Rone chala tha main........

[gulie]

Rone chala tha main…..

“Bechaini chaaya mann mera, chaha chalo unke pass ho aau,
Ji bhar aaya hai aaj, kaise Is mann ko bahelaau,
Aanchal main chhupake chehara, godi main sirr thaam aau,
Ruke huee do-char aansu, unke saaye main bahaa aau,
Jaadu bhari ungaliyaa unki, jab chalti hongi mere tan pe,
Halki si chubhan unke balo ki,jab hongi mere gaalo pe,
Garm saansoKi aahat unki, jab hongi mere sine pe,
Samhohit nazaro main doobE, socha saara dard bhool aau,
Dil main rone ki aas liye, paane chala unki chhaya,
Haalat jo deewane ki dekhE, unSe sahaa na gayaa,
Gaya tha rone kaun aur kisKo rona aa gaya,
Aur bhi baichain ho gaya, jo unko rula ke aa gaya.”

3rd/4th sep 2003

gulieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

[bedilMusafir]

Gaya tha rone kaun aur kisKo rona aa gaya,
Aur bhi baichain ho gaya, jo unko rula ke aa gaya.”

bohat khoob...
aapke jazbaat behad khoobsurat bhi haiN aur purdard bhi...
aur jis sada lafzi se aapne unhe pesh kiya hai wo qaabil-e-gaur hai...

daad qubool kijiye...

likhte rahiye aur muskuraate rahiye...

[gulie]

Bedil dost,
ji bahot shukriya... dekho ab ye mat kahena shukriya mat kaho...
dil se nikli hui baat ko thukraaya nahi karte.
aapki dua- abhilasha rahi to likhta rahoonga..
aap bhi likhte raho aisi humaari bhi tamanna hai
milte rahenge dost.....

see u....
gulieeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

[Shimul]

Hi, wah keya baat hein aapka. Bohot khub, khudh roone gaye jiske paas usko hi roolake agaye. Jawab nehi.

Thanks. Take care.
God bless.
Shimul.

[dilselovergirl]

ayyy hayyy dr. ji yeh aab ne kya kar diya.....aapne dard-e-dil nikal ne gaye the uske paas..aur usiko rula ke aagaye...yeh to badi nainsafi huwi....par yaar aapne sorry to kaha honga na? agar nahi kaha ho to zarur mafi mang lijiyenga...haan..aur yeh shayri usse jarur kahiyenga...turant hi maaf kardengi...kyuke kya aapne details mein kaha hai...i swear..i just luv it... je karta hai bar bar padti hi jau...par kya karu..exams sir pe hai shayri ki jagah..chemistry padhni padti hai.. hehe..chalo koi baat nahi...aaj to waqt nikal ke aapko reply kar hi diya...ji bohat hi pyara likha hai..tarif kubul kijiye...thikh hai..
byeeee
take care
and apologies okie!!!!

luv,
tulsika!~

[gulie]

hiiii
Tulsikaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ji

Thank a lot 4 reply.. especially during exam time, aakhir yahi to aapki mahaanta hai.
By the way aap aaj kal kya khoob subject padhti hai--- ‘ chemistry’ .. wow
Wow
Wow
Do u know ki love main biology nahi lekin ‘Chemistry’ hoti hai……… lol
‘Love Chemistry’
Padhte rahiye…………..

See u……….
Gulieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

[gulie]

Shimulllll

lot of thank 4 giving inspiration

aap reply to kafi dete hai lekin kuchh apne aap ke liye kuchh nahi likhte?/

i mean ab tak aapne keval 1 hi rachna likhi hai jo ' Md. Rafi' saab par thi

aap bhi kuchh likhiye

ye hamaari request hai

see u

gulieeeeeeeeeeeeee

[Shimul]

Dil nehi karta hein ke kuch post karu.
I will but not this month. I am very much busy with my Vat decl.
Jab hojayega toh shayed. Sukriya appka reply ke liye.
Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you.
Shimul.

[Sharaabi]

Gulie saahab,
Ik khoob kalaam pesh karne kii daad qabuul farmaaiiye.

Aapke khayaal beyaan karne kaa tariiqaa is sharaabi ke dil ko chuu gayaa!

Aage bhi aapse yehii ummiid rakhte haiN..

ShubkaamnaaoN ke saath,
Aman

[gulie]

Aman saab,

Aaj subah aapka reply padha to aap nahi maanenge ki main apna koi swajan se milke khush hu itna khush ho gayaa. Aur kyu na ho hum khush??/ Aap ka reply aapki acchi sehat ki nishaani jo hai. Aap hospitalize the aisa ‘Bedil saab’ ka messege tha, isiliye hum kuch udas aur worried the. meri ummid humesha sach hoti hai. aap fully recover ho jaayenge. ye meri dil ki aawaz hai.

Waise bhi aapka reply humaare liye hi nahi, shayad sabke liye proud ki baat hai. Ye to meri khush kismat ki aapka reply milaa.

Aage bhi milte rahenge.

Aapki ummiid shayad sach ho ti rahe aisa hum likhne ki koshish karte rahenge

Shukriyaaa

love u

Gulieeeeeeeeeeeeee