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Maadat Chahti Hou - 15th October 2004, 04:39 AM

Hello Everyone,

In two days my siblings and me are throwing my parents a big surprise 30th anniversary party. On this occasion I would like to say a shayri that would be appropriate for the occasion. I am the eldest Sister and would like to say something that reflects the occasion and something not in english as most of the guests are my parents freinds and they can appreciate this form of poetry. I would appreciate any help I can get from all the shayers out there. I would take a shot at it but I don't have the skill or the written launage skills to put together such beautiful poetry.

I would appreciate any help I can get and am very greatful to all that help out.

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15th October 2004, 01:52 PM

HELLO NITU,


waise toh mein shayri.com ka purana shayer hoon aur is parivaar ka chota sa hisa hoon, magar aap ke yeh baat sunkar mujhe accha laga and its my privilage to help u, aap yeh nazam sunade agar aap ko acchi lagi toh


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maa baap ki dua hai allah ka karam hai,
yeh taj izzaton ka yunhi nahi mila hai,

rakiye kadam zameen par,akaash par na udiyen,
woh utt nahi saka jo unchai se gira hai,
yeh taj izzaton ka yunhi nahi mila hai,
maa baap ki dua hai allah ka karam hai,


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15th October 2004, 02:13 PM

Hi Nitu Ji,

Well hum koi shayar to nahi, bas yehi khayal dil mein aaya aapka post par kar toh share kar raha hu, Umeed hai kuch kaam aayega,

Khush naseeb hum khud ko samaj te hai,
Khushiyo ki uran hum humesha bhar te hai,
Aap jaise maa baap ho jin bacchho ke
Roz Jannat mein hi din un ke guzarte hai.

Aap dono se humne hai har khushi paayi
Sada humare chehre pe muskurahat aap ne layi
Chupa ke rakha humse duniya ka har zulm o sitam
Zindagi humesha hai humari phoolo say sajaayi

Khush naseeb woh bacche hote hai,
Maa baap jinhe aap jaise milte hai,
Karte hai rab se hum bas yahi dua,
Hum par sada Saaya aap ka uhi bana rahe


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Shukriya - 16th October 2004, 12:57 PM

Thank you very much ashan ji and candyboy ji.

Both shayri's were very good. I will certainly be up tonigh practicng so tommorow I may say them properly.

Thank you vry much again.
   
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16th October 2004, 01:02 PM

Hi Nitu Ji,

Zah-e Naseeb jo aap ko humara likha pasand aaya. Humare aur is shayri.com parivaar ki aur se bhi apne mummy aur daddy ko wish ki jiyega. Allah unki jodi humesha salaamat rakhe.


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Thank You - 2nd April 2014, 01:00 PM

It's been almost 10 years since I came to thius fourm asking for help when both of the tweo folks who replied came through.

I never came back toi tell you that the two poems bought my mom to tears of Joy that day.

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Hi Nitu Ji,

Wow it's really been 10 years!!!!

Well, i'm glad that U're Mom was touched by your efforts


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Awwwww..... what a lovely moment to imagine... its pleasure to see you guys here after this much time... off course its 10 years passed and the site is like as before.. missing old days and members... please keep visiting and take care......

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