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19th June 2015, 07:09 PM
Rehti hoo gum tumhare khayalon mai mile ho jabse
Shuru shuru ki mohabbat ka kya pyara ehsaas hai
Nahi soti aankhen meri ab ek ghadi ko bhi
inko iss tarah tumhare aane ka intezzar hai
Rehte ho tumhi ab sham o sawer mere zehan mai
Ki kya bataon kitna mere dil ko tere dil se pyar hai
Maanga hai tumhe hi har pal jaake khuda ke ghar mai
Ki iss kadar dil ko mere tumhe paane ki chah hai
Kya ehsaas hai, kis kadar mohabbat hai mujhe tumse
meri ruki hansi ko bas tumhare muskarane ka intezaar hai
Kya kahoon! kaise bayan karoon tumhe apne dil ka haal
kehti hoon ab bas tumse sirf tumse mujhe pyar hai
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19th June 2015, 07:27 PM
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Originally Posted by Sweet_Rain
Rehti hoo gum tumhare khayalon mai mile ho jabse
Shuru shuru ki mohabbat ka kya pyara ehsaas hai
Bahut khoob!!
Nahi soti aankhen meri ab ek ghadi ko bhi
inko iss tarah tere aane ka intezzar hai
Waah!!
Rehte ho tumhi ab sham o sawer mere zehan mai
Ki kya bataon kitna mere dil ko tere dil se pyar hai
Beuatiful!!!
Maanga hai tumhe hi har pal jaake khuda ke ghar mai
Ki iss kadar mujhe tujhe paane ki chah hai
Hmmmm....
Kya ehsaas hai aur, kis kadar mohabbat hai mujhe tumse
meri ruki hansi ko bas tumhare muskarane ka intezaar hai
Again, nice lines
Kya kahoon! kaise bayan karoon tumhe apne dil ka haal
kehti hoon ab to bas tujhse sirf tumse mujhe pyar hai
Simply beautiful!!
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Aapko arse ke baad padhkar dil se khushi huwi... aisa laga hi nahin ke aap itne samay ke baad likh rahi hain... Yun hi likhti rahiye, muskurati rahiye aur apna khayal rakhiye... take good care!
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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19th June 2015, 07:30 PM
Pulkit, thanks...if you said it's good then am sure it's good.
And now its my turn to read you. Hopefully you will write something soon.
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19th June 2015, 08:07 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Sweet_Rain
Rehti hoo gum tumhare khayalon mai mile ho jabse
Shuru shuru ki mohabbat ka kya pyara ehsaas hai
Nahi soti aankhen meri ab ek ghadi ko bhi
inko iss tarah tumhare aane ka intezzar hai
Rehte ho tumhi ab sham o sawer mere zehan mai
Ki kya bataon kitna mere dil ko tere dil se pyar hai
Maanga hai tumhe hi har pal jaake khuda ke ghar mai
Ki iss kadar dil ko mere tumhe paane ki chah hai
Kya ehsaas hai, kis kadar mohabbat hai mujhe tumse
meri ruki hansi ko bas tumhare muskarane ka intezaar hai
Kya kahoon! kaise bayan karoon tumhe apne dil ka haal
kehti hoon ab bas tumse sirf tumse mujhe pyar hai
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Waaaaaah! Sweet ji bahut pyara likha hai....bahut khoob kalaam...
Yoon hee likhti rahiye.
muskrati rahiye..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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19th June 2015, 08:51 PM
Bahut hee sundar ehsaas share kiye aapne.....i like the way u express ur feelings....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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19th June 2015, 09:33 PM
waahh kkya baat hai bahut khoob peshkash......
likhte rahiye
shaad....
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20th June 2015, 11:46 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Sweet_Rain
Rehti hoo gum tumhare khayalon mai mile ho jabse
Shuru shuru ki mohabbat ka kya pyara ehsaas hai
Nahi soti aankhen meri ab ek ghadi ko bhi
inko iss tarah tumhare aane ka intezzar hai
Rehte ho tumhi ab sham o sawer mere zehan mai
Ki kya bataon kitna mere dil ko tere dil se pyar hai
Maanga hai tumhe hi har pal jaake khuda ke ghar mai
Ki iss kadar dil ko mere tumhe paane ki chah hai
Kya ehsaas hai, kis kadar mohabbat hai mujhe tumse
meri ruki hansi ko bas tumhare muskarane ka intezaar hai
Kya kahoon! kaise bayan karoon tumhe apne dil ka haal
kehti hoon ab bas tumse sirf tumse mujhe pyar hai
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Kyaa baat hai !
Bohot khuub ehsasaat Sweet_rain ji. Yeh sheyr dil ke khaas qareeb raha
Kya ehsaas hai, kis kadar mohabbat hai mujhe tumse
meri ruki hansi ko bas tumhare muskarane ka intezaar hai
yuNhi likhte rahiye.
Aapka khair andesh
Sagar Aashna
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Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar
Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota
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22nd June 2015, 11:47 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Sweet_Rain
Rehti hoo gum tumhare khayalon mai mile ho jabse
Shuru shuru ki mohabbat ka kya pyara ehsaas hai
Nahi soti aankhen meri ab ek ghadi ko bhi
inko iss tarah tumhare aane ka intezzar hai
Rehte ho tumhi ab sham o sawer mere zehan mai
Ki kya bataon kitna mere dil ko tere dil se pyar hai
Maanga hai tumhe hi har pal jaake khuda ke ghar mai
Ki iss kadar dil ko mere tumhe paane ki chah hai
Kya ehsaas hai, kis kadar mohabbat hai mujhe tumse
meri ruki hansi ko bas tumhare muskarane ka intezaar hai
Kya kahoon! kaise bayan karoon tumhe apne dil ka haal
kehti hoon ab bas tumse sirf tumse mujhe pyar hai
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bahut accha likha hai aapne, aapko padna accha lga.
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Originally Posted by Pulkit_gupta
Aapko arse ke baad padhkar dil se khushi huwi... aisa laga hi nahin ke aap itne samay ke baad likh rahi hain... Yun hi likhti rahiye, muskurati rahiye aur apna khayal rakhiye... take good care!
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Dear Pulkit........aapko sdc par thoda sa regular aate dekh kar sach meiN bahut acha lga rha hai, yu hi aate rehna....
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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22nd June 2015, 05:04 PM
Bohot khoob peshksh hai...waaaaah
Likhte rahiye
Duao k sath
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22nd June 2015, 08:47 PM
Hahaha didi, facebook pe time ghataakar SDC ka badhaana chaahiye, kyun? woh mehfilen fir se jamaayen!
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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22nd June 2015, 09:41 PM
Thank You Pulkit! Koshish kee thee bas kuch likhne ki...am glad you liked it.
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22nd June 2015, 09:42 PM
Shukriya madhu ji. am glad you liked my choti si koshish.
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22nd June 2015, 09:43 PM
Shukriya Arvind ji..thank you for reading me.
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22nd June 2015, 09:45 PM
Sameer ji aapse tareef sunkar lagta hai ki wakai kuch acacha likh paaye hain. Aap khud bahaut acacha likhte hain. It was a pleasure to receive your appreciation on this koshish of mine.
Ji Shukriya!
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22nd June 2015, 09:46 PM
Sagar ji, am glad that you liked it.
Waise who 2 sher mere bhi fav. hain. Aapke jitna to acacha nahi likh paati haan par koshish phir bhi karti hoon kuch shabon ko bandhne ki. Shukriya for reading me.
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22nd June 2015, 09:48 PM
Shukriya di...aapke reply mai bahaut apnapan lagta hai. Shukriya di.
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22nd June 2015, 09:49 PM
Shukriya bhushan ji jo time nikalke aapne padha. Thank You.
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23rd June 2015, 08:50 AM
Pyar ka jazba bakhubi bayan kiya aapne mohterma...looks like u r a good writer and know
how to pen down ur emotions beautifully..This beautiful writer must be carrying a beautiful
name..Can we know ur name pls ..keep writing.
Sanjay Sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
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23rd June 2015, 02:54 PM
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Rehti hoo gum tumhare khayalon mai mile ho jabse
Shuru shuru ki mohabbat ka kya pyara ehsaas hai
Nahi soti aankhen meri ab ek ghadi ko bhi
inko iss tarah tumhare aane ka intezzar hai
Rehte ho tumhi ab sham o sawer mere zehan mai
Ki kya bataon kitna mere dil ko tere dil se pyar hai
Maanga hai tumhe hi har pal jaake khuda ke ghar mai
Ki iss kadar dil ko mere tumhe paane ki chah hai
Kya ehsaas hai, kis kadar mohabbat hai mujhe tumse
meri ruki hansi ko bas tumhare muskarane ka intezaar hai
Kya kahoon! kaise bayan karoon tumhe apne dil ka haal
kehti hoon ab bas tumse sirf tumse mujhe pyar hai
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wah bahut khoob sundar ehsaas
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Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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24th June 2015, 11:30 PM
Bohut Khoob..................................
ehsaas bohut pasand aaye.
likhti rahen.
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25th June 2015, 10:16 AM
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Rehti hoo gum tumhare khayalon mai mile ho jabse
Shuru shuru ki mohabbat ka kya pyara ehsaas hai
Nahi soti aankhen meri ab ek ghadi ko bhi
inko iss tarah tumhare aane ka intezzar hai
Rehte ho tumhi ab sham o sawer mere zehan mai
Ki kya bataon kitna mere dil ko tere dil se pyar hai
Maanga hai tumhe hi har pal jaake khuda ke ghar mai
Ki iss kadar dil ko mere tumhe paane ki chah hai
Kya ehsaas hai, kis kadar mohabbat hai mujhe tumse
meri ruki hansi ko bas tumhare muskarane ka intezaar hai
Kya kahoon! kaise bayan karoon tumhe apne dil ka haal
kehti hoon ab bas tumse sirf tumse mujhe pyar hai
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Sweet_Rain jee...
kia baat hy .... behad khoobsorat ehsaas haiN.....
daad qabool kejiye
likhte rahiye
meHfil roshan karte rahiye ..
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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