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Love Tasveer - 9th July 2003, 11:43 AM

HELLO EVERYONE!!!

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APNI NAZRON MAIN BASA KAR NA GIRANA MUJHKO,

TUMKO AANKHON MAIN TASVEER KI TARAHAN RAKHTI HOON,

DIL MAIN DHADKAN KI TARAHAN TUM BHI BASANA MUJHKO.....

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Tasveer - 9th July 2003, 04:28 PM

Punnu jee, yeh bhi acha likhha hein aapne. Nice one. Please keep writting. Take care.
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Smile good meter - 9th July 2003, 06:16 PM

hi,
ye bahot achchi beher ki ghazal kahi hain aapne.
nice writing.
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Re: Tasveer - 9th July 2003, 06:33 PM

hi punnu ji
bhai bahoot khoob. aap lajawab hai.
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10th July 2003, 01:40 AM

hi shimul di how are u .thnks for the comments plzz don't call me punnu jee ap mujhse badi haan hai na .it's up to u . agar kuch galat kaha ho to maaf kijiyga
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10th July 2003, 01:42 AM

hi dr. rahul apko pasand ayi that's really good
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10th July 2003, 01:47 AM

hi manoj ji shkria . par hum lajawaab nahin hain phir bhi shkria comments ke liye
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