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YA DERD-E-DIL AAP HI NA DIYA HAI
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mere dost aapka sawagat hai is parivaar me , bahot hi achhey sher aapne apni peshkas me bayan kiye hai mere dost aise hi apne ehsas ko bayan kijiyenga hamesa , aur apne ehsas ko kayam rakhiyenga taki aap kuch likh sake mere dost ummid hai aap apni likhi peshkas ke zariyeis mehfil ko sajate rahenge aapki agli peshkas ka intezar rahenga
Salam, Bhahut achaa shair likha aap ne derd par aap ne bahut chota shair likha hai please is shair ko pora likh, to mujhe bahut khushi hohi, mujhe aap ke pori gazal ka intezaar rahega aap yun hi likhte rahe
Salam, Bhahut achaa shair likha aap ne derd par aap ne bahut chota shair likha hai please is shair ko pora likh, to mujhe bahut khushi hohi, mujhe aap ke pori gazal ka intezaar rahega aap yun hi likhte rahe
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