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"kaha us ne Mohabbat mein aazmahish na kiya karo " - 2nd September 2009, 06:49 PM

Aadaab dostoN,
aaj pahli bar ek mukalmati tahreer kahne ki koshish ki hun
umiid hai aapko pasand aayegi.........


kaha us ne Mohabbat meiN aazmahish na kiya karo
kaha maine isse nibhane ki farmahish na kiya karo

kaha us ne dubaraa mud kar tum na dekhna mujh ko
kaha maine dekhe bin ab gawara nahi jeena mujh ko

kaha us ne kitabon ke panne palat kar sochana kyuN?
kaha maine sochti hu bin mere tum itne tanhaa KyuN?

kaha us ne judai kaa pal bhi kitna duswaar hota hai
kaha maine Jivan ye fir bhi kisi par nisaar hota hai

kaha us ne haatoN meiN mehandi sajaa kar milnaa
kaha maine sar-e-aam chahat apni jataa kar milnaa

kaha us ne wafaa kii ummiid nahi e bewafaa tujh se
kaha maine bawafaa sahii nibhaaungi wafaa tujh se

kaha us ne kab is begane ko kisika shahaara milega
kaha maine tham le haath ye tujh ko kinaara milega

kaha us ne aakhon ke saare ashQ tum baha kar sona
kaha maine meri yaadoN ka Diya tum bujha kar sona



Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai


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Dearest Diya,

Kaise ho? Beautiful creation har din aaur bhi aacha aur gehara likhne lagii ho.. mujhe ghazal behaat pasand aayiii !!!

yu hi likhti raho ,,

take care

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Thumbs up Spuerb - 3rd September 2009, 02:38 PM

wow ! Roshni........................no words..............SPUERB

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3rd September 2009, 04:34 PM

hi diya
apne to fight fight sawal jawab like hai mast lage thanks 4 sharing.


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nice one bhut acha taana baana,
sukriya Noor jee........................



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Dearest Diya,

Kaise ho? Beautiful creation har din aaur bhi aacha aur gehara likhne lagii ho.. mujhe ghazal behaat pasand aayiii !!!

yu hi likhti raho ,,

take care

with luv n dua

tumharii
mandeep
Mani Di,
main thik hu aapko bahut miss kar rahi hu
aapko yeh tahreer pasand aayi mujhe khusi hui
koshish karoongi aur bhi achhi ghazal kahun
aur aapki reply yun milti rahe

with lots of love
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wow ! Roshni........................no words..............SPUERB

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pyar aur bahut si duao.n ke saath
diii


reps add nahi ho rahe...........udhaar rahe :-)
Pyaari Di,
kaise ho aap .......aaj kal aap bhi busy aur main bhi
rep+++ keliye sukriya
miss u lot

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hi diya
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Sukriya Abed jee,
aapko yeh tahreer pasand aayi mujhe khusi hui
younhi saath banaye rakhiye
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Aadaab dostoN,
aaj pahli bar ek mukalmati tahreer kahne ki koshish ki hun
umiid hai aapko pasand aayegi.........


kaha us ne Mohabbat meiN aazmahish na kiya karo
kaha maine isse nibhane ki farmahish na kiya karo

kaha us ne dubaraa mud kar tum na dekhna mujh ko
kaha maine dekhe bin ab gawara nahi jeena mujh ko

kaha us ne kitabon ke panne palat kar sochana kyuN?
kaha maine sochti hu bin mere tum itne tanhaa KyuN?

kaha us ne judai kaa pal bhi kitna duswaar hota hai
kaha maine Jivan ye fir bhi kisi par nisaar hota hai

kaha us ne haatoN meiN mehandi sajaa kar milnaa
kaha maine sar-e-aam chahat apni jataa kar milnaa

kaha us ne wafaa kii ummiid nahi e bewafaa tujh se
kaha maine bawafaa sahii nibhaaungi wafaa tujh se

kaha us ne kab is begane ko kisika shahaara milega
kaha maine tham le haath ye tujh ko kinaara milega

kaha us ne aakhon ke saare ashQ tum baha kar sona
kaha maine meri yaadoN ka Diya tum bujha kar sona



kaha sab ne ki Diya kiya khub likhti hai
kaha maine Diya se hi mehafil khilti hai

yuhi mehafil sajate rahiyen.........diya doll
bahot khubsurat....ishq par kya khub ehsaas hai tumhare

great

love n regards


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11th September 2009, 02:26 PM

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kaha sab ne ki Diya kiya khub likhti hai
kaha maine Diya se hi mehafil khilti hai

yuhi mehafil sajate rahiyen.........diya doll
bahot khubsurat....ishq par kya khub ehsaas hai tumhare

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hi praneeta, really beautfull shayri..

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hi praneeta, really beautfull shayri..

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Karan malhotra

hi karan ji

aap mistaken hai yeh khubsurat shayri meri nahi Diya ji ki hai
aap pliz apni post edit kijiyen

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Diya doll...its truly very beautiful poetry
kaash main sach mein itna achcha likh pati!! sorry on behalf of karan ji


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11th September 2009, 11:20 PM

kaha us ne aakhon ke saare ashQ tum baha kar sona
kaha maine meri yaadoN ka Diya tum bujha kar sona


Diya Ji,
Kia baat hai,

Zaberdast shayri...
Younhi likhte rahiye,

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Diyaa Jii........

Hmmm aapki bator mukalmati kalam mein bus shikayat hi nazar aa rahi hai.......
But aapne badi saadgii se sabhi sheron ki adaygii ki hai..... Kuch sher bahut bhaye hai..

Chaliye hume bhi kuch sikhane mila aapse itni khushi hui....

Likhati rahiye
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Khush rahiye
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arey waah meri sherni kya baat hai..

abto teri kalam raftar pakdne lag gayi hai...

andaaz e bayaan lajawaab hai...

ehsaas ki kabhi tumhare kami nahi rahi..

so god bless u dear..

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Aadaab dostoN,
aaj pahli bar ek mukalmati tahreer kahne ki koshish ki hun
umiid hai aapko pasand aayegi.........


kaha us ne Mohabbat meiN aazmahish na kiya karo
kaha maine isse nibhane ki farmahish na kiya karo

kaha us ne dubaraa mud kar tum na dekhna mujh ko
kaha maine dekhe bin ab gawara nahi jeena mujh ko

kaha us ne kitabon ke panne palat kar sochana kyuN?
kaha maine sochti hu bin mere tum itne tanhaa KyuN?

kaha us ne judai kaa pal bhi kitna duswaar hota hai
kaha maine Jivan ye fir bhi kisi par nisaar hota hai

kaha us ne haatoN meiN mehandi sajaa kar milnaa
kaha maine sar-e-aam chahat apni jataa kar milnaa

kaha us ne wafaa kii ummiid nahi e bewafaa tujh se kaha maine bawafaa sahii nibhaaungi wafaa tujh se

kaha us ne kab is begane ko kisika shahaara milega kaha maine tham le haath ye tujh ko kinaara milega
kaha us ne aakhon ke saare ashQ tum baha kar sona
kaha maine meri yaadoN ka Diya tum bujha kar sona
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diya ji ko aadaab

aaj pehli baar aapko padnay ka mouka mila aapka yeh shair

kaha us ne Mohabbat meiN aazmahish na kiya karo

kaha maine isse nibhane ki farmahish na kiya karo

aur yeh walay

kaha us ne wafaa kii ummiid nahi e bewafaa tujh se kaha maine bawafaa sahii nibhaaungi wafaa tujh se

kaha us ne kab is begane ko kisika shahaara milega kaha maine tham le haath ye tujh ko kinaara milega


behad khoobsurat hai.......aapki souch achchi hai
aisay hi likhti rahiye ga aap kay ujjwal bhavishya ki kaamna kay sath

aapka vichitra







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kaha sab ne ki Diya kiya khub likhti hai
kaha maine Diya se hi mehafil khilti hai

yuhi mehafil sajate rahiyen.........diya doll
bahot khubsurat....ishq par kya khub ehsaas hai tumhare

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pari sweety
aapki sher hume bahot achha laga
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apna saath youn banaye rakhna
fir to diya jalti rahegi

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Diya Ji,
Kia baat hai,
Zaberdast shayri...
Younhi likhte rahiye,

Take care,

HSN jee
sukriya
younhi mahfil mein aate rahiye
hume hosla detey rahiye
DuaoN ke saath
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Diya ji....Aadaab....kaisi hai aap.....bahut khub likha hai aapne.....aapki tahreer ke sabhi sher taaze hai....har sher mai ehsaas aur soch bahut gehraai tak jaati hai....bahut umdaa rahi aapki yeh creation....aur saath hi aapka ek naya andaaz bhi dikhai diya isme...aise hi likhte rahiye...khush rahiye....

sabhi sher ache lage mujhe....

tahe dil se daad...kabul kare

aur apna khayal rakhiyega...
duaaon ke saath....




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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Diyaa Jii........

Hmmm aapki bator mukalmati kalam mein bus shikayat hi nazar aa rahi hai.......
But aapne badi saadgii se sabhi sheron ki adaygii ki hai..... Kuch sher bahut bhaye hai..

Chaliye hume bhi kuch sikhane mila aapse itni khushi hui....

Likhati rahiye
Bazm ko roshan karti rahiye
Khush rahiye
Khuda Hafez...
Sameer jee,
aapko yeh mukalmati ghazal achhi lagi hume bahot khusi hui
pahli bar humne aisa likhne ki gustakhi kiye haiN....
kai bar mahfil mein aisi tahreer dekhe the isiliye apni soch ko hum bhi lafz de diye
aap ne isko padha aur apni raii diya yeh humare liye bahut hai

apna khayal rakhiye
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arey waah meri sherni kya baat hai..

abto teri kalam raftar pakdne lag gayi hai...

andaaz e bayaan lajawaab hai...

ehsaas ki kabhi tumhare kami nahi rahi..

so god bless u dear..

aise hi likhte raho...

khush raho
babu mahfil mein tumhe dekh kar khusi hui
itna tareef mat karo main gir jaungi
yeh chane ki chhad bahut buri chees hai

humesha khus raho
bas ehi dua hai

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... Behad hii khubsurat andaaz-e-bayaN, Padane me bahut simple bt with such a gr8 feelings...

its really nice combition... u hav made awesome lines.. waise toh puri creation hi shandar hai bt few of ur lines are really gr8.. i.e.

" kaha us ne Mohabbat meiN aazmahish na kiya karo
kaha maine isse nibhane ki farmahish na kiya karo "


" kaha us ne kitabon ke panne palat kar sochana kyuN?
kaha maine sochti hu bin mere tum itne tanhaa KyuN? "


" kaha us ne haatoN meiN mehandi sajaa kar milnaa
kaha maine sar-e-aam chahat apni jataa kar milnaa "

" kaha us ne wafaa kii ummiid nahi e bewafaa tujh se
kaha maine bawafaa sahii nibhaaungi wafaa tujh se "

" kaha us ne kab is begane ko kisika shahaara milega
kaha maine tham le haath ye tujh ko kinaara milega "

" kaha us ne aakhon ke saare ashQ tum baha kar sona
kaha maine meri yaadoN ka Diya tum bujha kar sona "

doing Gr8 work again & again... Keep up..

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Aadaab dostoN,
aaj pahli bar ek mukalmati tahreer kahne ki koshish ki hun
umiid hai aapko pasand aayegi.........


kaha us ne Mohabbat meiN aazmahish na kiya karo
kaha maine isse nibhane ki farmahish na kiya karo

kaha us ne dubaraa mud kar tum na dekhna mujh ko
kaha maine dekhe bin ab gawara nahi jeena mujh ko

kaha us ne kitabon ke panne palat kar sochana kyuN?
kaha maine sochti hu bin mere tum itne tanhaa KyuN?

kaha us ne judai kaa pal bhi kitna duswaar hota hai
kaha maine Jivan ye fir bhi kisi par nisaar hota hai

kaha us ne haatoN meiN mehandi sajaa kar milnaa
kaha maine sar-e-aam chahat apni jataa kar milnaa

kaha us ne wafaa kii ummiid nahi e bewafaa tujh se kaha maine bawafaa sahii nibhaaungi wafaa tujh se

kaha us ne kab is begane ko kisika shahaara milega kaha maine tham le haath ye tujh ko kinaara milega
kaha us ne aakhon ke saare ashQ tum baha kar sona
kaha maine meri yaadoN ka Diya tum bujha kar sona
diya ji ko aadaab

aaj pehli baar aapko padnay ka mouka mila aapka yeh shair

kaha us ne Mohabbat meiN aazmahish na kiya karo

kaha maine isse nibhane ki farmahish na kiya karo

aur yeh walay

kaha us ne wafaa kii ummiid nahi e bewafaa tujh se kaha maine bawafaa sahii nibhaaungi wafaa tujh se

kaha us ne kab is begane ko kisika shahaara milega kaha maine tham le haath ye tujh ko kinaara milega


behad khoobsurat hai.......aapki souch achchi hai
aisay hi likhti rahiye ga aap kay ujjwal bhavishya ki kaamna kay sath

aapka vichitra





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thanx a lot Vichitra jee,
yun hi saath detey rahiye

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Diya ji....Aadaab....kaisi hai aap.....bahut khub likha hai aapne.....aapki tahreer ke sabhi sher taaze hai....har sher mai ehsaas aur soch bahut gehraai tak jaati hai....bahut umdaa rahi aapki yeh creation....aur saath hi aapka ek naya andaaz bhi dikhai diya isme...aise hi likhte rahiye...khush rahiye....

sabhi sher ache lage mujhe....

tahe dil se daad...kabul kare

aur apna khayal rakhiyega...
duaaon ke saath....

Naresh jee,
aap humesha mere ehsaas ko samjhte hai
mujhe behat khusi hoti hai jab aaki reply mere thread pe aata hai
Youn hi saath nibhate rahiye
Humesha khus rahiye

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... Behad hii khubsurat andaaz-e-bayaN, Padane me bahut simple bt with such a gr8 feelings...

its really nice combition... u hav made awesome lines.. waise toh puri creation hi shandar hai bt few of ur lines are really gr8.. i.e.

" kaha us ne Mohabbat meiN aazmahish na kiya karo
kaha maine isse nibhane ki farmahish na kiya karo "


" kaha us ne kitabon ke panne palat kar sochana kyuN?
kaha maine sochti hu bin mere tum itne tanhaa KyuN? "


" kaha us ne haatoN meiN mehandi sajaa kar milnaa
kaha maine sar-e-aam chahat apni jataa kar milnaa "

" kaha us ne wafaa kii ummiid nahi e bewafaa tujh se
kaha maine bawafaa sahii nibhaaungi wafaa tujh se "

" kaha us ne kab is begane ko kisika shahaara milega
kaha maine tham le haath ye tujh ko kinaara milega "

" kaha us ne aakhon ke saare ashQ tum baha kar sona
kaha maine meri yaadoN ka Diya tum bujha kar sona "

doing Gr8 work again & again... Keep up..

Regard :
Omi



thanx a lot Omi
tumhe mahfil mein dekh kar behat khusi hui
Yun hi aate rahna

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