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alam-e-tanhaai - 2nd May 2006, 02:44 PM

hi friends,
aaj khud likhne ke liye to kuch nahi par yeh gazal kisi ne fwd ki ,mujhe achi lagi isliye yahan post kar rahi hun.author ka naam nahi jaanti .


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2nd May 2006, 07:39 PM

wah...

Akelijaan,

Very nice, thanks for sharing here with us. take care!
   
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Nice one... thx for sharing it here...


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3rd May 2006, 12:34 PM

bahut hi khoobsurat he ye puri ghazal lakin iski kuch line mujhey behad achhi lagin

really amazing

mera palrra that itnaa bhaari
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ik taraf thi saari khudaai

isko yahan share karne ke liye bahut bahut shukurya ummid he age bhi karti rahengi

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