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Badnaseebi! - 24th August 2006, 02:01 PM

Aap Sab Ko Mera Pyaar Bhara SALAM!

Mere ghar ki muflisi ko dekhar
Badnaseebi Sarr patakti reh gaye
Aur ek deen ki muktashir baarish ke baad
Chatt kahi deeno tak
Tapakti reh gayee..!


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Re: Badnaseebi! - 24th August 2006, 02:05 PM

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Originally posted by Gumnaam dost
Aap Sab Ko Mera Pyaar Bhara SALAM!

Mere ghar ki muflisi ko dekhar
Badnaseebi Sarr patakti reh gaye
Aur ek deen ki muktashir baarish ke baad
Chatt kahi deeno tak
Tapakti reh gayee..!


Muflisi=poor

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Badnaseebi! - 24th August 2006, 11:07 PM

gumnaam ji aapne kaffi achha likha hai. lekin ye muktashir ka kya matlab hota hai. wahi to meri urdu kharab hai isi liye samajh nahi aya. samjhayenge plz.
mein bhi kuch likh deti hu....

Zindagi ka safar hai ye,
Ab to har gum gunguna raha hai...
Gardish me hai jo, seetara hai ye,
Amawas ki raat me chaand bhi muskura raha hai...

aapki dost
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