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Tujhse pyar hai - 19th June 2015, 07:09 PM

Rehti hoo gum tumhare khayalon mai mile ho jabse
Shuru shuru ki mohabbat ka kya pyara ehsaas hai

Nahi soti aankhen meri ab ek ghadi ko bhi
inko iss tarah tumhare aane ka intezzar hai

Rehte ho tumhi ab sham o sawer mere zehan mai
Ki kya bataon kitna mere dil ko tere dil se pyar hai

Maanga hai tumhe hi har pal jaake khuda ke ghar mai
Ki iss kadar dil ko mere tumhe paane ki chah hai

Kya ehsaas hai, kis kadar mohabbat hai mujhe tumse
meri ruki hansi ko bas tumhare muskarane ka intezaar hai

Kya kahoon! kaise bayan karoon tumhe apne dil ka haal
kehti hoon ab bas tumse sirf tumse mujhe pyar hai

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19th June 2015, 07:27 PM

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Rehti hoo gum tumhare khayalon mai mile ho jabse
Shuru shuru ki mohabbat ka kya pyara ehsaas hai
Bahut khoob!!


Nahi soti aankhen meri ab ek ghadi ko bhi
inko iss tarah tere aane ka intezzar hai

Waah!!
Rehte ho tumhi ab sham o sawer mere zehan mai
Ki kya bataon kitna mere dil ko tere dil se pyar hai
Beuatiful!!!


Maanga hai tumhe hi har pal jaake khuda ke ghar mai
Ki iss kadar mujhe tujhe paane ki chah hai
Hmmmm....


Kya ehsaas hai aur, kis kadar mohabbat hai mujhe tumse
meri ruki hansi ko bas tumhare muskarane ka intezaar hai
Again, nice lines


Kya kahoon! kaise bayan karoon tumhe apne dil ka haal
kehti hoon ab to bas tujhse sirf tumse mujhe pyar hai
Simply beautiful!!
Aapko arse ke baad padhkar dil se khushi huwi... aisa laga hi nahin ke aap itne samay ke baad likh rahi hain... Yun hi likhti rahiye, muskurati rahiye aur apna khayal rakhiye... take good care!


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19th June 2015, 07:30 PM

Pulkit, thanks...if you said it's good then am sure it's good.

And now its my turn to read you. Hopefully you will write something soon.

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19th June 2015, 08:07 PM

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Rehti hoo gum tumhare khayalon mai mile ho jabse
Shuru shuru ki mohabbat ka kya pyara ehsaas hai

Nahi soti aankhen meri ab ek ghadi ko bhi
inko iss tarah tumhare aane ka intezzar hai

Rehte ho tumhi ab sham o sawer mere zehan mai
Ki kya bataon kitna mere dil ko tere dil se pyar hai

Maanga hai tumhe hi har pal jaake khuda ke ghar mai
Ki iss kadar dil ko mere tumhe paane ki chah hai

Kya ehsaas hai, kis kadar mohabbat hai mujhe tumse
meri ruki hansi ko bas tumhare muskarane ka intezaar hai

Kya kahoon! kaise bayan karoon tumhe apne dil ka haal
kehti hoon ab bas tumse sirf tumse mujhe pyar hai

Waaaaaah! Sweet ji bahut pyara likha hai....bahut khoob kalaam...
Yoon hee likhti rahiye.
muskrati rahiye..



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19th June 2015, 08:51 PM

Bahut hee sundar ehsaas share kiye aapne.....i like the way u express ur feelings....



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19th June 2015, 09:33 PM

waahh kkya baat hai bahut khoob peshkash......

likhte rahiye

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Rehti hoo gum tumhare khayalon mai mile ho jabse
Shuru shuru ki mohabbat ka kya pyara ehsaas hai

Nahi soti aankhen meri ab ek ghadi ko bhi
inko iss tarah tumhare aane ka intezzar hai

Rehte ho tumhi ab sham o sawer mere zehan mai
Ki kya bataon kitna mere dil ko tere dil se pyar hai

Maanga hai tumhe hi har pal jaake khuda ke ghar mai
Ki iss kadar dil ko mere tumhe paane ki chah hai

Kya ehsaas hai, kis kadar mohabbat hai mujhe tumse
meri ruki hansi ko bas tumhare muskarane ka intezaar hai

Kya kahoon! kaise bayan karoon tumhe apne dil ka haal
kehti hoon ab bas tumse sirf tumse mujhe pyar hai

Kyaa baat hai !
Bohot khuub ehsasaat Sweet_rain ji. Yeh sheyr dil ke khaas qareeb raha


Kya ehsaas hai, kis kadar mohabbat hai mujhe tumse
meri ruki hansi ko bas tumhare muskarane ka intezaar hai


yuNhi likhte rahiye.
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22nd June 2015, 11:47 AM

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Rehti hoo gum tumhare khayalon mai mile ho jabse
Shuru shuru ki mohabbat ka kya pyara ehsaas hai

Nahi soti aankhen meri ab ek ghadi ko bhi
inko iss tarah tumhare aane ka intezzar hai

Rehte ho tumhi ab sham o sawer mere zehan mai
Ki kya bataon kitna mere dil ko tere dil se pyar hai

Maanga hai tumhe hi har pal jaake khuda ke ghar mai
Ki iss kadar dil ko mere tumhe paane ki chah hai

Kya ehsaas hai, kis kadar mohabbat hai mujhe tumse
meri ruki hansi ko bas tumhare muskarane ka intezaar hai

Kya kahoon! kaise bayan karoon tumhe apne dil ka haal
kehti hoon ab bas tumse sirf tumse mujhe pyar hai

bahut accha likha hai aapne, aapko padna accha lga.





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Aapko arse ke baad padhkar dil se khushi huwi... aisa laga hi nahin ke aap itne samay ke baad likh rahi hain... Yun hi likhti rahiye, muskurati rahiye aur apna khayal rakhiye... take good care!

Dear Pulkit........aapko sdc par thoda sa regular aate dekh kar sach meiN bahut acha lga rha hai, yu hi aate rehna....


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22nd June 2015, 05:04 PM

Bohot khoob peshksh hai...waaaaah
Likhte rahiye

Duao k sath



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Dear Pulkit........aapko sdc par thoda sa regular aate dekh kar sach meiN bahut acha lga rha hai, yu hi aate rehna....
Hahaha didi, facebook pe time ghataakar SDC ka badhaana chaahiye, kyun? woh mehfilen fir se jamaayen!


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22nd June 2015, 09:41 PM

Thank You Pulkit! Koshish kee thee bas kuch likhne ki...am glad you liked it.
   
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Shukriya madhu ji. am glad you liked my choti si koshish.
   
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Shukriya Arvind ji..thank you for reading me.
   
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Sameer ji aapse tareef sunkar lagta hai ki wakai kuch acacha likh paaye hain. Aap khud bahaut acacha likhte hain. It was a pleasure to receive your appreciation on this koshish of mine.

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Sagar ji, am glad that you liked it.

Waise who 2 sher mere bhi fav. hain. Aapke jitna to acacha nahi likh paati haan par koshish phir bhi karti hoon kuch shabon ko bandhne ki. Shukriya for reading me.
   
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Shukriya di...aapke reply mai bahaut apnapan lagta hai. Shukriya di.
   
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Shukriya bhushan ji jo time nikalke aapne padha. Thank You.
   
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Pyar ka jazba bakhubi bayan kiya aapne mohterma...looks like u r a good writer and know
how to pen down ur emotions beautifully..This beautiful writer must be carrying a beautiful
name..Can we know ur name pls ..keep writing.

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Rehti hoo gum tumhare khayalon mai mile ho jabse
Shuru shuru ki mohabbat ka kya pyara ehsaas hai

Nahi soti aankhen meri ab ek ghadi ko bhi
inko iss tarah tumhare aane ka intezzar hai

Rehte ho tumhi ab sham o sawer mere zehan mai
Ki kya bataon kitna mere dil ko tere dil se pyar hai

Maanga hai tumhe hi har pal jaake khuda ke ghar mai
Ki iss kadar dil ko mere tumhe paane ki chah hai

Kya ehsaas hai, kis kadar mohabbat hai mujhe tumse
meri ruki hansi ko bas tumhare muskarane ka intezaar hai

Kya kahoon! kaise bayan karoon tumhe apne dil ka haal
kehti hoon ab bas tumse sirf tumse mujhe pyar hai

wah bahut khoob sundar ehsaas
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Rehti hoo gum tumhare khayalon mai mile ho jabse
Shuru shuru ki mohabbat ka kya pyara ehsaas hai

Nahi soti aankhen meri ab ek ghadi ko bhi
inko iss tarah tumhare aane ka intezzar hai

Rehte ho tumhi ab sham o sawer mere zehan mai
Ki kya bataon kitna mere dil ko tere dil se pyar hai

Maanga hai tumhe hi har pal jaake khuda ke ghar mai
Ki iss kadar dil ko mere tumhe paane ki chah hai

Kya ehsaas hai, kis kadar mohabbat hai mujhe tumse
meri ruki hansi ko bas tumhare muskarane ka intezaar hai

Kya kahoon! kaise bayan karoon tumhe apne dil ka haal
kehti hoon ab bas tumse sirf tumse mujhe pyar hai
Sweet_Rain jee...

kia baat hy .... behad khoobsorat ehsaas haiN.....

daad qabool kejiye

likhte rahiye
meHfil roshan karte rahiye ..


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