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tu meri jaan hai mere hameshaa saath rahtii hai 2 11.76%
kaa.nch kii guDiyaa merii papa kii pyaarii laaDlii 1 5.88%
kitna karte ho pyaar mujhe 2 11.76%
Kismat meri thhi us roz rang laayi 4 23.53%
Har dukh sukh meiN mere saath hai meri beti 3 17.65%
papa mere ache papa , mujhko chod ke jaana na 5 29.41%
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TPT December Poll Thread. - 19th December 2015, 03:31 AM

sabhi hazraat ko madhu ka namaskaar...

bahut shukriya doston aap sab ke sath ka..aapki pyari pyari rachnaon ne tasweer me jaan daal di hai...sabhi doston ko dil se daad aur mubarakbaad..tasweer pe aayi huyi tahreer ko yahaan post karne ja rahi hoon main..aur aap sab se bas yahi guzarish hai ki samay rahte apni manpasand tahreer ko vote zaroor dein..aur apne sathiyon ka hausla badhayein...

koi bhi voting ka adhikaar rakhta hai siway un members ke jinke post count 50 se kam hain.

please doosron ko padhein aur vote dein...apni enry ko khud vote karne par aapka vote nuetralize kiya ja sakta hai..

voting ki akhiri tareekh 27 decemeber hai..



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tu meri jaan hai... - 19th December 2015, 03:37 AM

tu meri jaan hai mere hameshaa saath rahtii hai
meree har saans terii saans ke hi baad chaltii hai.

kabhi thak haar jaataa hoon zamaane ki laDaaii me ,
to tu hi mujh ko manzil ki jagah har baar dikhtii hai.

subah ki shabnami narmi si lagtii hai merii beTee,
kisii phoolon ki daali si wo jab bhi mujhpe jhuktii hai.

mujhe himmat bhi milti hai hameshaa dekh kar tujh ko,
sabhi gham bhool jaataa hoon tu jab ek baar hanstee hai.

kabhii mayoos ho jaati hai mere haal pe beTee,
mujhe hanstaa jo dekhegii sharaarat khoob kartii hai....

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kaa.nch kii guDiyaa merii papa kii pyaarii laaDlii - 19th December 2015, 03:40 AM

kaa.nch kii guDiyaa merii papa kii pyaarii laaDlii
chulbulii baate.n terii gaaye tuu jaise raaginii

tuu ha.nse to saath jaise khil uTHe apnaa chaman
tuu kare baate.n vo sunkar muskuraa duu.n man hi man
tujhse hii hai har khushii aur tuu hi merii zindagii
chulbulii baate.n terii gaaye tuu jaise raaginii
kaa.nch kii guDiyaa merii…

chaa.nd se aayii parii laayii vo tohfe saath me.n
Tofeeyo.n ke tilmilaate taare uske haath me.n
aasmaa.n se leke utrii haath me.n vo phuljhaDii
chulbulii baate.n terii gaaye tuu jaise raaginii
kaa.nch kii guDiyaa merii…

pa.nkh pe apne biTHaakar le ke jaayegii tujhe
chuum kar maathe ko vo lorii sunaayegii tujhe
aake so jaa god me.n papa kii nanhii sii parii
chulbulii baate.n terii gaaye tuu jaise raaginii
kaa.nch kii guDiyaa merii…

tuu bidaa ho jaayegii ek din chalii jaayegii tuu
tere papa ko akele chhoD kar jaayegii tuu
vo ghaDii bhii kaisii, aa.nkho.n me.n ho aa.nsuu par khushii
chulbulii baate.n terii gaaye tuu jaise raaginii
kaa.nch kii guDiyaa merii papa kii pyaarii laaDlii

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kitna karte ho pyaar mujhe... - 19th December 2015, 03:42 AM

kitna karte ho pyaar mujhe
yeh ab tak keh na paaye ho

is jag se alag ho tum papa
yeh pyaar kaha se laaye ho

meri har muskaan pe tum
gale se mujhe lagaate ho

soni si gudiya kyun kehkar
tum mujh par jaan lutaate ho

kya main hoon ek anmol pari?
jaadu ke jahan se aayi hoon

kya koi kali ya phool hun main
tere aangan mein muskaayi hoon

mere chhote se haathon ko
tum jab jab chaand bataate ho

main jaanti hun daddy mere
tum kitna mujh ko chaahte ho

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Kismat meri thhi us roz rang laayi - 19th December 2015, 03:47 AM

Kismat meri thhi us roz rang laayi
Nanhi pari ek jab mere angne aayi

Pehli baar usko baahon me bharaa jo
Nami aankhon ki fir chhup naa paayi

Yaad woh pal karke aksar muskuraa deta hoon
Pehli baar jab usne Papa aawaaz lagaayi

Nanhe nanhe kadmon se 'walker' wo chalaati
'Jeans' meri pakad ke paas thhi chali aayi

Maasoomiyat ko uski dekhta reh gaya thha
Aaine ke aage jab woh pehli baar ithlaayi

Rooth karke mujhse to kabhi mujhko manaakar
Roz naye andaaz se har zid usne manvaayi

Thhodi si jo nathkhat, thhodi si hai ziddi
Pyaari woh meri beti hai papa ke dil me samaayi

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Har dukh sukh meiN mere saath hai meri beti - 19th December 2015, 03:49 AM

Har dukh sukh meiN mere saath hai meri beti
Ghar meiN khushiyoN ki sougaat hai meri beti

Natkhat see, bholi see, badi pyaari see hai
Meri gudia, meri beti, badi dulaari see hai
Hai wo maasum see, zidd bhi bahut karti hai
Sach kahuN ! hasiN ki barsaat hai meri beti
Ghar meiN khushiyoN ki sougaat hai meri beti

Sharaarat ke siwaay kuch nahi karti hai
ChuNhe ke alaawaa kisi se nahi darti hai
Ghar meiN uskaa alag hi roub hotaa hai
Koi daal daal, to paat paat hai meri beti
Ghar meiN khushiyoN ki sougaat hai meri beti


Ek se badhkar ek khwaahisheN haiN uski
Roz hoti nayi nayi pharmaaisheN haiN uski
MaiN uske sawaaloN se bach nahi paata huN
Jab kabhi bhi karti sawaalaat hai meri beti
Ghar meiN khushiyoN ki sougaat hai meri beti

DuniyaaN meiN usko alag pahchaan dilaani hai
betiyaaN bojh nahi, baat sabko samjhani hai
saath* kadam se kadam milaakar chalegi wo
hamesha maiN uske wo mere sath hai meri beti
Ghar meiN khushiyoN ki sougaat hai meri beti

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papa mere ache papa , mujhko chod ke jaana na - 19th December 2015, 03:51 AM

papa mere ache papa , mujhko chod ke jaana na
kasam tumhe hai* papa mujhse apna haath chudaana na

Papa apki pappi se hi din mera ban jata hai
sach kehti hun papa, aangan phoolo.n se khil jaata hai

Subah savere mujhe aap jab school chodne jaate ho
meri khilti hansi dekh tum man hi man muskaate ho

kabhi kabhi jab chup kar mujhse mujhko aap daraate ho
Nahi Pata hai aapko Papa kitna mujhe satate ho..

jyo jyo shaam sarakti hai, mujhe yaad tumhaari aati hai
isiliye to aapki gudiya lipat aapse jaati hai

kabhi jo toffee aur chocolate office se tum laate ho
papa uss din tum mere ache papa ban jaate ho..

neend mein jab main darr jati hu aur phir rone lagti hu
god mein teri sar rakh kar main phir se sone lagti hu..

Papa aaj ye wada karlo chod na mujhko jaaoge
chahe duniya kuch bhi kahe,tum mera saath nibhaaoge......

Masti ji..



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19th December 2015, 05:20 AM

thanks for posting the poll thread madhu ji.................

ummeed karta hoon sab jald se jald apni pasandeeda tahreer ko vote denge aur use jitaaenge.....

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19th December 2015, 11:35 AM

Bahut khoob khayaalat aaye hai is baar ki tasveer hi itni umdaa thi....bahut bahut mubarakbaad Madhu aapko...

Umeed hai aap sab ke votes jald hi aa jaayenge...



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Love dil se pasand aaye sabhi rachnaye - 19th December 2015, 01:18 PM

bahut bahutttttttt pyare ehsaas pesh kiye hai sabhi ne...beti ka rishta hai hi enta anmol ki eske bare meiN jitna bhi kaho kam hai...bahutttttttttt accha lga sabhi ke ehsaas padkar

aaj meri badi bitiya ka janamdiN bhi hai aur us par yeh rachnaye...lafz nahi hai kuch kehne ko...dil kar rha hai sabhi rachna.o par vote kar doon.



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19th December 2015, 03:06 PM

shaad bhai...mast ji..aur di..aap teeno ka bahut shukriya ki aapne yahaan aakar sabhi ja hausla badhaya...
Di sahi kaha aapne..aapke liye aaj ka din kitna khaas hai main samajh sakti hun...mujhe yakeen hai ki aapki khushi me di gayi tasweer aur us par likhi gayi kavitaon ne kuch aur sundar rang shamil kar diye hain....

Ek baar fir aapko beti k janm din ki shubhkamnayein..aur unhe poore sdc pariwar ki taraf se janm din ki dhero badhaiyan.....

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19th December 2015, 06:40 PM

Bohut khoobsurat ehsaas piroye hain sab ne....
Actually ye baap aur beti ka rishta hota hi itna pyara hai Ki kalam khud b khud machalne lage.

Ummeed hai jis tarah entries kaafi saari aayi hain Isi prakaar log yahaan aayenge aur pratiyogiyon Ki housla afjaayi karenge.

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hmm ek bhi vote nahi..kya baat hai doston.....lagta hai aap is soch me pad gaye ki kise vote dein.....apne dil ki awaaz suniye aur jo tahreer tasweer ke sabse kareeb lage use vote kijiye.....



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Sabhi ka shukriya aapke sath ke bagair ye silsila kuch bhi nahi.....baki sabhi sathiyon se bhi jald se jald vote ke ummeed karti hun....



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26th December 2015, 05:38 PM

सभी रचनायें बेहद अच्छे हैं और इनमें से एक को चुनने का काम कठिन है. सभी दोस्तों को मेरी शुभकामनाएं। जय श्रीराम।



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सभी रचनायें बेहद अच्छे हैं और इनमें से एक को चुनने का काम कठिन है. सभी दोस्तों को मेरी शुभकामनाएं। जय श्रीराम।
Aap dono ka behad shukriya.....

Aate rahiyega...



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good morning doston....
Ek baar fir aap sab ka dil se shukriya..ki aapne mera sath diya aur TpT ko kamyaab banaya ....bhagam bhaag bhari zindgi me kuch vaqt chura kar tasweer par likha wakai daad aur mubarakbaad ke kabil hai...aur ehsaas bhi itne masoom...sabne bahut dil se likha...

Aur vote karne wale sabhi doston ka khaas taur se shukriya kyun ki aapke bagair ye competition kuch bhi nahi....

To chaliye is baar ke winner ka naam announce karte hain...aur vo hain hamari apni..MASTI ji..

Congratulations sarika...ye aapke ehsason aur bayangi ka kamaal hai ki aapne ek baar fir sabka dil jeet liya hai...aise hee aapki kalam se khoobsoorat kalaam padhne ko milte rahein..yahi dua hai...

Khush rahiye...






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Sarikaji ko hamaari taraf se bahot bahot badhaai...

vaakai behad khubsurat rachna rahi aapki....



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अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता



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areeee waahhh Bhabhi jaan...aap es baar bhi baaji jeet gye bahut bahut bahut mubarakbaad

sabhi dosto ne bahut dil se likha tha...hame sabhi ki rachnaye pasand aaye thi...meri taraf se aap sab ko bhi mubarakbaad


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bahut bahut mubaarak ho aapko sarika jee...........................
aapki kavitaa waaqai bahut touchy aur emotional thii.... God bless you..

aati rahen.... mahfil roshan karti rahen,....

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Ek baar fir aap sab ka dil se shukriya..ki aapne mera sath diya aur TpT ko kamyaab banaya ....bhagam bhaag bhari zindgi me kuch vaqt chura kar tasweer par likha wakai daad aur mubarakbaad ke kabil hai...aur ehsaas bhi itne masoom...sabne bahut dil se likha...

Aur vote karne wale sabhi doston ka khaas taur se shukriya kyun ki aapke bagair ye competition kuch bhi nahi....

To chaliye is baar ke winner ka naam announce karte hain...aur vo hain hamari apni..MASTI ji..

Congratulations sarika...ye aapke ehsason aur bayangi ka kamaal hai ki aapne ek baar fir sabka dil jeet liya hai...aise hee aapki kalam se khoobsoorat kalaam padhne ko milte rahein..yahi dua hai...

Khush rahiye...



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Main bohut bohut muafi chahti hu.n aap sabse ki aap sabne meri likhi ek choti si koshish ko itna saraha aur main yahaa aaker dhanyawaad bhi nahi keh paayi.

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aati rahen.... mahfil roshan karti rahen,....

Shaad....
Shukriya Shaad Bhai...............................

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Adiel ji, didi, shaad bhai, Dhaval ji....

Main aap sab se muafi maangti hu der se aane ke liye, darasal main delhi mein hu to time nahi mil paaya internet par jaane ka....

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