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2nd May 2010, 07:50 PM
insaaN tera ae' khuda, ab khuda ho gaya...!!! jaane jism se kaise, iska dil juda ho gaya...? insaaN tera ae' khuda, ab khuda ho gaya...! sab kho, paya tha imaaN, wo bhi na raha, be-rozgaar the, uska bhi sauda* ho gaya...! sach maan, jisne hai j'na wo rakhega tujhko, kal pheNka tha jo beej, aaj pauda ho gaya...! tufaaNoN meiN ghiri thi jab kashti ye meri... kahiN se aaya tu, aa ke naakhuda* ho gaya...! tha pyaar be-hisaab, bas taqazoN ne mara... ishq na hua, tera zulf-e-khamshuda* ho gaya...! haiN zoroN pe charche, chehre hairaan haiN... 'masttt...' ye kaise mard-e-baakhuda* ho gaya...! *sauda = trade *naakhuda = sailor, oarsman *zulf-e-khamshuda = a long braid *mard-e-baakhuda = servant of god Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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2nd May 2010, 08:12 PM
jaane jism se kaise, iska dil juda ho gaya...?
insaaN tera ae' khuda, ab khuda ho gaya...! sab kho, paya tha imaaN, wo bhi na raha, be-rozgaar the, uska bhi sauda* ho gaya...! sacchi baat!!!! likhte rahe aise hi bhai!!! aapka Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me (When i received You in my heart everything changed for me) |
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2nd May 2010, 08:35 PM
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vikram bhai radhe radhe bahut khoob daad dil se hazir hai duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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2nd May 2010, 08:40 PM
Subhan_allah Vikram Saheb is tanziya matle ke kya kehne.........bohat khoob.
jaane jism se kaise, iska dil juda ho gaya...? insaaN tera ae' khuda, ab khuda ho gaya...! Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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2nd May 2010, 08:44 PM
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khas taur par apka matla.... daad hazir hai..... bus ye zulfe khamshuda ka matlab aapke niche bataye gaye matlab se mere mann me match karta nahi dikhta.......  zulfe kham shuda.......hmmm.....kham maane bent(jhuka hua) aur shuda shayad shadi shudaa wala 'shuda'( yani ke saath)...is logic se ye shayad jhuka hua baal ya maane khiche to'curly hair' hona chaiye..... aap jaruur mujhe correct kar dijiye .........mere bhi to ilm me ijaafaa ho( kabhi kabhi jo dikhta hai vo hota nahi...maine jaise bataya waise shayad na ho) magar ye bina dispute ke apki best ghazal hai mere liye....... daad hazir hai ABHI DEKHA DICTIONERY ME MEANING VIKRAMJI.... APKA KHAMSUDAA SAHI HAI.......I STAND CORECCTED |
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2nd May 2010, 09:53 PM
Aadaab Vikram bhai!
bahut dino bad yahan reply kar raha hun,,.. aapki yeh gazal bahut achchi lagi... Bahut hi gehrai hai aapki is gazal mein.. actuaqly mere agar dilko koi kalaam lage to hi main reply kar raha hun... aur aapki gazal mere dil ko lagi yeh bhi sahin hia ...  sabhi sher bahut umdaa rahe... dill se daad hazir hia janab ..... keep writing.. Keep posting....... Khuda Hafez...... Quote:
Ha hah aha Zidd sahab aap bhi kamaal karte hai kahm ka matlab zaruri nahi ke curly hair ho.... ?  janab kham means pechinda...aap bhi naa..... main isliye yahan Vikram bhai ki side le raha hun coz I know ke Pyaar kya hota hia aksar pyaar ka yehi anjaam hota hai... still IM bachlor so ...   Gustakhi mau ho janab khamshuda ka aapne jo matlab nikala bilkul galat.. nikala..... Khair bade bade shayroN se galti hoti hai main koi shayar nahi ... isliye kah diya ..  
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2nd May 2010, 10:02 PM
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magar miya zara jyada josh me lagte ho kya baat hai?kham matlab pechidaa??? to phir ye kya hai nigah-e kham==pechida ankhe ke jhuki nigah??aur ye kya hai surahi ke kham ke saath= pechidaa suraahi ??ki jhuki hui suraahi............ : |
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3rd May 2010, 11:55 AM
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aapko pasaNd aayee, mujhe achha laga... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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3rd May 2010, 12:22 PM
Vikram bhai namskaar....
khuda se duaa karta huN ki aapko hamesha khush rakhe Bahut hi pasand aayi aapki ye koshish daad qabool kareN aur ye line to bahut hi pasand aayi iske liye alag se daad haajir hai jaane jism se kaise, iska dil juda ho gaya...? insaaN tera ae' khuda, ab khuda ho gaya.. zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !! ===========================  sharma.rajeev701@gmail.com https://www.facebook.com/rajeevsharmaraj111 http://www.rajeevsharmaraj.blogspot.com/ |
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3rd May 2010, 06:05 PM
Vikram Ji.....Bahut asardaar lagi aapki yeh pehkash........matla khaas pasand aaya...aise hi behtar kalaam ke saath aate rahiye....dil se daad hazir hai....khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen... duaaon ke saath...  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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4th May 2010, 09:34 AM
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padhne aur pasaNd karne ke liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya.... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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4th May 2010, 09:51 AM
Vikram jii, aapke ahsaas hume acche lage , vaise to sabhi sher acche haiN par pahle wala sher hume behad khaas laga, yoon hi likhtey rahiye aur bazm mein aate rahiye.
god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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4th May 2010, 10:06 PM
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aapka behad shukrguzaar hooN...aise hi hausale badhaate rahiyega saheb... bahut bahut shukriya... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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5th May 2010, 02:06 PM
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zidd saheb aapka mere thread pe aana hi izzat ki baat hai mere liye, aapne to daad bhi de di….bahut bahut shukriya janaab… “zulfe khamshuda” ka masala bhi hal ho gaya, lekin maiN dictionary meaning se zyada aapke bataye matlab se bhi convinced hooN….kham mane jhuka hua ya jisme bal pa’de hoN…to ‘curly hair’ bhi sahi hai…. yahaN i’s ka istemaal tiredness ya uktaahat ki feeling ko display karne ke liye istemaal kiya hai, i’sliye dono ka matlab taqreeban sahi baitha_ta hai sameer saheb ka pechida bhi mujhe sahi jaan padta hai… mujhe lagta hai ki kai words ko situation ke mad’de nazar interpret kiya jaana chahiye kyuNki situation ke accordingly hi unka sahi matlab nikalta hai... Quote:
maiN matlab ki nahi amuman jo hota hai uski baat kar raha hooN... aapki daad ka phirse shukriya…. Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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5th May 2010, 02:24 PM
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maine to pahle tukka lagaya tha words ke break up ke hisaab se... phir thode der baad dictionery dekha.... i am not embarassed one lil bit....shayad apko aisa lag raha hai...ye apka pyaar aur muhabbta hai jo iska matlab kuch aur nikalne ki koshish kar rahe hai....mere matlab ke hisaab se... agar mai embarassed hota to -agar mai khudko edit karke correct kar sakta hu to kya mera post delete nahi kar sakta tha? magar aisa karta to beimaani ho jaati... magar apki izzatafzaii aur muhabbat dekh kar bahut accha lag regards |
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5th May 2010, 05:23 PM
originaly posted by vikramjethi....
jaane jism se kaise, iska dil juda ho gaya...? insaaN tera ae' khuda, ab khuda ho gaya...! subhanallah........bahut umda |
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5th May 2010, 06:35 PM
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Kya baat hai Vikram ji........ Dil khush ho gya aapki rachna padh kar........ sab kho, paya tha imaaN, wo bhi na raha, be-rozgaar the, uska bhi sauda* ho gaya...! ye lines mujhe bahut hi pasand aai......... Dil Se Daad Hazir hai............. Regards, Kavi Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!! Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!! |
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8th May 2010, 06:02 PM
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ghazal padhne aur pasaNd karne ke liye aapka tahe dil se shukrguzaar hooN...bahut bahut shukriya janaab... aapko meri ghazal achhi lagi aur jaisa ki aapne kaha ki aaj kal aap sirf uNhi kalaam pe reply karte haiN jo aapke dil ko chhu jaate haiN, aapko laga ki reply karna chahiye....mujhe behad khushi hui.... bahut bahut shukriya....!!! Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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8th May 2010, 06:04 PM
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9th May 2010, 01:15 AM
Vikram ji, bahot hi achhe lage aapke ehsaas aur alfaaz. Sil se daad hai, qubuul kijiyega..
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11th May 2010, 09:04 PM
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11th May 2010, 09:07 PM
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12th May 2010, 11:29 PM
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padhne aur pasaNd karne ka bahut bahut shukriya janaab.... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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12th May 2010, 11:31 PM
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13th May 2010, 10:42 PM
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18th May 2010, 10:21 PM
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aapki daad dil se qubuul hai.... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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20th May 2010, 08:48 PM
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mann saheb padhne aur pasaNd karne ke liye aapka tahe dil se shukrguzaar hooN...aapki daad sar maathe janaab.... bahut bahut shukriya.... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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5th December 2011, 03:28 PM
इन्सां तेरा ए ख़ुदा, अब ख़ुदा हो गया जाने जिस्म से कैसे, इसका दिल जुदा हो गया इन्सां तेरा ए ख़ुदा, अब ख़ुदा हो गया सब खो पाया था ईमान, वो भी न रहा बे-रोज़गार थे उसका भी सौदा हो गया सच मान जिसने है जना, वो रखेगा तुझको कल फेंका था जो बीज, आज पौधा हो गया तूफानों में घिरी थी जब कश्ती ये मेरी कहीं से आया तु, आके नाखुदा हो गया था प्यार बेहिसाब, बस तकाजों ने मारा इश्क न हुआ, तेरा ज़ुल्फ़-ए-खाम्शुदा हो गया हैं ज़ोरों पे चर्चे, चेहरे हैरान हैं 'मस्त' ये कैसे मर्द-ए-बाखुदा हो गया Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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5th December 2011, 04:20 PM
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namaskar,vikram bhai.kaise hai aap? aapkee ghazal bahut acchee lagi.matla to bahut hee khas lagaa. aapko is sundar peshkash per dili daad o mubaraqbad |
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8th December 2011, 09:50 AM
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8th December 2011, 01:11 PM
Vikram Ji......... Abhi Abhi Aap Ka Ye Kalaam Parha....... Boht Pasand Aaya..... Apnay Andar Is Dor-e-Zulmat Ki Sachayi Liye Huay Hai....... Khubsurat Khyal Pr Tah-e-Dil Se Daad Hazir Hai.......... Qabool Farmayen
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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12th December 2011, 12:24 PM
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sab aapki muhabbat hai, daad dil se qubuul hai.. aapka bahut bahut shukriya... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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