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Smile Paarijaat ko phool aaye... - 20th September 2003, 01:11 AM

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Paarijaat Ko Phool aaye……


“Aaj hi mere aangan ke paarijaat ko phool aaye;
aur woh bhi saare gile shikve bhool vaapas aaye,

khushbu se mahenkate phool O se aaj paarijaat, is aangan;
aas liye dole jaise, paake bhanvar ko aagosh main bharle,

khushiyo se lehraata udataa-girtaa, aapkaa ye reshmi daaman;
pukaar rahaa hai jaise, is barso suni goDi ko bharne,

dekho to woh bhanvar, lage hai khelne aur aane-jaane;
ab aangan main bhi khele ek phool, ‘gar baat tu meri mane,

aaj hi mere aangan ke paarijaat ko phool aaye;
aur woh bhi saare gile shikve bhool vaapas aaye…..”

20th September 2003 00.20 IST



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Re: Paarijaat ko phool aaye... - 13th April 2006, 07:20 PM

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dosto,

aaj jo maine likha hai ise kaun section me rakhu samaj nahi aaya, pahele socha shayri-e-ishq me rakhu phir socha hindi poetry me rakhna thik hai.. phir wohi kiyaa jo karnaa chahiye.. dono section me submit kar diyaa
khsma chahta hu
shayd pasand aa jaye


Paarijaat Ko Phool aaye……


“Aaj hi mere aangan ke paarijaat ko phool aaye;
aur woh bhi saare gile shikve bhool vaapas aaye,

khushbu se mahenkate phool O se aaj paarijaat, is aangan;
aas liye dole jaise, paake bhanvar ko aagosh main bharle,

khushiyo se lehraata udataa-girtaa, aapkaa ye reshmi daaman;
pukaar rahaa hai jaise, is barso suni goDi ko bharne,

dekho to woh bhanvar, lage hai khelne aur aane-jaane;
ab aangan main bhi khele ek phool, ‘gar baat tu meri mane,

aaj hi mere aangan ke paarijaat ko phool aaye;
aur woh bhi saare gile shikve bhool vaapas aaye…..”

20th September 2003 00.20 IST

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bahaut accha laga hai aapko parhkar. sach mein lajawaab hai.

shaayd ab aap yahan aate nahin hain, yeh bahaut afsos ki baat hai

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