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kuch hua nahi hai - 6th September 2015, 10:28 AM

DostoN,

kuch naye ehsaas bewaajah se khayaal dil ke aapke aage rakh raha hoon...


kya kuch hua kuch hua nahi hai
kya baat hai kuch pata nahi hai

tere jaha.N ki nazar mei.N pyaare
mili wafaa ko wafaa nahi hai

kya ye kisi ne nahi bataaya
anaa se uunchaa khuda nahi hai

bachpan ki thi har vo baat baatil
mili dua ko dua nahi hai

hoga vahi jo likhaa hua hai
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6th September 2015, 01:20 PM

waaaaah Mast bhai waaah. .

Kia kehny... Dil se nikly alfaaz seedha dil per waar kar gaye...

Kia kahoon... Bas lajawab... Be misaal..

DherooN daad hazir hy...

Salamat rahiye..

Milty rahiye....


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waaahhh....mast sahab...aapki har koshish dil se likhi hoti hai....aur padhne wala bas uski gahrai me kho hee jata hai.....aaj bhi vahi kashish nazar aayi.....
Kuch mayoosi,dard aur kuch uljhan bhare aapke ye ehsaas padhkar......mujhe ek dost ki ek baat yaad aa gayiii...usi ko likh rahi hoon....gustakhi maaf kijiyega......

Mujhe batao hai zakhm aisa
Jahaa.n me jiski dawa nahi hai.

Jo tere dil me hai muhabbat
To koi bhi fir bura nahi hai...

Aapki is umda ghazal par dil se daad pesh hai......ummed karti hoon jald hee ishq me aapka koi kalaam padhne ko milega......

Khush rahiye.........



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6th September 2015, 04:08 PM

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DostoN,

kuch naye ehsaas bewaajah se khayaal dil ke aapke aage rakh raha hoon...


kya kuch hua kuch hua nahi hai
kya baat hai kuch pata nahi hai

tere jaha.N ki nazar mei.N pyaare
mili wafaa ko wafaa nahi hai

kya ye kisi ne nahi bataaya
anaa se uunchaa khuda nahi hai

bachpan ki thi har vo baat baatil
mili dua ko dua nahi hai

hoga vahi jo likhaa hua hai
dil ko kisi se gilaa nahi hai


क्या कुछ हुआ कुछ हुआ नहीं है
क्या बात है कुछ पता नहीं है

तेरे जहाँ की नज़र में प्यारे
मिली वफ़ा को वफ़ा नहीं है

क्या ये किसी ने नहीं बताया
अना से ऊँचा खुदा नहीं है

बचपन की थी हर वो बात बातिल
मिली दुआ को दुआ नहीं है

होगा वही जो लिखा हुआ है
दिल को किसी से ग़िला नहीं है


Anu.....bahut khoobsurat likha hai, apne naam ki tarah mast mast


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6th September 2015, 11:59 PM

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waaaaah Mast bhai waaah. .

Kia kehny... Dil se nikly alfaaz seedha dil per waar kar gaye...

Kia kahoon... Bas lajawab... Be misaal..

DherooN daad hazir hy...

Salamat rahiye..

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Hassan bhai - aapko nacheez ki kaarigiri pasand aayi mashkoor-o-mamnoon hoon.

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7th September 2015, 06:48 AM

Wah anu wah.....

Purasar .....purkashish..........

Jab aap dil se likhte ho to dil par na lage aisa nahi hota.


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waaahhh....mast sahab...aapki har koshish dil se likhi hoti hai....aur padhne wala bas uski gahrai me kho hee jata hai.....aaj bhi vahi kashish nazar aayi.....
Kuch mayoosi,dard aur kuch uljhan bhare aapke ye ehsaas padhkar......mujhe ek dost ki ek baat yaad aa gayiii...usi ko likh rahi hoon....gustakhi maaf kijiyega......

Mujhe batao hai zakhm aisa
Jahaa.n me jiski dawa nahi hai.

Jo tere dil me hai muhabbat
To koi bhi fir bura nahi hai...

Aapki is umda ghazal par dil se daad pesh hai......ummed karti hoon jald hee ishq me aapka koi kalaam padhne ko milega......

Khush rahiye.........
Dil ki baatein dil se hi ki jaati hai dil hi samajhtaa hai, shurkiya Madhu aapne jo izzat bakshi hai...aapki daad ka hameshaa talabgaar....



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bahut umda mast bhai......................................


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waahhh kamaal kar diyaa dost.................. kyaa khoob ghazal huii hai..

aur sabse badee baat chotee behar me likhnaa utna hi mushkil kaam hota hai jitnaa aasaani se aapne ise muqammal farmaa diya hai..... bahut si daad sarkaar.... likhte rahiye

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aur sabse badee baat chotee behar me likhnaa utna hi mushkil kaam hota hai jitnaa aasaani se aapne ise muqammal farmaa diya hai..... bahut si daad sarkaar.... likhte rahiye

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