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bas yahin tak tha - 18th December 2005, 09:56 PM

dosto aaj mein wo kavita post kar raha hu jo maine us mod par likhi thi jab yeh dil toota tha magar aaj wo lamha yaad nahi karte magar ye kavita mera saath nahi chod rahi hai umeed hai pasand aayegi

Rok lo Qadam Jee bhar ke dekhlo
Hamara tumhara saath bas yahin tak tha

Manzil mile na mile ab hamari Kismat
Ke Zindagi ke saath safar bas yahin tak tha

Tum chal nahi sakte is se aage ek qadam
Ruk jao ke Phoolon ka Chaman yahin tak tha

Aage aarahe hain gham mujh se milne gale
Ke apni khushiyon ka thikana bas yahin tak tha

Uttho aur naye Hamraahi talash karo
Ke yeh khuwaab Suhana bas yahin tak tha
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18th December 2005, 10:20 PM

mehul....it is very nice...wonderful words...but the pain is evident
u take care


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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19th December 2005, 01:11 AM

bahaut aacha likkha hai mehul.....dard hi dard....,meri taraf se daad kubool karo....apna aur apni daadiji ka khayal rakhna....bye..


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20th December 2005, 12:29 AM

Rok lo Qadam Jee bhar ke dekhlo
Hamara tumhara saath bas yahin tak tha

Manzil mile na mile ab hamari Kismat
Ke Zindagi ke saath safar bas yahin tak tha

Kya baat kahi hai....! too good...!


Tum chal nahi sakte is se aage ek qadam
Ruk jao ke Phoolon ka Chaman yahin tak tha

Aage aarahe hain gham mujh se milne gale
Ke apni khushiyon ka thikana bas yahin tak tha

Waaaaahhh...!


Uttho aur naye Hamraahi talash karo
Ke yeh khuwaab Suhana bas yahin tak tha

hmmmm.....!

Dear Mehul,

Bahutb hi pyaara likha hai tumne... Very beautifulll...gehraai hai bayaani me...accha laga padhke...yun hi likhte raho...!

Tc...


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20th December 2005, 10:07 AM

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mehul....it is very nice...wonderful words...but the pain is evident
u take care
thnk karthik for ur opinion keep coming


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20th December 2005, 10:08 AM

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bahaut aacha likkha hai mehul.....dard hi dard....,meri taraf se daad kubool karo....apna aur apni daadiji ka khayal rakhna....bye..
thnx faru dd aap ko achi lagi bas yehi kafi hai.............


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20th December 2005, 10:10 AM

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Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
Rok lo Qadam Jee bhar ke dekhlo
Hamara tumhara saath bas yahin tak tha

Manzil mile na mile ab hamari Kismat
Ke Zindagi ke saath safar bas yahin tak tha

Kya baat kahi hai....! too good...!


Tum chal nahi sakte is se aage ek qadam
Ruk jao ke Phoolon ka Chaman yahin tak tha

Aage aarahe hain gham mujh se milne gale
Ke apni khushiyon ka thikana bas yahin tak tha

Waaaaahhh...!


Uttho aur naye Hamraahi talash karo
Ke yeh khuwaab Suhana bas yahin tak tha

hmmmm.....!

Dear Mehul,

Bahutb hi pyaara likha hai tumne... Very beautifulll...gehraai hai bayaani me...accha laga padhke...yun hi likhte raho...!

Tc...
pulkit bhaiya u liked it so much i'm very happy that u came and read mine post


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4th July 2010, 08:41 PM

Aage aarahe hain gham mujh se milne gale
Ke apni khushiyon ka thikana bas yahin tak tha

Bohat khoob Mehul saheb...


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hi mehul aapki rachna bhot hi kabil-e-tarif hai padhkar beetey hue kuch behtarin or dard bhre lamhe yaad aa gye
bhot hi khub likha hai aapne do sher jo dil main utar gye

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Ke Zindagi ke saath safar bas yahin tak tha

Tum chal nahi sakte is se aage ek qadam
Ruk jao ke Phoolon ka Chaman yahin tak tha

bhot hi lazawaab

to lijiye ek sher hazir karta hu faraz sahab ka

din gujar jata hai khud ko chunne main faraz,
sham ko hawa chalti hai phir bikhar jata hu,
ji to cahata hu muft main jaan de dena faraz,
fir sochta hu is mosam-e-kharidaar se kya lena kya dena

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6th July 2010, 01:44 PM

bahut khoob.. Dil se daad hazir hai ...


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Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!!
Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!!
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