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dhal jayaega - 3rd February 2009, 09:29 AM
Ghazal

Din to waesae nikal jayaega
Shaam kae atae dhal jayaega

Lamha,lamha pis ker goya
Rung ae apna badal jayaega

Ghussae main ae shayed,humko
Jaatae,jaatae kuchal jayaega

Shayed rukna chahae ae bhi
Bachchoan jaesa,machal jayaega

Daekh kae nikhrae chaand ko bae-shak
Dil hi dil main,jal jayaega

Chaltae rehna,chaltae rehna
Raah main,koi mil jayaega

Daekh kae apni bigdi khismat
Khud hi khud ae dehel jayaega

Mujhko rulaya,mujhko sataya
Kerkae maera,khatal jayaega

Aadi RAZ ghamoan kae sub hain
Shayed dil ae sanmbhal jayaega

Razia Yasmeen RAZ
   
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3rd February 2009, 10:25 AM
zindagi khuda ki aamanat hai ,isko jo na jee saka us per lanat hai ,yasmeenraaz jee khushi me to sab jeete hai hum to gum me khus rahte hai alla hafiz
   
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3rd February 2009, 11:53 AM
Chaltae rehna,chaltae rehna
Raah main,koi mil jayaega


beautiful ................

Mujhko rulaya,mujhko sataya
Kerkae maera,khatal jayaega

haye kyaa baat hai
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4th February 2009, 05:13 PM
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zindagi khuda ki aamanat hai ,isko jo na jee saka us per lanat hai ,yasmeenraaz jee khushi me to sab jeete hai hum to gum me khus rahte hai alla hafiz
hi

ghamoan main muskuraieyae
phool sae khilaieyae

jo kal hoa ae RAZ
dil sae sub bhulaieyae

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4th February 2009, 08:24 PM
Din to waesae nikal jayaega
Shaam kae atae dhal jayaega

Lamha,lamha pis ker goya
Rung ae apna badal jayaega

kya baat hai..yasmeen behtreen... keep on doing good work
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Ghazal

Din to waesae nikal jayaega
Shaam kae atae dhal jayaega

Lamha,lamha pis ker goya
Rung ae apna badal jayaega

Ghussae main ae shayed,humko
Jaatae,jaatae kuchal jayaega

Shayed rukna chahae ae bhi
Bachchoan jaesa,machal jayaega

Daekh kae nikhrae chaand ko bae-shak
Dil hi dil main,jal jayaega

Chaltae rehna,chaltae rehna
Raah main,koi mil jayaega

Daekh kae apni bigdi khismat
Khud hi khud ae dehel jayaega

Mujhko rulaya,mujhko sataya
Kerkae maera,khatal jayaega

Aadi RAZ ghamoan kae sub hain
Shayed dil ae sanmbhal jayaega

Razia Yasmeen RAZ


mera kya hai main to deewana hu
kya bataoo tumko baare mein apne
mein to khud se hi begaana hu

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5th February 2009, 11:27 PM
so well ritten razia ji..bahut khoob..likhterahen yunhin

yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
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15th January 2010, 10:14 PM
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Ghazal

Din to waesae nikal jayaega
Shaam kae atae dhal jayaega

Lamha,lamha pis ker goya
Rung ae apna badal jayaega

Ghussae main ae shayed,humko
Jaatae,jaatae kuchal jayaega

Shayed rukna chahae ae bhi
Bachchoan jaesa,machal jayaega

Daekh kae nikhrae chaand ko bae-shak
Dil hi dil main,jal jayaega

Chaltae rehna,chaltae rehna
Raah main,koi mil jayaega

Daekh kae apni bigdi khismat
Khud hi khud ae dehel jayaega

Mujhko rulaya,mujhko sataya
Kerkae maera,khatal jayaega

Aadi RAZ ghamoan kae sub hain
Shayed dil ae sanmbhal jayaega

Razia Yasmeen RAZ

Kuch puraanee padh rahaa thaa, yeh bhi khoob rahee.

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16th January 2010, 02:08 AM
Chaltae rehna,chaltae rehna
Raah main,koi mil jayaega

Aapki yeh halki phulki masoom si ghazal bohat pasand aayee kuch halka phulka likhne ki gustakhi ki hain

Jo na de paye Mohabbatein, apni nafratein de de

Tujhse talluk rahe kayem, kam mera chal jayega...

Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...

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yasmeen ji puri ki pura rachna bahut acchhi likhi hai...badhayi.

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