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Love choudvi ka chand - 25th November 2012, 07:00 PM
Choudvi ka chand betaab hai
Husn unka aaj behijaab hai

Chandni bhi sharma na jaye
Chand ne lootaya mehtaab hai

Ghunghat kahiN uth na jaye
Saf me maqtool behissab hai

Zara sambhal ke ey mahjabeeN
Teere nazar kitni lajawab hai

Daste heena kyu kar na saje ‘Asif’
Shabaab hi to unka asbaab hai

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7th December 2012, 04:02 PM
bohat khoob asif sahab!!........



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very nice asif jee......................


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7th December 2012, 10:44 PM
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Choudvi ka chand betaab hai
Husn unka aaj behijaab hai

Chandni bhi sharma na jaye
Chand ne lootaya mehtaab hai

Ghunghat kahiN uth na jaye
Saf me maqtool behissab hai

Zara sambhal ke ey mahjabeeN
Teere nazar kitni lajawab hai

Daste heena kyu kar na saje ‘Asif’
Shabaab hi to unka asbaab hai
bahut khoob asif ji................................................ ..........

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7th September 2015, 10:45 AM
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Choudvi ka chand betaab hai
Husn unka aaj behijaab hai

Chandni bhi sharma na jaye
Chand ne lootaya mehtaab hai

Ghunghat kahiN uth na jaye
Saf me maqtool behissab hai

Zara sambhal ke ey mahjabeeN
Teere nazar kitni lajawab hai

Daste heena kyu kar na saje ‘Asif’
Shabaab hi to unka asbaab hai


Asif Jamil ji namaskaar.........aapki es shayri par aaj hi nazar gye meri...enti khoobsurat shayri pta nahi kaise reh gye meri nazar se.....bahut hi khoobsurat ehsaas padne ko miley...dil se shukriya.


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7th September 2015, 10:51 AM
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Choudvi ka chand betaab hai
Husn unka aaj behijaab hai

Chandni bhi sharma na jaye
Chand ne lootaya mehtaab hai

Ghunghat kahiN uth na jaye
Saf me maqtool behissab hai

Zara sambhal ke ey mahjabeeN
Teere nazar kitni lajawab hai

Daste heena kyu kar na saje ‘Asif’
Shabaab hi to unka asbaab hai
waaah......bahut khoob....
thanks for sharing di...


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bahut umda Asif bhai.............................................

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Asif Jamil ji namaskaar.........aapki es shayri par aaj hi nazar gye meri...enti khoobsurat shayri pta nahi kaise reh gye meri nazar se.....bahut hi khoobsurat ehsaas padne ko miley...dil se shukriya.
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