hai

kya baat haiii.....

hain ye maayus rabt-e-dilii kho gayi hai
'mast' tassavur se rishtaa nibhaye hue hai

bahot khoob mast ji...yoon hee pyaar bhare khyaal hamare sath bant te rahein..
likhte rahein..
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Ghazal ke ash'aar khoob rahen... aapka andaaz e bayaan bhee qaabil e taareef rahaa.. dil se daad

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waahh anu bhai............ shaandaar ghazal hui aapki jaanib se is baar bhii....

yoon lag rahaa hai ishq ki chaashnii me iskaa ek ek lafz doobaa huaa hai... itnaa rawaan dawaan kalaam likhaa hai aapne jaise koi jharnaa shokhii se khamoshi se bahaa kartaa hai.... bahut khoob janaab....

meri taraf se daad pesh hain aapki ghazal ke liye bhai. ... aate rahen.. likhte rahen

Shaad...
Mamnoon-o-mashkoor hoon bhai jaan ki aapne is nacheez ki ghazal ko itnni tavaajo di hai...aapki jaanib se tareef pa lena ise muqumal elaan karne ki barabar hi hai...

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27th July 2015, 09:12 PM

Bhaiya,

Everybody calls you bhaiya here toh I will also call you bhaiya.

Bhaiya aapne bahaut acacha likha hai. aapko bhi TPT mai hiss sa lena chahiye tha.

Aage bhi share karte rahiye.

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Everybody calls you bhaiya here toh I will also call you bhaiya.

Bhaiya aapne bahaut acacha likha hai. aapko bhi TPT mai hiss sa lena chahiye tha.

Aage bhi share karte rahiye.

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27th July 2015, 09:44 PM

Ji I did bhaiya :-)
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Ok...intezaar rahega...shukriya batane ke liye.


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28th July 2015, 01:08 PM

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Doston,

Kuch naye khayaal jo is baar ki di hui tasveer par aaye the unhe aapke saath share kar raha hoon..

aa gaye hai vo gali mein humari
kab se hum nazre bichaaye hue hai

deed ne aadha kiya hai diwaana
aadhe hum dil ke sataaye hue hai

umr ab dil ki nazar aa rahi hai
vo haathon mein ungli dabaaye hue hai

is zulf-e-sikhan ki khataa bhi nahi hai
yeh to duniya ke gam mein rangaye hue hai

aas paas waale logon ko kehte sunaa hai
aapke aage hum sar ko jhukaaye hue hai

zikr aane pe jiske barastaa hai sawaan
hum to ulfat mein aise nahaaye hue hai

meri jaa'n shehar ki khabar pe na jaana
yeh to jalte hai jalwe paraaye hue hai

hain ye maayus rabt-e-dilii kho gayi hai
'mast' tassavur se rishtaa nibhaye hue hai
waaaaaaaaaaah...

kia baat hy bhai ..... bohat khoob..

maan gaye saahib !

keep writing,


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kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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waaaaaaaaaaah...

kia baat hy bhai ..... bohat khoob..

maan gaye saahib !

keep writing,
Hasaan bhai inaayat hai aapki jo khaaksaar ko daad ke qaabil samjhaa aap yunhi padhte rahiYe aur hum koshish karte rahenge



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wahhhhh..........bahut mast gazal hue Anu bhai


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Bahut Bahut shukriyaa Didi Aapka pyaar aur aashirwaad yunhi bana rahe...



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