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zakhm - 2nd October 2005, 06:20 PM

i know today my feelings wud hurt many but then i do need them here with their valuable suggestions as sumtimes in life u feel so low that sumtimes u just cant think on anything else n ur mind is just concentrated which cud hurt many of u. neways life had been going quiet dull in past ,so here again with few thoughts just to take out my inner. thx for always being there to read me. take care n may god bless u all with his finnest glitters.
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guzari zindagi ke pal dekho,aise humne khoye hai,
abb kya batayein aapko ki,aaj hum kyun roye hai!

khushiyan kya bantenge hum,muskurana bhi bhul chuke,
kya karein humne to sada,aashqon ke haar piroye hai!

isse badhkar aur kya kar sakti hoon mein,
dosron ke zakhm bhi humne,aapne khoon se doye hai!

laash utha kar kandhon par ,khud ko hi dafan kiya,
dekho aapni maut pe khud hi aaj hum roye hai!

itna kar tu rahem tu maula,aaj sula de"jas" ko,
lagta hai aise hum jaise,janmon se na soye hai!



mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

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Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

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Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

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2nd October 2005, 06:39 PM

Tee Jasoo ji aur Aansoo ji,

Aap dono ne mil kar bahut khoob likha hai. Yunhi likhte rahiyega... na aap kabhi inka na kabhi woh aapka saath chodenge...right...

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2nd October 2005, 06:51 PM

jas di........
kuch kehne ki haalat me nahi chhoda apne.......
di.....bahut bahut dukh hota hai padh kar apko.......seriously kahoon to main kabhi kabhi khud ko itna bebas samajhti hoon ki kaash kabhi main apke kaam aa paati ya apke chehre pe hansi lane me mera kabhi to koi haath ho........sach di....aaj pehli baar shweta(kuhulika) ka footnote samajh me aaya...
duniya me kitna gham hai,
mera gam kitna kam hai


ab kya kareiN di........dukh haiN ki kam hi nahi hote.....!!!!
bas apke liye sahche dil se pray hi kar sakti hoon ki aap jald se jald khushi ki panaahoN me aa jao.....gham ka door dor tak koi naam-o-NishaaN na ho........
plz be happy alwaz.......

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Re: zakhm - 2nd October 2005, 06:53 PM

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i know today my feelings wud hurt many but then i do need them here with their valuable suggestions as sumtimes in life u feel so low that sumtimes u just cant think on anything else n ur mind is just concentrated which cud hurt many of u. neways life had been going quiet dull in past ,so here again with few thoughts just to take out my inner. thx for always being there to read me. take care n may god bless u all with his finnest glitters.
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guzari zindagi ke pal dekho,aise humne khoye hai,
abb kya batayein aapko ki,aaj hum kyun roye hai!

khushiyan kya bantenge hum,muskurana bhi bhul chuke,
kya karein humne to sada,aashqon ke haar piroye hai!

isse badhkar aur kya kar sakti hoon mein,
dosron ke zakhm bhi humne,aapne khoon se doye hai!

laash utha kar kandhon par ,khud ko hi dafan kiya,
dekho aapni maut pe khud hi aaj hum roye hai!

itna kar tu rahem tu maula,aaj sula de"jas" ko,
lagta hai aise hum jaise,janmon se na soye hai!
hi,ruhani ji,
bohat hi khoob bohat hi betarin andaz mein aap ne apne dard ka izhaar kiya hai aapke har lafz se dard saaf nazar araha hai
bohat acche isi tara likhte rahiye aur apna khayaal rakhiye
khuda hafiz.......


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You Have Your Family You Know~Think Of Them :)** - 3rd October 2005, 04:03 AM

Dear Jasleen Jee, Aman(Rahi) Jee Ko Mail Ki Hain~Ummid Karti Houn Ki Aman Jee Khud Ka Khayaal Rakh Rahe Hain~Aur Jald Hi Unki Tabiyat Theek Ho Jaayegi**Duwaaen To Hamesha Rehti Hain Unke Liye~Aap Sabhi Ke Liye Bhi...**Main Aapki Dard Ko Samajh To Shayaad Nahin Sakti Lekin Mehsous Zarour Kar Sakti Houn**Aap Akeli Nahin Ho~Aur Iss Liye Aap Aisi Duwa Nahin Mang Sakti Ho~You Do Know What I Am Talking About~I Hope You Do**Wo Kehte Hain Na Ki~"Gham Ke Andheri Raat Mein_Dil Ko Na Beqarar Kar_Subha Zarour Aayegi_Subha Ka Intezaar Kar~Haan, Hain To Gane Ki Bol~Aur Ye~"Zamane Mein Sabhi Ko Milte Hain Gham_Tum Na Ghabrana_Yahan Harr Raat Ki Subha Hain Hamdam_Tum Na Ghabrana~Gane Ki Bol Ye Bhi Thi~Aman Jee Ko Kehdiya Hain Ki Aapko Bhej De~Aur Haan, Mushkil Danny Ke Paas Bhi Hain_I Am Sure He Can Give You The Songs~I Made A CD Of 21 Songs~And Me Too Listen To The Songs Sometimes~I Feel Quite Good & I Hope You Will Feel Good Too **Aur Keya Kahoun...Aapko~Baas Ye Ki Duwaaen Hamesha Rahegi...Aapke Liye~Dil Ki Gehraaion Se Dher Dher Sare Phoul_Shukriya**I Hope You Can Understand...! Agar Kuchh Bura Laga Ho To Mafh Kardijiyega...(Ab Iss Ka Bura Mat Maniyega... )**Khush Rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care*...**God bless You.


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3rd October 2005, 05:47 AM

Dear Jas,

Acacha likha hai tumne bahaut sirf writing se dekhen to...hai bahauts ad but its nice...feelings ko utaar dena chahiye kaagaz pe chahe woh sad feelings ho yaa happy...

It was nice!!!

Be happy!!!

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Kut jaayegi zindagee yunhi, hum kis taak main hain
khaa chuke hain zakhm phir bhi zindagi ki phiraak main hain.


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I like ur feeling its very true. Keep it up.

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3rd October 2005, 12:24 PM

khushiyan kya bantenge hum,muskurana bhi bhul chuke,
kya karein humne to sada,aashqon ke haar piroye hai!


Dear Ruhani

Arrey yeh kya likh diya.........tum to sabko kushian banti ho.......tumhey itney sweet logon ka sath mila hay.....phir rona kyon.........Ek geet yaad aa raha hay.........

yeh safer bahut hay kathin mager na udas ho mere humsafer

Umeedon ka daman kabhi mat chodna........shayad kuch sapney aur umeedain hi hotey hain jo Zindagi se jughney ki prerna aur shakti dete hain.........abt ur Rachna it was a nicely written perfect creation.....keep writing

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Re: zakhm - 3rd October 2005, 05:06 PM

Originally posted by ruhani
i know today my feelings wud hurt many but then i do need them here with their valuable suggestions as sumtimes in life u feel so low that sumtimes u just cant think on anything else n ur mind is just concentrated which cud hurt many of u. neways life had been going quiet dull in past ,so here again with few thoughts just to take out my inner. thx for always being there to read me. take care n may god bless u all with his finnest glitters.
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guzari zindagi ke pal dekho,aise humne khoye hai,
abb kya batayein aapko ki,aaj hum kyun roye hai!

khushiyan kya bantenge hum,muskurana bhi bhul chuke,
kya karein humne to sada,aashqon ke haar piroye hai!

isse badhkar aur kya kar sakti hoon mein,
dosron ke zakhm bhi humne,aapne khoon se doye hai!

laash utha kar kandhon par ,khud ko hi dafan kiya,
dekho aapni maut pe khud hi aaj hum roye hai!

itna kar tu rahem tu maula,aaj sula de"jas" ko,
lagta hai aise hum jaise,janmon se na soye hai!


Dear Gf Jas...!

Ehsaas hota hai ki aap ne dard ke saagar main iss kalaam ko
douboya hai...!

Acha laga paDhkar

Apne sehat ka thik tarah se khayaal rakhna...thik hai...?



Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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3rd October 2005, 05:07 PM

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Tee Jasoo ji aur Aansoo ji,

Aap dono ne mil kar bahut khoob likha hai. Yunhi likhte rahiyega... na aap kabhi inka na kabhi woh aapka saath chodenge...right...

Apna khayal rakhna...
Rohin
dear rohin,
i was dead sure about how wud u react with this thought of mine, but then i felt tht sum things are better expressed in silence rather than expressing what to say. past few days, hmm i just dont know whats in my mind, my inner but yes its true tht things werent well at my end.not getting more into it the only thing which shooked me was my moms pain as drs have a doubt tht she is suffering frm a disease called cancer. well yet reports are not sure , all tests are being done, but as a child i just cant even dream about such thing.i m feeling very lonely n low these days n yes its true tht their was none with me at this phase of my life. no one means no one. i m srry if i was wrong in expressing my thoughts which hurted u too but my dear buddy wen u are just surrounded with sorrows n u just dont get to see one small light of happiness what wud u do. neways i think kuch zadda hi keh gayi aaj. nahi chahte,nahi likhghi jas but then where to out burst my pain , my tears? thx for replying buddy. may be i failed today tht i cud never express to my best friends too what are feelings? take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters. dost hasna bhi tabhi aata hai wen u have a reason to smile n srry to say jas has no reason in life to smile for.
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mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

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Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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Re: zakhm - 3rd October 2005, 05:17 PM

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i know today my feelings wud hurt many but then i do need them here with their valuable suggestions as sumtimes in life u feel so low that sumtimes u just cant think on anything else n ur mind is just concentrated which cud hurt many of u. neways life had been going quiet dull in past ,so here again with few thoughts just to take out my inner. thx for always being there to read me. take care n may god bless u all with his finnest glitters.
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guzari zindagi ke pal dekho,aise humne khoye hai,
abb kya batayein aapko ki,aaj hum kyun roye hai!

khushiyan kya bantenge hum,muskurana bhi bhul chuke,
kya karein humne to sada,aashqon ke haar piroye hai!

isse badhkar aur kya kar sakti hoon mein,
dosron ke zakhm bhi humne,aapne khoon se doye hai!

laash utha kar kandhon par ,khud ko hi dafan kiya,
dekho aapni maut pe khud hi aaj hum roye hai!

itna kar tu rahem tu maula,aaj sula de"jas" ko,
lagta hai aise hum jaise,janmon se na soye hai!


Di.. kya kahoon..



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jas di........
kuch kehne ki haalat me nahi chhoda apne.......
di.....bahut bahut dukh hota hai padh kar apko.......seriously kahoon to main kabhi kabhi khud ko itna bebas samajhti hoon ki kaash kabhi main apke kaam aa paati ya apke chehre pe hansi lane me mera kabhi to koi haath ho........sach di....aaj pehli baar shweta(kuhulika) ka footnote samajh me aaya...
duniya me kitna gham hai,
mera gam kitna kam hai


ab kya kareiN di........dukh haiN ki kam hi nahi hote.....!!!!
bas apke liye sahche dil se pray hi kar sakti hoon ki aap jald se jald khushi ki panaahoN me aa jao.....gham ka door dor tak koi naam-o-NishaaN na ho........
plz be happy alwaz.......

wid best wishes,
KaSaK..........
my dearest kasak,
samjh sakti hoon ki jab koi aapne aziz ko gammon ke samundar mein doobe hue dekhta hai, khud ko bebass pata hai. samjh sakti hoon wat u felt after reading me but then jo gamn mere hisse mein khuda ne bakshe hain unko mujhe akele hi accept karna hai. mana ki khusi aur gamn ke sangam mein humein har mushkil ka samna has kar tey karna chahiye but then sumtimes things are just not in ur hands n sum sudden shocks really shook ur mind , ur soul. tum humesha hi mere paas ho dear . dil se agar pray karna chahti ho to pray for my mom. sahyad aaj unhein sab ki blessings ki zaroorat hai. sach mein kasak khush rehna chahti hai jas but shayad iski jholi mein khuda ne yeh saugat bakhshi nahi. neways i was happy to read ur reply n ur lovely concern. always keep smiling in this bitter world. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
with love
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mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

*****************************

Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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3rd October 2005, 06:13 PM

Jasleen,

DARD.... Is shabd kar arth samjho...
Aur shayad Aansoon ka bhi...

Tumhari MOM abhi tumhare saath hain... aur hamesha rahengi...
Aaj jab woh tumhare saath hai to tum kahin woh sorry to say this... but you are crying over thing that might happen or that will happen in future... for god sake realise what you are doing to yourself... marna to sabko hai aaj nahi to kal... kya yeh soch kar ki shayad kuch dino mein mein andha ho jaonga to aaj se hi dekhna band kar doon???????????
I am sure you understand what I mean.... aur apni mummy ka hosla badhao... yunh tuto nahi... jo tuut kar bikhar jaate hain... woh kachde ke dabbe mein paaye jaate hain....
Khud pe agar tumhe taras aa raha hai to mujhe bilkul bhi nahi aa rahi hai... kehta aaya hoon aur keh raha hoon aur kehta rahoonga jab tak nahi samjhogi....

Pain is not a friend.....it is your worst enemy....

tumhe kya dard mein rehne se aansoon bahane se jyada khushi milti hai... maana dard hota hai sabhi ko hota hai... magar koi dard ke talash nahi karta... tum to lagta hai dard ki talash mein bhatakti rehti ho.... i am rebuking you in public.... but I guess it had to be done... you know I do not say things till they cross the limits beyond comprehension...

I hope you still didn't get it.... because yeh jo tum kehti ho na ki mein apne dost ko apni feelings nahi samjha payi... please.... realise that very few people understand .... I understood what was too be understood....

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3rd October 2005, 06:25 PM

rohin is right ...
tht is all i can say...
there isnt ne one whoz always happy...
every one has their own share of grief n pain
but then u hav to fight against it
instead of cryin over a thin tht hasnt gone ur way
y dont u think abt the mistake n think abt how it has to be rectified
its easier to b said than to be done
but u hav to try....
i hav a lot to talk to u ..
may b ven i come online , i will
take care


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Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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3rd October 2005, 06:44 PM

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Jasleen,

DARD.... Is shabd kar arth samjho...
Aur shayad Aansoon ka bhi...

Tumhari MOM abhi tumhare saath hain... aur hamesha rahengi...
Aaj jab woh tumhare saath hai to tum kahin woh sorry to say this... but you are crying over thing that might happen or that will happen in future... for god sake realise what you are doing to yourself... marna to sabko hai aaj nahi to kal... kya yeh soch kar ki shayad kuch dino mein mein andha ho jaonga to aaj se hi dekhna band kar doon???????????
I am sure you understand what I mean.... aur apni mummy ka hosla badhao... yunh tuto nahi... jo tuut kar bikhar jaate hain... woh kachde ke dabbe mein paaye jaate hain....
Khud pe agar tumhe taras aa raha hai to mujhe bilkul bhi nahi aa rahi hai... kehta aaya hoon aur keh raha hoon aur kehta rahoonga jab tak nahi samjhogi....

Pain is not a friend.....it is your worst enemy....

tumhe kya dard mein rehne se aansoon bahane se jyada khushi milti hai... maana dard hota hai sabhi ko hota hai... magar koi dard ke talash nahi karta... tum to lagta hai dard ki talash mein bhatakti rehti ho.... i am rebuking you in public.... but I guess it had to be done... you know I do not say things till they cross the limits beyond comprehension...

I hope you still didn't get it.... because yeh jo tum kehti ho na ki mein apne dost ko apni feelings nahi samjha payi... please.... realise that very few people understand .... I understood what was too be understood....

Take Care
Rohin
rohin,
u read my words still cudnt get me yet too. not getting more into it let me clear out one thing here in open today. gamn kisse nahi hai. we all suffer as happiness n sorrows are part n parcel in ones life.yes cumwat may we still have to reflect smile on our face even thought we are crying frm our inner. now cuming to my lines, its not my real tears tht are coming out to gain symathy or to pity myself , but yes my heart is crying. wat do u think if i feel low wud i be able to handle my mom. i said all this becoz she is one of my hopes for my existing in this bitter world. my dear friend i just said so becoz yes its true tht i really have no reasons to smile n for those whom i still living , it wont be easy for me to see them in pain. hey she is my mom yaar. i know i have to be tough in front of her n show a broad smile but then my inner is crying. i know we shud not presume things on our own before the final results but dont u think a fear is there. u say tht one shud be normal. cant u see me. if i had not been normal why wud i be here too. if i m among u tht means i m trying to forget my pain for sum time. why is tht u always have to take my writings negatively. cant it be read with a positive attitude. u understand me well buddy. but again sum days back i told u tht wat i m in front of all of u may be i m not the same. well i just tried to share my pain but never thought tht u all will take me so negative. even me knows tht life n death is a game we all r playing n u never know who will be out in the next step. its very easy to say buddy but wen faced in reality it shatters u. my dear friend my mom is my everything. u know wat all me going through. if anything happens to her my everything is finished. may be now u count me as selfish bhut buddy arent we possesive for our parents,. well i never cud understand wat parents values are but yes today i understood becoz i myself is a mother now. i know wat pains do mothers take for their children. yesterday i got the news. it shooked me. i was unable to outburst my inner . so thought to pen down my feelings. but see today i came back with a normal mood but then u all instead took me in positive way ended with thinking tht i love finding ways to give myself pain. hey man who loves to suffer. i think no one, but sumtimes life becomes so helpless for u tht everything seems to be negative, instead u all tried to give me a positive approach of life u started blaming n pin pointing me tht i love being in tears n pains. wow this reply made me smile buddy. thx for understanding me so well. may be i cudnt have done so. cum on i m ready to face ur replies today with a debate here. so feel free to reply me so tht even i outburst all wats hidden deep inside me. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
with love
urs jas(waiting for ur reply)



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na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

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Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

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rohin,
u read my words still cudnt get me yet too. not getting more into it let me clear out one thing here in open today. gamn kisse nahi hai. we all suffer as happiness n sorrows are part n parcel in ones life.yes cumwat may we still have to reflect smile on our face even thought we are crying frm our inner. now cuming to my lines, its not my real tears tht are coming out to gain symathy or to pity myself , but yes my heart is crying. wat do u think if i feel low wud i be able to handle my mom. i said all this becoz she is one of my hopes for my existing in this bitter world. my dear friend i just said so becoz yes its true tht i really have no reasons to smile n for those whom i still living , it wont be easy for me to see them in pain. hey she is my mom yaar. i know i have to be tough in front of her n show a broad smile but then my inner is crying. i know we shud not presume things on our own before the final results but dont u think a fear is there. u say tht one shud be normal. cant u see me. if i had not been normal why wud i be here too. if i m among u tht means i m trying to forget my pain for sum time. why is tht u always have to take my writings negatively. cant it be read with a positive attitude. u understand me well buddy. but again sum days back i told u tht wat i m in front of all of u may be i m not the same. well i just tried to share my pain but never thought tht u all will take me so negative. even me knows tht life n death is a game we all r playing n u never know who will be out in the next step. its very easy to say buddy but wen faced in reality it shatters u. my dear friend my mom is my everything. u know wat all me going through. if anything happens to her my everything is finished. may be now u count me as selfish bhut buddy arent we possesive for our parents,. well i never cud understand wat parents values are but yes today i understood becoz i myself is a mother now. i know wat pains do mothers take for their children. yesterday i got the news. it shooked me. i was unable to outburst my inner . so thought to pen down my feelings. but see today i came back with a normal mood but then u all instead took me in positive way ended with thinking tht i love finding ways to give myself pain. hey man who loves to suffer. i think no one, but sumtimes life becomes so helpless for u tht everything seems to be negative, instead u all tried to give me a positive approach of life u started blaming n pin pointing me tht i love being in tears n pains. wow this reply made me smile buddy. thx for understanding me so well. may be i cudnt have done so. cum on i m ready to face ur replies today with a debate here. so feel free to reply me so tht even i outburst all wats hidden deep inside me. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
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urs jas(waiting for ur reply)
Good you replied... now read what you posted ( I mean the poetry) at the start of the thread and what you wrote now... if you can make out the difference... you will realise what I mean...
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dear rohin,
i would love if u explain me as my mind is still diverted n its difficult to understand wen sumtimes u arent in tht position to do so. plz help me out if u can. i m waiting for ur reply. may be ur reply makes me comfortable



mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

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Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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Sweet Jasleen...

Learning about your mother saddened me immensely...and to find outlet for your pain here is alright...Shayri-e-Dard is a hopelessly used forum...and we know why...kyunki zindagi mein khushiyon se kahin zyada badhkar gham milte hain...me and the entire shayri.com is with you, beside you, praying, giving support...

but like Rohin said...to worry about something that may or may not happen is not wise...tum muskurahat se apni Mom ke saath waqt bitaao...unko ummiid do, unko jeene ki will power do...gar tum hi udaas ho gayin tau jispe yeh pahaad bharpa hai uska kya hoga...

faith and hope keep you going...and pls. never lose either...may god bless you and your Mom...

luv, di


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"i know today my feelings wud hurt many but then i do need them here with their valuable suggestions as sumtimes in life u feel so low that sumtimes u just cant think on anything else n ur mind is just concentrated which cud hurt many of u."

Realise something.... God help those who help themselves... stop depending on others.... why for a simple reason... in present world noody cares.. all will have to deal with their problem themselves... do not even suggest to get suggestions... people will take you wrongly... which I would not like people to think of about my friend...

"neways life had been going quiet dull in past ,so here again with few thoughts just to take out my inner. "

Inner vent and frustrations grow but do not drag your past into today... you were sad yesterday... but do not drag it into present.. you mix your past with present and that just piles and hurts you more...

khushiyan kya bantenge hum,muskurana bhi bhul chuke,
kya karein humne to sada,aashqon ke haar piroye hai!


Haar ko utar kar tod do.... aansoon ko sirf bahate hain sajate nahi hain....na hi koi unki mala banata hai... yeh comparison hi batata hai ki insaan kitna pesimistic ho gaya hai....

isse badhkar aur kya kar sakti hoon mein,
dosron ke zakhm bhi humne,aapne khoon se doye hai!


Dosron ke zakhm ko apne khoon se??? samjh aa raha hai kya likha hai... ye to jiske zakhm hai unke zakhmo ko nasoor banane ke barabar hain...

laash utha kar kandhon par ,khud ko hi dafan kiya,
dekho aapni maut pe khud hi aaj hum roye hai!


Kya tumhe nahi lagta yeh line bata rahi hai...ki tumne apne aap par kya dukh dale hain... iska matlab to yehi hua tum dukh ko kured rahi thi khud hi... isse dukh dhondna na kahoon to kya kahoon...

itna kar tu rahem tu maula,aaj sula de"jas" ko,
lagta hai aise hum jaise,janmon se na soye hai!


ismein bhagwan kya karega... jab khud hi tumne apne aap ko dafan kar hi diya hai to ab bhagwan kya karega... tumne to kar diya jo karna tha.... Totally negative approach...

Ab aate hain jo tumne mujhe reply kiya...

rohin,
u read my words still cudnt get me yet too. not getting more into it let me clear out one thing here in open today. gamn kisse nahi hai. we all suffer as happiness n sorrows are part n parcel in ones life.yes cumwat may we still have to reflect smile on our face even thought we are crying frm our inner. now cuming to my lines, its not my real tears tht are coming out to gain symathy or to pity myself , but yes my heart is crying.


For Once let me make it clear I understand things...

wat do u think if i feel low wud i be able to handle my mom. i said all this becoz she is one of my hopes for my existing in this bitter world. my dear friend i just said so becoz yes its true tht i really have no reasons to smile n for those whom i still living , it wont be easy for me to see them in pain. hey she is my mom yaar.

Mom ka dil rakhti ho to samjho... tumhare bete ko hi jaroorat hai tumhari... he is a reason enough for u to smile....

i know i have to be tough in front of her n show a broad smile but then my inner is crying. i know we shud not presume things on our own before the final results but dont u think a fear is there. u say tht one shud be normal. cant u see me. if i had not been normal why wud i be here too. if i m among u tht means i m trying to forget my pain for sum time.

See this is the attitude that lacks in the poem... b'coz if you just think and write negative it does not take out your inner feelings it just embeds itself more deeply...

why is tht u always have to take my writings negatively. cant it be read with a positive attitude. u understand me well buddy. but again sum days back i told u tht wat i m in front of all of u may be i m not the same.

Difference kya hai tumme ya aur kissi mein ... yahan mukhauta pehan kar hi aana hai to khushi ka pehno...

well i just tried to share my pain but never thought tht u "all" will take me so negative.

Not all just me whom you are talking to currently...

even me knows tht life n death is a game we all r playing n u never know who will be out in the next step. its very easy to say buddy but wen faced in reality it shatters u. my dear friend my mom is my everything. u know wat all me going through. if anything happens to her my everything is finished. may be now u count me as selfish bhut buddy arent we possesive for our parents,.

I agree... but your post did not say this... it talks about already lost feelings rather then a feeling that you are loosing it...

well i never cud understand wat parents values are but yes today i understood becoz i myself is a mother now. i know wat pains do mothers take for their children.

Please ek maa ke mamta ko dard ka naam mat do... its disgusting... she does not feel pain when she has to take care of their child... we see it as pain as we cannot do it ourselves... they do it for love... and its not pain... its love... love so that they can see a smile on their child's face... if you think you take pains to do it for your child then you are mistaken buddy... I am not a father yet... but I guess I need to learn if what you are saying is correct...

yesterday i got the news. it shooked me. i was unable to outburst my inner . so thought to pen down my feelings. but see today i came back with a normal mood but then u all instead took me in positive way ended with thinking tht i love finding ways to give myself pain.

Positive likhogi to samjhoonga..

hey man who loves to suffer. i think no one, but sumtimes life becomes so helpless for u tht everything seems to be negative, instead u all tried to give me a positive approach of life u started blaming n pin pointing me tht i love being in tears n pains. wow this reply made me smile buddy. thx for understanding me so well. may be i cudnt have done so. cum on i m ready to face ur replies today with a debate here.

Debate karne ko taiyar ho positive baat karne ko bhi taiyar ho magar karti nahi... yeh to wahi baat ho gayi ki

ladai ke maidan mein taiyaar hain hum ladne ko...
khudkhushi kar chuke hain
magar taiyar hain shaheed hone ko

I think this is explained well enough....


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Re: Re: zakhm - 4th October 2005, 09:23 AM

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hi,ruhani ji,
bohat hi khoob bohat hi betarin andaz mein aap ne apne dard ka izhaar kiya hai aapke har lafz se dard saaf nazar araha hai
bohat acche isi tara likhte rahiye aur apna khayaal rakhiye
khuda hafiz.......
hi,
i m srry i dont know ur name. neways its a pleasure to know tht u loved reading my thoughts. dard hm kya hai yeh. a word i think on which wenever i wrote cudnt express in a efficient way but yes today the way u appreciated my thoughts, i m obliged. thx for showing ur concern buddy. n do keep penning down ur thoughts too. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.



mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

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Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
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Re: You Have Your Family You Know~Think Of Them :)** - 4th October 2005, 09:33 AM

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Dear Jasleen Jee, Aman(Rahi) Jee Ko Mail Ki Hain~Ummid Karti Houn Ki Aman Jee Khud Ka Khayaal Rakh Rahe Hain~Aur Jald Hi Unki Tabiyat Theek Ho Jaayegi**Duwaaen To Hamesha Rehti Hain Unke Liye~Aap Sabhi Ke Liye Bhi...**Main Aapki Dard Ko Samajh To Shayaad Nahin Sakti Lekin Mehsous Zarour Kar Sakti Houn**Aap Akeli Nahin Ho~Aur Iss Liye Aap Aisi Duwa Nahin Mang Sakti Ho~You Do Know What I Am Talking About~I Hope You Do**Wo Kehte Hain Na Ki~"Gham Ke Andheri Raat Mein_Dil Ko Na Beqarar Kar_Subha Zarour Aayegi_Subha Ka Intezaar Kar~Haan, Hain To Gane Ki Bol~Aur Ye~"Zamane Mein Sabhi Ko Milte Hain Gham_Tum Na Ghabrana_Yahan Harr Raat Ki Subha Hain Hamdam_Tum Na Ghabrana~Gane Ki Bol Ye Bhi Thi~Aman Jee Ko Kehdiya Hain Ki Aapko Bhej De~Aur Haan, Mushkil Danny Ke Paas Bhi Hain_I Am Sure He Can Give You The Songs~I Made A CD Of 21 Songs~And Me Too Listen To The Songs Sometimes~I Feel Quite Good & I Hope You Will Feel Good Too **Aur Keya Kahoun...Aapko~Baas Ye Ki Duwaaen Hamesha Rahegi...Aapke Liye~Dil Ki Gehraaion Se Dher Dher Sare Phoul_Shukriya**I Hope You Can Understand...! Agar Kuchh Bura Laga Ho To Mafh Kardijiyega...(Ab Iss Ka Bura Mat Maniyega... )**Khush Rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care*...**God bless You.


*Keep smilling.......**
dear shimul ji,
well kal se aman ji se baat nahi ho paayi hai but yes for sure he is taking gud care of himself. nahi karewnge to hum sab hai na unko rest karwane ke liye. well i wud ask amanush to give me the file of those songs as wud love to listen too. well i m srry agar mere words gave u pain n for sure i wud keep things in mind before posting anything else. bura aapki baat ka nahi kar sakti kyoki aapne aur rohin ne jo kaha samjh sakti hoon. aur waise bhi doston ki baat ka bura man na jas ne nahi seekha. this word has no place in my dictionary. so bura kya hota hai i dont know. neways it was apleasure reading ur reply here shimul jee. yes u said it in very efficient way tht after every nite u have a brite sunny morning.sum nites r just long.may be its one of those long nites.....n yes its true the day after will be really bright n bring us our smile back.i totally agree with ur thoughts buddy. thx for ur blessings shimul ji. n the same goes for u. take care n always keep smiling. god bless u with his finnest glitters
with love
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mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

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Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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4th October 2005, 09:38 AM

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Dear Jas,

Acacha likha hai tumne bahaut sirf writing se dekhen to...hai bahauts ad but its nice...feelings ko utaar dena chahiye kaagaz pe chahe woh sad feelings ho yaa happy...

It was nice!!!

Be happy!!!

Luv
Palak :-)
dear palak,
ur read it in a positive way i m obliged. well its gud to know u read it as words n thx for appreciating my writing. yes its true tht wen u have the ability to write its better to pen down ur thoughts rather than making urself dumbhead. i m happy to read ur reply buddy. well i m always happy among all of u. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
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mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

*****************************

Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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Re: zakhm - 4th October 2005, 09:47 AM

khushiyan kya bantenge hum,muskurana bhi bhul chuke,
kya karein humne to sada,aashqon ke haar piroye hai!

isse badhkar aur kya kar sakti hoon mein,
dosron ke zakhm bhi humne,aapne khoon se doye hai!

itna kar tu rahem tu maula,aaj sula de"jas" ko,
lagta hai aise hum jaise,janmon se na soye hai!


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khaa chuke hain zakhm phir bhi zindagi ki phiraak main hain.


Take Care
Lokesh
my dearest friend lokesh,
what shud i call it. just can say tht my day is made today. after such a long gap it was a pleasure to read a reply from ur side. had always been waiting for this, n i m so happy today. chahunghi ki tum aate raho n be with me always as i really need u buddy. its been ages we not been in touch but still we really do miss each others writings. gr8 to read ur reply today. loved reading ur lines. keep flowing ur thoughts ahead too n keep penning down. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters. few thoughts cud write after reading ur lines. hope u love reading it n do let me know................

jaane kitne zakhm diye iss mehmaan zindagi ne,
kabhi bankar dushman kabhi dil ka mehmaan bankar!

with love
urs jas



mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

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Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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Re: Great - 4th October 2005, 09:57 AM

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I like ur feeling its very true. Keep it up.

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dear riyaz,
u loved reading my feelings, pleasure is all mine. thx for a positive note. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
with love
ruhi



mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

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Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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khushiyan kya bantenge hum,muskurana bhi bhul chuke,
kya karein humne to sada,aashqon ke haar piroye hai!


Dear Ruhani

Arrey yeh kya likh diya.........tum to sabko kushian banti ho.......tumhey itney sweet logon ka sath mila hay.....phir rona kyon.........Ek geet yaad aa raha hay.........

yeh safer bahut hay kathin mager na udas ho mere humsafer

Umeedon ka daman kabhi mat chodna........shayad kuch sapney aur umeedain hi hotey hain jo Zindagi se jughney ki prerna aur shakti dete hain.........abt ur Rachna it was a nicely written perfect creation.....keep writing

God bless you
Keep Smiling
dear di,
its true wat all u said . being with all of u brings a smile on my face. di halat kuch aise aate hai zindagi mein ki chah kar bhi hum usse muskura kar nahi accept kar sakte but yes aisa nahi hai ki we just make ourselves just low becoz we didnt get happiness. i know with pace of time i too wud smile in this bitter world., but sumtimes things are just not in ur control n u cant stop thinking negative. i know this attitude of mine is wrong but then i make sure tht i need to be back again with a positive approach. sum nites are really long di but yes i do hope for a bright new morning too. as words u appreciated my thoughts, i m obliged.its alwasy a pleasure reading ur reply on my post. gives me a moral boost n keeps my spirits high to write futher too. thx for always being their with me to guide me too with short examples. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.

with love
urs ruhani



mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

*****************************

Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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Re: Re: zakhm - 4th October 2005, 10:14 AM

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Originally posted by ruhani
i know today my feelings wud hurt many but then i do need them here with their valuable suggestions as sumtimes in life u feel so low that sumtimes u just cant think on anything else n ur mind is just concentrated which cud hurt many of u. neways life had been going quiet dull in past ,so here again with few thoughts just to take out my inner. thx for always being there to read me. take care n may god bless u all with his finnest glitters.
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guzari zindagi ke pal dekho,aise humne khoye hai,
abb kya batayein aapko ki,aaj hum kyun roye hai!

khushiyan kya bantenge hum,muskurana bhi bhul chuke,
kya karein humne to sada,aashqon ke haar piroye hai!

isse badhkar aur kya kar sakti hoon mein,
dosron ke zakhm bhi humne,aapne khoon se doye hai!

laash utha kar kandhon par ,khud ko hi dafan kiya,
dekho aapni maut pe khud hi aaj hum roye hai!

itna kar tu rahem tu maula,aaj sula de"jas" ko,
lagta hai aise hum jaise,janmon se na soye hai!


Dear Gf Jas...!

Ehsaas hota hai ki aap ne dard ke saagar main iss kalaam ko
douboya hai...!

Acha laga paDhkar

Apne sehat ka thik tarah se khayaal rakhna...thik hai...?

Dear Bf amanush.........
watever u said touched my soul. loved the reply given by u. yes its true tht u cud make out so easily n this is also a truth tht today u are again a reason of smile. u cud make out my situation of writing, its a pleasure to have sumone in life who understands u the way u are. thx so much for always being there with me in my ups n downs in my life. its a pleasure to know tht u liked reading my words. thx for keeping my spirits high. take care nn may god bless u with his finnest glitters.

with love
urs gf jas



mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

*****************************

Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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4th October 2005, 10:40 AM

ruhani

aap ko shayed mein ne pehli baar parha hai.

mujhe aap ke likhne mein voh talab nazer aayee hai jo yahan umooman naheen hai.

aap isi tarah likhte rahein.
mera aap ko ek mashwara hai ke aap parhein ziayaada. apne alfaaz ke zakheere ko barahein.
jaise jaise aap ke paas alfaaz ka zakheera barhe gaa, aap ke kalam ki rawaani barhti jaaye gi.

mein dua go hoon zindagi mein aap ki kaamiyaabiyon ke liye, khushiyon ke liye.

God bless you.

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good to hear you after a long time.

Zakhm jo thay mehmaan raahbur bun gaye hain
ansoon jo na thay aapne aur door ho gaye hain

Kys kareen, sansoon jaise zakhm bhi har pul aate hain. Shayad sansoon jitnee zaroorat humain zakhmoon ki bhee hai... jeene ke liye... Neways it felt good to read you.

Keep writing!
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Re: Re: zakhm - 5th October 2005, 03:40 PM

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Di.. kya kahoon..



aapki sweetheart
dear sweetheart,
ur silence made me realise wat u really neede to say. sumtimes words are better expressed in silence than in expressing it. tumne reply diya teh dil se shukriya. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
with love
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mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

*****************************

Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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5th October 2005, 03:42 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by karthik
rohin is right ...
tht is all i can say...
there isnt ne one whoz always happy...
every one has their own share of grief n pain
but then u hav to fight against it
instead of cryin over a thin tht hasnt gone ur way
y dont u think abt the mistake n think abt how it has to be rectified
its easier to b said than to be done
but u hav to try....
i hav a lot to talk to u ..
may b ven i come online , i will
take care
do i need to say anything else karthik. i got u wat u really needed to say through ur sweet pm. thx buddy. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
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mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

*****************************

Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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5th October 2005, 03:48 PM

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Sweet Jasleen...

Learning about your mother saddened me immensely...and to find outlet for your pain here is alright...Shayri-e-Dard is a hopelessly used forum...and we know why...kyunki zindagi mein khushiyon se kahin zyada badhkar gham milte hain...me and the entire shayri.com is with you, beside you, praying, giving support...

but like Rohin said...to worry about something that may or may not happen is not wise...tum muskurahat se apni Mom ke saath waqt bitaao...unko ummiid do, unko jeene ki will power do...gar tum hi udaas ho gayin tau jispe yeh pahaad bharpa hai uska kya hoga...

faith and hope keep you going...and pls. never lose either...may god bless you and your Mom...

luv, di
dear paras di,
shayad uss din me was not in my normal senses n thts why i asked u to delete my post but yes the way u boosted my spirits , i just dont hv words to express wat i really need to tell u. di thx for ur support n thx for being there when me was really feeling low. ur pms really motivated me n yes surely i wud take care of rohins words. after all he is a sweet friend of mine n has rights to guide me. i totally agree tht sorrows are much more than happiness n i know i had lost hope in life at one moment but yes its true u all opened my eyes n i just need to say thx frm bottom chore of my heart. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
with love
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mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

*****************************

Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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5th October 2005, 03:53 PM

Quote:
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"i know today my feelings wud hurt many but then i do need them here with their valuable suggestions as sumtimes in life u feel so low that sumtimes u just cant think on anything else n ur mind is just concentrated which cud hurt many of u."

Realise something.... God help those who help themselves... stop depending on others.... why for a simple reason... in present world noody cares.. all will have to deal with their problem themselves... do not even suggest to get suggestions... people will take you wrongly... which I would not like people to think of about my friend...

"neways life had been going quiet dull in past ,so here again with few thoughts just to take out my inner. "

Inner vent and frustrations grow but do not drag your past into today... you were sad yesterday... but do not drag it into present.. you mix your past with present and that just piles and hurts you more...

khushiyan kya bantenge hum,muskurana bhi bhul chuke,
kya karein humne to sada,aashqon ke haar piroye hai!


Haar ko utar kar tod do.... aansoon ko sirf bahate hain sajate nahi hain....na hi koi unki mala banata hai... yeh comparison hi batata hai ki insaan kitna pesimistic ho gaya hai....

isse badhkar aur kya kar sakti hoon mein,
dosron ke zakhm bhi humne,aapne khoon se doye hai!


Dosron ke zakhm ko apne khoon se??? samjh aa raha hai kya likha hai... ye to jiske zakhm hai unke zakhmo ko nasoor banane ke barabar hain...

laash utha kar kandhon par ,khud ko hi dafan kiya,
dekho aapni maut pe khud hi aaj hum roye hai!


Kya tumhe nahi lagta yeh line bata rahi hai...ki tumne apne aap par kya dukh dale hain... iska matlab to yehi hua tum dukh ko kured rahi thi khud hi... isse dukh dhondna na kahoon to kya kahoon...

itna kar tu rahem tu maula,aaj sula de"jas" ko,
lagta hai aise hum jaise,janmon se na soye hai!


ismein bhagwan kya karega... jab khud hi tumne apne aap ko dafan kar hi diya hai to ab bhagwan kya karega... tumne to kar diya jo karna tha.... Totally negative approach...

Ab aate hain jo tumne mujhe reply kiya...

rohin,
u read my words still cudnt get me yet too. not getting more into it let me clear out one thing here in open today. gamn kisse nahi hai. we all suffer as happiness n sorrows are part n parcel in ones life.yes cumwat may we still have to reflect smile on our face even thought we are crying frm our inner. now cuming to my lines, its not my real tears tht are coming out to gain symathy or to pity myself , but yes my heart is crying.


For Once let me make it clear I understand things...

wat do u think if i feel low wud i be able to handle my mom. i said all this becoz she is one of my hopes for my existing in this bitter world. my dear friend i just said so becoz yes its true tht i really have no reasons to smile n for those whom i still living , it wont be easy for me to see them in pain. hey she is my mom yaar.

Mom ka dil rakhti ho to samjho... tumhare bete ko hi jaroorat hai tumhari... he is a reason enough for u to smile....

i know i have to be tough in front of her n show a broad smile but then my inner is crying. i know we shud not presume things on our own before the final results but dont u think a fear is there. u say tht one shud be normal. cant u see me. if i had not been normal why wud i be here too. if i m among u tht means i m trying to forget my pain for sum time.

See this is the attitude that lacks in the poem... b'coz if you just think and write negative it does not take out your inner feelings it just embeds itself more deeply...

why is tht u always have to take my writings negatively. cant it be read with a positive attitude. u understand me well buddy. but again sum days back i told u tht wat i m in front of all of u may be i m not the same.

Difference kya hai tumme ya aur kissi mein ... yahan mukhauta pehan kar hi aana hai to khushi ka pehno...

well i just tried to share my pain but never thought tht u "all" will take me so negative.

Not all just me whom you are talking to currently...

even me knows tht life n death is a game we all r playing n u never know who will be out in the next step. its very easy to say buddy but wen faced in reality it shatters u. my dear friend my mom is my everything. u know wat all me going through. if anything happens to her my everything is finished. may be now u count me as selfish bhut buddy arent we possesive for our parents,.

I agree... but your post did not say this... it talks about already lost feelings rather then a feeling that you are loosing it...

well i never cud understand wat parents values are but yes today i understood becoz i myself is a mother now. i know wat pains do mothers take for their children.

Please ek maa ke mamta ko dard ka naam mat do... its disgusting... she does not feel pain when she has to take care of their child... we see it as pain as we cannot do it ourselves... they do it for love... and its not pain... its love... love so that they can see a smile on their child's face... if you think you take pains to do it for your child then you are mistaken buddy... I am not a father yet... but I guess I need to learn if what you are saying is correct...

yesterday i got the news. it shooked me. i was unable to outburst my inner . so thought to pen down my feelings. but see today i came back with a normal mood but then u all instead took me in positive way ended with thinking tht i love finding ways to give myself pain.

Positive likhogi to samjhoonga..

hey man who loves to suffer. i think no one, but sumtimes life becomes so helpless for u tht everything seems to be negative, instead u all tried to give me a positive approach of life u started blaming n pin pointing me tht i love being in tears n pains. wow this reply made me smile buddy. thx for understanding me so well. may be i cudnt have done so. cum on i m ready to face ur replies today with a debate here.

Debate karne ko taiyar ho positive baat karne ko bhi taiyar ho magar karti nahi... yeh to wahi baat ho gayi ki

ladai ke maidan mein taiyaar hain hum ladne ko...
khudkhushi kar chuke hain
magar taiyar hain shaheed hone ko

I think this is explained well enough....
i dont want to say anything anymore. may be i got wat i really need to pick from ur reply n wud make sure to keep ur words in future. thx for being there to let me realise my mistakes. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
with love
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mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

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Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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Re: Re: zakhm - 5th October 2005, 03:58 PM

Quote:
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khushiyan kya bantenge hum,muskurana bhi bhul chuke,
kya karein humne to sada,aashqon ke haar piroye hai!

isse badhkar aur kya kar sakti hoon mein,
dosron ke zakhm bhi humne,aapne khoon se doye hai!

itna kar tu rahem tu maula,aaj sula de"jas" ko,
lagta hai aise hum jaise,janmon se na soye hai!


RUHAANI JI
ek bahooot achi aur saaf koshish par meri daad kuboool kijiye,,,bahooot ache jazbaat hai jinhe aapne jubaan di hai....khaas kar yeh 3 sher behad ache lage...meri daad kuboool kijiye...take care
-MANOJ
manoj jee,
its a pleasure to know tht u loved reading my thoughts. its very rare tht i get to read ur replies but yes must say tht ur words give me a boost up to improve ahead n make sure to write more n more better ahead. thx for motivating my spirits to write ahead too.sumtimes my feelings hurt my close ones but then i really needed them to read it just as words but very few like u took it as a writing n i wud love to thank u frm bottom chore of my heart. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
with love
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mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

*****************************

Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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5th October 2005, 04:04 PM

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ruhani

aap ko shayed mein ne pehli baar parha hai.

mujhe aap ke likhne mein voh talab nazer aayee hai jo yahan umooman naheen hai.

aap isi tarah likhte rahein.
mera aap ko ek mashwara hai ke aap parhein ziayaada. apne alfaaz ke zakheere ko barahein.
jaise jaise aap ke paas alfaaz ka zakheera barhe gaa, aap ke kalam ki rawaani barhti jaaye gi.

mein dua go hoon zindagi mein aap ki kaamiyaabiyon ke liye, khushiyon ke liye.

God bless you.

musharrafhusain
respected sir,
first of all thx for replying me. my day is made. i m so happy tht i m unable to express wat i really need to say. the way u guided me to write ahead, i m really obliged. ur suggestions loved reading them n wud make sure to keep in mind in future too.aap yuhi mujhe guide karte rahiye as i really need u all to make me improve in future. thx so much. thx for ur blessings. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.

ruhani



mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

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Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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5th October 2005, 04:36 PM

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Originally posted by vaaiz
good to hear you after a long time.

Zakhm jo thay mehmaan raahbur bun gaye hain
ansoon jo na thay aapne aur door ho gaye hain

Kys kareen, sansoon jaise zakhm bhi har pul aate hain. Shayad sansoon jitnee zaroorat humain zakhmoon ki bhee hai... jeene ke liye... Neways it felt good to read you.

Keep writing!
Lokesh
hi lokesh,
same here. i m so happy to have u here today with me. was longing this since long back n must say tht i love to see ur presence n ur writings here oftenly. so a humble request do keep writing here plz. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
with love
urs jas

uthta duwan to dekha,duniya ne sarri to magar
yahan dil ko jalte lekin,na dekha kisi ne mera!



mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

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Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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5th October 2005, 06:10 PM

guzari zindagi ke pal dekho,aise humne khoye hai,
abb kya batayein aapko ki,aaj hum kyun roye hai!

tumne aasoon sada sabke_ hain poche .............ye kaam nahi aasan_ye sabke vas ki baat nahi hai ........tum hin ro dogi toh ......... kaise khwaab dikha paaogi


khushiyan kya bantenge hum,muskurana bhi bhul chuke,
kya karein humne to sada,aashqon ke haar piroye hai!

sach ahi dard sabhi ko milta hai ..........dard ke saath aaso mile toh ........dard kam ho jaate hai ...........kutch log aise bhi hain(like me ) wo ro kar bhi halka ho nahi paate ........aise asso sukh chuke hian ki _neer bhi aab nahi behte


isse badhkar aur kya kar sakti hoon mein,
dosron ke zakhm bhi humne,aapne khoon se doye hai!

sach hai ........sachchi hai in baaton main ..........dard chupa kar dusroo ko pyaar dena .......ye itna nahi aasaan .........tum ho bhali dil se .....issliye toh ye kar jaati ho


laash utha kar kandhon par ,khud ko hi dafan kiya,
dekho aapni maut pe khud hi aaj hum roye hai!

khaali haath hin aaye the ................khaali haath hin jaana hai .........do pal ka ye mela hai ...........fir sabko akele hin jaana hai ...............


itna kar tu rahem tu maula,aaj sula de"jas" ko,
lagta hai aise hum jaise,janmon se na soye hai!

sach hai ki dard aab saha nahi jaata ................jindagi se thak chuke hain ............thaki huii aankhe ............aab thoda aaraam chaahti hai.................

take care .....................
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7th October 2005, 03:03 AM

parween ji,
namaskaar. well i need to put up a request today. nothing personal but yes its creating mess on site n we love this place and the things that are troubling since past time would love to discuss here in open with u. sir shayad its not only me who already awared u about a member named chandsi ji. sir it has been noticed many times tht this member even despite given so many warnings is still just creating mess on each n every form. worse is she creates different ids n then in a very different manner reply to her posts which reflect tht the person who is writing is getting disturbed but worse later we come to know tht they its one person with two ids. well not going much into it, let me tell u wat happened yesterday with me. i read a post with the id named empty eyes. and in tht wat i noticed was tht chandsi ji has been replying continously n later a reply came of empth eyes which reflected tht she was confused of wat chandsi was doing on her post. i m sorry parween ji , i cudnt take this n i pmd empty eyes. here it goes as

ruhani wrote on 5th October 2005 02:11 PM:
hi buddy,
i m srry i dont know ur name. well i just read ur reply to chandsi ji. all i need to say forget to wat she is doing on site. just stay kool n keep posting ahead too. dont mess up with her. she is gonna just try to disturb u only. i hope i m not wrong in saying so. rest up to u. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.

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hey ruhani,
why r u saying like this that dont pay attention towards her.u didnt like my reply or her reply, is there any dispute with her. i like her replies then i replied her. thanks for taking care of me but she is not disturding me. as u r my friend she is also my friend.
ya u r little bit wrong in saying that i should not talk to her. i m sorry, but i didnt like ur way of saying that "i should not talk to her".
i think u dont like her. isnt it?

n u know my id u can call me by that...! i didnt told my name to anyone.

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now problem is tht i get such kind of pm which reflects tht the person is the same. sir i never ever stopped her from not talking to her. i just said stay away tht too becoz aman ji a senior member of our site has been troubled hell by chandsi ji with different ids. even through rough mails. sir a humble request please do look forward into the matter. i know here its not a big issue, but the problem is sumtimes we like replying to a writer but later things turn to be different. always i have noticed tht chandsi ji posts a post , later messes up with herself with different id n then we come to know the person is the same. this way its very difficult for us n i think now the time has come that at least me wont be giving replies to new ones out here as later may be its another post of so called chandsi ji. a humble request sir i personally dont have any problems with chandsi ji but the only problem is she is creating mess with different ids , n sumtimes we tend to miss sum of the wonderful writers out here becoz she doesnt let any post remain up n keeps on posting n we tend to miss sum wonderful creations becoz its taken to next page. i think its high time now n the moderators are requested to look forward in the matter. i m giving u below the link tht empty eyes posted n later chandsi replied in it many times n after tht empty eayes reply to her which made me give her a pm, n as usual i regreted as i think they are the same person. here is the link

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showth...;threadid=40529

sir if i was wrong in coming in open to put a request i m sorry before hand but then plz sir if possible look into the matter. few ids which i think belong to the same person . here is the list

chandsi, misti, empty eyes,tussiigr8ho,anmol khusi, n many more. plz sir do look into the matter its a request,else things are not going out fine here. thx so much for taking out time to read me. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.

ruhani or jasleen




sach nahi pata tha aapne kutch aisa likha hai .......................abhi abhi dhyaan gaya ......................or pata chala ki aapko mere wazah se kaafi takleef huii hai ................dard toh sabke ek jaise hin ..aapko dukhi kar ke mujhe kya milega ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,chaliye aab sach main jaati hoon ..................tussigr8 is shwetas id my mere saath hin rehti hai ................but its ok ....................chloo aap khush rahiye ...........sach agar mujhe pata hota mera yahan aana likhna reply dena sabko .................chubh raha hai ..................main sach main nahi aati ...............meri wajah se aap pareshaan mat hoiye ......................bye tc


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Bada hua to kya hua jaisay paid khajoor,
Panthi ko chhaya nahin, phal laagen ati door.

Nahaye dhoye kya bhala jo man ka mail na jaay
Meen sada jal mein rahe par tan ki baas na jaay

Akath Kahani Prem Ki, Kutch Kahi Na Jaye
Goonge Keri Sarkara, Baithe Muskae





.................................bye and tc ..................
   
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Re: zakhm - 7th October 2005, 12:03 PM

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i know today my feelings wud hurt many but then i do need them here with their valuable suggestions as sumtimes in life u feel so low that sumtimes u just cant think on anything else n ur mind is just concentrated which cud hurt many of u. neways life had been going quiet dull in past ,so here again with few thoughts just to take out my inner. thx for always being there to read me. take care n may god bless u all with his finnest glitters.
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guzari zindagi ke pal dekho,aise humne khoye hai,
abb kya batayein aapko ki,aaj hum kyun roye hai!

khushiyan kya bantenge hum,muskurana bhi bhul chuke,
kya karein humne to sada,aashqon ke haar piroye hai!

isse badhkar aur kya kar sakti hoon mein,
dosron ke zakhm bhi humne,aapne khoon se doye hai!

laash utha kar kandhon par ,khud ko hi dafan kiya,
dekho aapni maut pe khud hi aaj hum roye hai!

itna kar tu rahem tu maula,aaj sula de"jas" ko,
lagta hai aise hum jaise,janmon se na soye hai!
i really like ur verses.
u used all beautiful words very decently.
love to see you smile always..!
plz checkout, i send u a PM...!

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