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Kyuin Hum Baar Baar Dhokha Kha Rehe Hai??? |
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Kyuin Hum Baar Baar Dhokha Kha Rehe Hai??? -
31st January 2003, 11:53 PM
" Een dino mein dard bahut hi dil mein ubaal raha hai pata nehi kyuin. aisa lagta hai koi bewafa hone laga hai."
Voh shokh haseen zindgi lauu'n kahan se mein Yeh dil toot'h raha hai, isse judwa'oo kaha se mein Dillagi kyuin lagi kaise batauuN yeh mein Tumse nafrat kyuin hone lagi kaise batauuN yeh mein Din kare the raat humne tumhare pyaar mein Humne humari izzat ko beizzat kar diya kaise batauuN yeh mein Bhula dete ho tum humme kasoor kissi aur ka batataE ho Dil mein dil jaal rehe ho mere pyaar mein kaise batauuN yeh mein Dheere dheere se tum humme bhool jaoghe Kismat humari, hum tume bhula nehi paoghe kaise batauuN yeh mein Ishiqka  |
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1st February 2003, 04:02 AM
HI Ishiqa,
Bahut dard hai aapka sher me, kyaa khoob kahaan.. Hume yeh don sher khaas pasand aayen.. Voh shokh haseen zindgi lauu'n kahan se mein Yeh dil toot'h raha hai, isse judwa'oo kaha se mein Dheere dheere se tum humme bhool jaoghe Kismat humari, hum tume bhula nehi paoghe kaise batauuN yeh mein Bahut khoob kahaan hai aapne. Intezar rahegi apki agli kavitha ki.. Bijili Milna tha ittefaq bichadna naseeb tha Woh utnaa dur gaya jho jitna kareeb tha :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: |
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1st February 2003, 04:05 AM
Bijili ji ne sahii kaha hai, isko paD kar dard mehsoos hua..
Aapne achi taraH apne jazbaat lafzoN meiN badle haiN, aur cheezeN paDne ka intezaar rahe ga! Likhte rahiye, Aman "je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa, te bibba saada dil moD de..!" kya karooN? aisa hi hooN maiN.. |
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1st February 2003, 06:23 AM
awww ishika ji dard mehsus hua mujhe aapke dil ka, apke jasbaat saaf jahir hai isme, bahut khoobi se dhala hai aapne jasbaat e dil koin alfaazo'n mein,
ghayal ho gaye hum Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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1st February 2003, 11:29 AM
Woh shokh haseen zindagi lauun kahan se main
ye dil too'th raha hai,isse judwaoon kaha se mein Wah ishiqka ji..Jaise sab ne kaha ke is sher mein dard khoob jhalkta hai..hum bhi yehi kahenge ke sach hi isse padkar laga ke aapke dil mein dard ka sailaab hai..par jaate jaate ye zaroor kahoonga ke dard ubalte ubalte kuchh cheente hum par bhi fenk gaya hai.. Aapka Dost.. chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai... |
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2nd February 2003, 12:23 AM
BIJLI JI, THANK U SO MUCH FOR REPLYING. PYAAR KABHI BHI DEKHO SAMJTA NEHI. KOI PYAAR KI IZZAT NEHI KARTA YEH MEINE SEEKHA HAI ISS DUNIYA SE, UNSE JISSE HUME WAFA THI AUR VOH AAB BEWAFA HONE LAGE HAI, THANKS ONCE AGAIN YAAR, AAP SAATH DETE HAI THO LIKH JAATI HUIN, TAKE CARE, AAP BHI LIKHTE REHEGA PLZ
AMAN JI, AMAN JI, HUM AAPKO THANK U KE SIVA KUCH KEH NEHI SAKTE. I HOPE THAT WOULD BE ENOUGH FOR SUPPORTING ME. TAKE CARE PLZ AND AMAN JI, AAP BHI KUCH LIKHEYA NA? ISHIQKA PRIYA JI PRIYAJI, AAPKA SHUKRIYA. HUM TRY KARTE HAI LIKHNE KI LEKIN PHIR BHI AAP JAISA NEHI KABHI LIKH SAKTE. I HOPE U TAKE CARE ISHIQKA VARINDER JI, VARINDER JI, KHUSHI HOTI HAI AAP HUME REPLY KARTE HAI. HUM AISE HI JO DIL MEIN AATA HAI LIKH JAATE HAI, AAPKA SUKHRIYA PHIR SE REPLY KARNE KA TAKE CARE PLZ ISHIQKA |
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2nd February 2003, 07:34 AM
Dil khush hua hai Ishiqka ka dard dekhkar
meri tarah uska bhi khana kharab hai. Jis dil main dard na ho woh dil kaisa???? paplu khush hua. |
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PAPULA JI -
3rd February 2003, 12:16 PM
HI, THANKS FOR THE REPLY, ATLEAST AAP THO KHUSH HUE HUMARI SHAYRI PARD KAR. THANK U ONCE AGAIN AND AAP BHI LIKHTE RHEGA PLZ
TAKE CARE ISHIQKA |
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