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"Tujhe aana zaruur hai" -
8th December 2009, 10:35 AM
Hazriin Ko Aadaab,
Kuch zaati falsafe aap ke nazar kar rahaa huuN ek Hamd (Poems in praise of God) ki shakal meiN. Beh'r band nahi kar saka waqt ki kami ki khaatir. Ummiid hai ke aap ko pasand aayegi. (Waise ise Anjuman-e-shayri meiN bhi post kiyaa tha ye soch kar ke ye na to ishqiya shayri hai na hi dard ki, magar kisi ki nazar hi nahi pa.Di!!)
Khuli aaNkh se dikhtaa ufaq ba.Di duur hai,
Tujh tak pahoNchane meiN banda majbuur hai.
(Ufaq=Horizon=Khsitij)
BaNd kiya palak to dikha dhanak tera khuda,
Khuli nazar se dikhe kaise? insaaN magruur hai.
(Dhanak=Rainbow=Indradhanush)
Ek jaam se log ho jaateN hai bekhud ek din ko,
Main taa umr huaa bekhud aisa tera suruur hai.
Teri duniyaa meiN ikhtalaaf ab samajh saka,
Zarre se chota, parbat se ba.Da tera huzuur hai.
(Ikhtalaaf=Differences=Asamaanta)
Tere diye pursukuuni meiN tuu hi hai nadarad,
HaaN, dard ke maroN meiN tuu ba.Da mashhuur hai.
Tere bandoN ki khidmat ko das kadam bhi azaab,
Haji aur pandit teri ibaadat ke nashe meiN chuur hai.
Aaghaaz, maqsad, anjaam, manzil, hum sab bhuule,
Qazaa ke roz hi sahi rab, par tujhe aana zaruur hai.
Aap ke rai ka muntazir,
Aadaab
Naadaan
"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.
वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है.
-आनंद नारायण मुल्ला
Last edited by naadaan; 8th December 2009 at 11:17 AM..
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Some Mirrors Lie...
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8th December 2009, 11:09 AM
Wah Baday Miyaan................
Kamal ka likha hai,,,
Is qadar bandagi dekh kar mera rong rong khada ho gaya.........
Apna khiyaal rakhiye ga,,
Aap ka chota,,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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8th December 2009, 04:02 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Hassan
Wah Baday Miyaan................
Kamal ka likha hai,,,
Is qadar bandagi dekh kar mera rong rong khada ho gaya.........
Apna khiyaal rakhiye ga,,
Aap ka chota,,,
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Chote MiyaaN salaam,
Nawaazish aapki ke aapne adna kalaam ko saraha. Inshallah aaiNda bhi mashq jaare rahega.
Apna saath banaye rakhiyega,
Khush rahiye
Khuda Hafez,
Naadaan
"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.
वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है.
-आनंद नारायण मुल्ला
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8th December 2009, 05:10 PM
Shyam Ji....Aadaab...!
Bahut geharaai liye lage mujhe aapke sabhi ashaar...
tahe dil se daad hazir hai...kabul farmaaye...
apna khayal rakhiye...
duaaon ke saath....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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9th December 2009, 09:19 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by naadaan
Hazriin Ko Aadaab,
Kuch zaati falsafe aap ke nazar kar rahaa huuN ek Hamd (Poems in praise of God) ki shakal meiN. Beh'r band nahi kar saka waqt ki kami ki khaatir. Ummiid hai ke aap ko pasand aayegi. (Waise ise Anjuman-e-shayri meiN bhi post kiyaa tha ye soch kar ke ye na to ishqiya shayri hai na hi dard ki, magar kisi ki nazar hi nahi pa.Di!!)
Khuli aaNkh se dikhtaa ufaq ba.Di duur hai,
Tujh tak pahoNchane meiN banda majbuur hai.
(Ufaq=Horizon=Khsitij)
BaNd kiya palak to dikha dhanak tera khuda,
Khuli nazar se dikhe kaise? insaaN magruur hai.
(Dhanak=Rainbow=Indradhanush)
Ek jaam se log ho jaateN hai bekhud ek din ko,
Main taa umr huaa bekhud aisa tera suruur hai.
Teri duniyaa meiN ikhtalaaf ab samajh saka,
Zarre se chota, parbat se ba.Da tera huzuur hai.
(Ikhtalaaf=Differences=Asamaanta)
Tere diye pursukuuni meiN tuu hi hai nadarad,
HaaN, dard ke maroN meiN tuu ba.Da mashhuur hai.
Tere bandoN ki khidmat ko das kadam bhi azaab,
Haji aur pandit teri ibaadat ke nashe meiN chuur hai.
Aaghaaz, maqsad, anjaam, manzil, hum sab bhuule,
Qazaa ke roz hi sahi rab, par tujhe aana zaruur hai.
Aap ke rai ka muntazir,
Aadaab
Naadaan
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Janaab Naadaan saheb Aadaab....!
Reply karne se pehle maine kam se kam 5 dafe iss Ghazal ko padha aur abhi pata nahi kitni baar aur padhunga.....har baar ek alag ehsaas ****a hai isne....bahut khoob....maza aa gaya.....
Likhte rahiye......
Khush rahiye......
Aapka apna
Vikram
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
vikramjethi@gmail.com
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9th December 2009, 05:27 PM
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Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110
Shyam Ji....Aadaab...!
Bahut geharaai liye lage mujhe aapke sabhi ashaar...
tahe dil se daad hazir hai...kabul farmaaye...
apna khayal rakhiye...
duaaon ke saath....
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Naresh Bhai Namashkar,
Hausla ba.Dhaane ke liye mamnuun huuN aapka. Aap ke saath ka yaqiin humeN hamesha rehta hai aur aap niraash bhi nahi karte
Saath Banaye rakhiyega
Khush rahiye
Naadaan
"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.
वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है.
-आनंद नारायण मुल्ला
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9th December 2009, 05:28 PM
Nadaan sahab Aadaab.....
Aapki is gazal ke khayal aur aapke ibadat e haal bahut achche lage, sabhi sher behad khoob kahe hai aapne, kiski tarif karun samjh mein nahi aata......
Likhate rhaiye,
Khush rhaiye,
APna khayal rakhiye,
Khuda Hafez......
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