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Exclamation Qatl-gaah-e-ishq Mein Ajab Haal Dekha...!! - 11th March 2015, 07:22 PM
Adaab hazireen-e-meHfil-e-dard...
pesh-e-khidmat hy aik dard 'koshish':-


qatl-gaah-e-ishQ meiN ajab haal dekha
aashiQon ko farsh pe be-haal dekha

qatl-gaah : place of killing
farsh : floor

sooli pe jo latkay haiN mohabbat kii!
zaroor inhoN ne koiii jalaal dekha

jalaal : glory, majesty

wehshat-e-maqtal ka zikr kese ho?
wahaN aankhoN ko khoon se laal dekha

un ke shehar meiN basera tha apna!!
koo-e-yaar meiN jab se jamaal dekha

koo-e-yaar : lover’s street
jamaal : beauty

kamsin ki adaa zamane se hai juda!!!
ulfat ke baad nafrat ka ishteaal dekha..

kamsin : delicate
ishteaal : agitation

kahe ga kisi roz woh bhi ae ‘parStaar’ …
aap jesa aashiQ na ba-kamaal dekha…

ba-kamaal : accomplished

*hSn* : parStaar

tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
   
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11th March 2015, 07:38 PM
Kya baat.kya baat..
waaah hassan jee aapka ye andaaz bhi bahut bhaya mujhe..har ek ashaar lajwaab...

qatl-gaah-e-ishQ meiN ajab haal dekha
aashiQon ko farsh pe be-haal dekha

qatl-gaah : place of killing
farsh : floor

sooli pe jo latkay haiN mohabbat kii!
zaroor inhoN ne koiii jalaal dekha

Kamaal likha hai aapne hamesha kii tarah..
Is behtareen ghazal pe daad kubool karein
likhte rahein
khush rahein..


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आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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11th March 2015, 09:14 PM
qatl-gaah-e-ishQ meiN ajab haal dekha
aashiQon ko farsh pe be-haal dekha

kya qatilana gazal kahi janaab........daad qabool kareiN.

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11th March 2015, 11:35 PM
Waah Hasan bhai kya khayal pesh kiya aapne apni ghazal meiN ,,,Ashiqon ka
ankhoN dekha haal bahut bhaya mujhe ...Dil se daad.

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12th March 2015, 11:30 AM
wehshat-e-maqtal ka zikr kese ho?
wahaN aankhoN ko khoon se laal dekha

un ke shehar meiN basera tha apna!!
koo-e-yaar meiN jab se jamaal dekha


kyaa baat hai mere bhai... dil ko ghaayal kar diyaa hai aapke in do aashar ne...... yooon laga ke dil mera kisi maqtal me padaa huaa tadaptaa hai...... waaahhh kahun ke aahhh samajh me nahi aa raha hai... bas dil pe chot par chot hui ja rahi hai.... nayaab kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne bhai..... bas likhte rahen........ aur bazm ko roshan karte rahen... shukriyaa
Shaad....

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Kya baat.kya baat..
waaah hassan jee aapka ye andaaz bhi bahut bhaya mujhe..har ek ashaar lajwaab...

qatl-gaah-e-ishQ meiN ajab haal dekha
aashiQon ko farsh pe be-haal dekha

qatl-gaah : place of killing
farsh : floor

sooli pe jo latkay haiN mohabbat kii!
zaroor inhoN ne koiii jalaal dekha

Kamaal likha hai aapne hamesha kii tarah..
Is behtareen ghazal pe daad kubool karein
likhte rahein
khush rahein..
Madhu jee...

Daad aur had-darja pazeeraayi ke liye behad manoon-o-mashkoor hoon..

Saath dete rahiye ga,,

DuaooN ke saath,

*hSn* : parStaar

tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
   
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20th March 2015, 06:46 PM
Bohot bohot khoob Hassan bhai..
Behad umdah peshkash
Daad kubul farmaiyega

Aapka apna
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5th September 2015, 02:32 PM
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Adaab hazireen-e-meHfil-e-dard...
pesh-e-khidmat hy aik dard 'koshish':-


qatl-gaah-e-ishQ meiN ajab haal dekha
aashiQon ko farsh pe be-haal dekha

qatl-gaah : place of killing
farsh : floor

sooli pe jo latkay haiN mohabbat kii!
zaroor inhoN ne koiii jalaal dekha

jalaal : glory, majesty

wehshat-e-maqtal ka zikr kese ho?
wahaN aankhoN ko khoon se laal dekha

un ke shehar meiN basera tha apna!!
koo-e-yaar meiN jab se jamaal dekha

koo-e-yaar : lover’s street
jamaal : beauty

kamsin ki adaa zamane se hai juda!!!
ulfat ke baad nafrat ka ishteaal dekha..

kamsin : delicate
ishteaal : agitation

kahe ga kisi roz woh bhi ae ‘parStaar’ …
aap jesa aashiQ na ba-kamaal dekha…

ba-kamaal : accomplished

areee wahhh kya khoobsurat gazal hue hai HSN Bhai

majja aa jata hai aapki gazleN padkar...bahut umda likhtey hai aap. likhtey rhiye aur bazm ki shaan badatey rahiye.

duaoN ke saath

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