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Kaash Main Thoda Aur Jee Pati - 9th October 2004, 09:16 PM

Ye kalaam..shayri ke rules se hatkar likha hai….smarpeet hai uss shaks ko jo lad raha hai apni zindagi se..jane kabb kya ho jaye…. uske liye dua karna….pls..

Lo aaj phir giri main Thokar khakar
Phir aaj Hawa kuch Tez hai shayad
Dhadkan bhi thammi si lagti hai Aaj
Lo Saansein bhi Rook chali hain

Haan Aaj Ek Maut mari main

Hasrat hi reh gayi,

Hawa ke sang Ghoomna tha abhi toh mujhe
Phoolon ke sang Jhoomna tha abhi toh mujhe
Sapney dekhe they jo inn Aankhon ne
Har ek Sapna poora karna tha abhi toh mujhe

Lekin,
Chahtein sab udd gayi Dhuan bankar
Jane kahan goom hui, gayi Kidhar
Meri Rooh bas yahi ek Ilteza karne ko
Bhatakti hai Aaj bhi idhar udhar

K,
Kaash Thoda aur Jee pati main
Kaash!


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9th October 2004, 11:25 PM

malika -e-husn

tumhari poem pe bas ek hi bat yaad aayi...

dekh pata jo tere aansoo
jo kuch tu mere janaje pe baha deta..
un ko girne se pehle utha leta...
gar kuch din jindgi ke aur khuda deta..
meri badnaseebi bewafa hai "saccha_pyar"
ek bar mil leta phir chahe barso ki judai deta..


bas yahi soch paya ... apna khayal rakhna madam ...

tumhara apna

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10th October 2004, 02:04 AM

hi roops !!!!!!!!
kaash mai thoda ur ji pati .... thts gr8

hi roops bahut dard bhari pati likh bheji hai thokere khake fir chalne ki koshish , marne per fir jine ki khawahish.

yahi to manav mann hai aur iski , koshisho aur khawihisho ,
adhure sapno ki chubhti jaln ko , aur najane kitne adhure armano ko sanjoya hai tumne.........


bahut achha likha hai .....

keep writing


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10th October 2004, 12:47 PM

Hi Roopali Ji,

Phir aur ek la jawaab experiment. Bohot hi pyaara laga aapka likhne ka andaaz aur ye pura kalaam. Jis shaks ke liye bhi likha hai uske saath hum sab ki duaein hai. Umeed hai woh zindagi ke is paar zaroor laut aaenge.


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Re: Kaash Main Thoda Aur Jee Pati - 11th October 2004, 08:52 AM

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Originally posted by roopali
Ye kalaam..shayri ke rules se hatkar likha hai….smarpeet hai uss shaks ko jo lad raha hai apni zindagi se..jane kabb kya ho jaye…. uske liye dua karna….pls..

Lo aaj phir giri main Thokar khakar
Phir aaj Hawa kuch Tez hai shayad
Dhadkan bhi thammi si lagti hai Aaj
Lo Saansein bhi Rook chali hain

Haan Aaj Ek Maut mari main

Hasrat hi reh gayi,

Hawa ke sang Ghoomna tha abhi toh mujhe
Phoolon ke sang Jhoomna tha abhi toh mujhe
Sapney dekhe they jo inn Aankhon ne
Har ek Sapna poora karna tha abhi toh mujhe

Lekin,
Chahtein sab udd gayi Dhuan bankar
Jane kahan goom hui, gayi Kidhar
Meri Rooh bas yahi ek Ilteza karne ko
Bhatakti hai Aaj bhi idhar udhar

K,
Kaash Thoda aur Jee pati main
Kaash!


roop,
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Re: Kaash Main Thoda Aur Jee Pati - 11th October 2004, 12:56 PM

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Lo aaj phir giri main Thokar khakar
Phir aaj Hawa kuch Tez hai shayad
Dhadkan bhi thammi si lagti hai Aaj
Lo Saansein bhi Rook chali hain

Haan Aaj Ek Maut mari main

- thokre kha kar hi insaan sambhalta hai kyu bhoolte ho..
hawao ka jo rukh badal de vahi to tum ho..
dharkano ko sambhalo sanso ko samjha lo..
chhoti chhoti baato se nahi marne waale..
ye is duniya ko bataa do..

Hasrat hi reh gayi,

Hawa ke sang Ghoomna tha abhi toh mujhe
Phoolon ke sang Jhoomna tha abhi toh mujhe
Sapney dekhe they jo inn Aankhon ne
Har ek Sapna poora karna tha abhi toh mujhe

- abhi kya dekha tumne abhi bahaare aani hai..
abhi to sapne bune hai..unko sach k kapre pehnane hai..
abhi to hasrato ka daman pakra hai..
abhi to mere khwaabo ko pura karna hai..

Lekin,

Chahtein sab udd gayi Dhuan bankar
Jane kahan goom hui, gayi Kidhar
Meri Rooh bas yahi ek Ilteza karne ko
Bhatakti hai Aaj bhi idhar udhar

- kaha.n chali chahto ko uda kar..
kaise rooh jaayegi adhoore kaam chhor kar..
abhi to tujhe aage barna hoga..
sab ki umeedo ko pura karna hoga..

K
- abhi to himmet ko pakre rakhna hoga..
abhi to thoker p jamaane ko rakhna hoga..
abhi to bewafa pyar ko tadafna hoga..
abhi to 'usko' tere kadmo me girna hoga..

kyuki..

- abhi to tune thokro ko jaana hai..
abhi to tune chalna seekha hai..
abhi to himmet gamo ne tujhe 'aur' di hai..
abhi to man ko samaz ke kaydo me bandhna hai..
abhi to zindgi ko safal karna hai..

ABHI GHABRAAYEGI TO DARAYEGI DUNIYA..
ABHI TOOT JAAYEGI TO TUJHE LOOT JAYEGI DUNIYA..
ABHI NA UTHI TO DAM TOR DENGI KHUSHIYA..
ABHI NA SAMBHLI TO 'ROOP' KHO DEGI ROOP APNA..

Kaash!
URS DI..


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hey roops.............? - 12th October 2004, 10:32 AM

Oh my dear... all prayers for the person.... all my prayers for the her/him...

hey this one is too too touchy... too too touchy.. really so so sentimental...

Now what to praise it.... taarif nahi kar sakta ... bilkul nahi.. its just a pain ... and main dard ke taarif kaise karun?????????????


hey see check my post....Aaj fir hum dil me myoosi liye,Duniya ko hasaane chale



do take care.... i want u smiling.... got it? SMILE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!


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Re: Kaash Main Thoda Aur Jee Pati - 11th February 2005, 11:49 AM

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Originally posted by roopali
Ye kalaam..shayri ke rules se hatkar likha hai….smarpeet hai uss shaks ko jo lad raha hai apni zindagi se..jane kabb kya ho jaye…. uske liye dua karna….pls..

Lo aaj phir giri main Thokar khakar
Phir aaj Hawa kuch Tez hai shayad
Dhadkan bhi thammi si lagti hai Aaj
Lo Saansein bhi Rook chali hain

Haan Aaj Ek Maut mari main

Hasrat hi reh gayi,

Hawa ke sang Ghoomna tha abhi toh mujhe
Phoolon ke sang Jhoomna tha abhi toh mujhe
Sapney dekhe they jo inn Aankhon ne
Har ek Sapna poora karna tha abhi toh mujhe

Lekin,
Chahtein sab udd gayi Dhuan bankar
Jane kahan goom hui, gayi Kidhar
Meri Rooh bas yahi ek Ilteza karne ko
Bhatakti hai Aaj bhi idhar udhar

K,
Kaash Thoda aur Jee pati main
Kaash!

mar rahe hain tumhari yaad mein har pal.....
jara dekho ek nazar to ghadi bhar jee lein....


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Re: Kaash Main Thoda Aur Jee Pati - 11th February 2005, 12:58 PM

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Ye kalaam..shayri ke rules se hatkar likha hai….smarpeet hai uss shaks ko jo lad raha hai apni zindagi se..jane kabb kya ho jaye…. uske liye dua karna….pls..

Lo aaj phir giri main Thokar khakar
Phir aaj Hawa kuch Tez hai shayad
Dhadkan bhi thammi si lagti hai Aaj
Lo Saansein bhi Rook chali hain

Haan Aaj Ek Maut mari main

Hasrat hi reh gayi,

Hawa ke sang Ghoomna tha abhi toh mujhe
Phoolon ke sang Jhoomna tha abhi toh mujhe
Sapney dekhe they jo inn Aankhon ne
Har ek Sapna poora karna tha abhi toh mujhe

Lekin,
Chahtein sab udd gayi Dhuan bankar
Jane kahan goom hui, gayi Kidhar
Meri Rooh bas yahi ek Ilteza karne ko
Bhatakti hai Aaj bhi idhar udhar

K,
Kaash Thoda aur Jee pati main
Kaash!

meri pyari roop......


bahut aacha likha hai......

kush rahooo meri behna......aur kunal ne to mere saari mehnat pe paani pher diya hai......


lekin isi bahane tumhari post to padne ko mili.......


tumhara bada bhai......



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Re: Kaash Main Thoda Aur Jee Pati - 21st February 2005, 11:55 PM

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Ye kalaam..shayri ke rules se hatkar likha hai….smarpeet hai uss shaks ko jo lad raha hai apni zindagi se..jane kabb kya ho jaye…. uske liye dua karna….pls..

Lo aaj phir giri main Thokar khakar
Phir aaj Hawa kuch Tez hai shayad
Dhadkan bhi thammi si lagti hai Aaj
Lo Saansein bhi Rook chali hain

Haan Aaj Ek Maut mari main

Hasrat hi reh gayi,

Hawa ke sang Ghoomna tha abhi toh mujhe
Phoolon ke sang Jhoomna tha abhi toh mujhe
Sapney dekhe they jo inn Aankhon ne
Har ek Sapna poora karna tha abhi toh mujhe

Lekin,
Chahtein sab udd gayi Dhuan bankar
Jane kahan goom hui, gayi Kidhar
Meri Rooh bas yahi ek Ilteza karne ko
Bhatakti hai Aaj bhi idhar udhar

K,
Kaash Thoda aur Jee pati main
Kaash!
pehle bhi kiya tha par aaj phir kar diya

pehle wala phir padh lena


aapka

kunal


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ZAMANE KI HAR JANNAT TUMHARI HOGI
YE AASMAAN YE ZAMI TUMHARI HOGI
MUJHSE KEH BHI NA PAOGE USKE PEHLE
MERE HISSE KI HAR KHUSHI TUMHARI HOGI


bikhri ankhon se moti hum piro na sake teri yaad me sari raat so na sake
beh na jaye ansuon me tasvir ye soch kar
hum ro na sake


Kisi mor pe ham ap ko khoney nahi denge..
Juda hona chaho to honey nahi denge…
Chandni raton man aye gi meri yad…
Meri yad ke wo pal ap ko soney nahi denge


Khuda ke Ghar se Kuch Gadhe farar hogaye
kuch to pakde gaye
kuch hamare yaar hogaye


Bhulana tumhe na asaan hoga jo bhule tumhe wo nadan hoga aap to baste ho ruh me hamari, bus aap hame na bhulana ye aapka ehsaan hoga.

aaj door se hi koi salaam kar gaya,
apni yadon ka gulaam kar gaya ,
apni zingagi girvi rakhi thi jiske paas,
aaj wohi hume nilaam kar gaye........


Zindagi hai nadan isliye chup hoon,
Dard hi dard subah shaam isliye chup hoon,
Keh du zamane se dastan apni,
Usme ayega tera naam isliye chup hoon


Ek hai asman ka tara ,
Ek hai sagar ka kinara,
Bewafa hai zamana sara,
Nasib hai achha hamara,
JO mila DOST aap jaisa Pyara..


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Aapka Sher dekkar. Muje aisa laga jese kesene mere dilme jagar mere dil ke pate dekaho our yaha lekgaya ho. Very nice My friend.
   
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Ye kalaam..shayri ke rules se hatkar likha hai….smarpeet hai uss shaks ko jo lad raha hai apni zindagi se..jane kabb kya ho jaye…. uske liye dua karna….pls..

Lo aaj phir giri main Thokar khakar
Phir aaj Hawa kuch Tez hai shayad
Dhadkan bhi thammi si lagti hai Aaj
Lo Saansein bhi Rook chali hain

Haan Aaj Ek Maut mari main

Hasrat hi reh gayi,

Hawa ke sang Ghoomna tha abhi toh mujhe
Phoolon ke sang Jhoomna tha abhi toh mujhe
Sapney dekhe they jo inn Aankhon ne
Har ek Sapna poora karna tha abhi toh mujhe

Lekin,
Chahtein sab udd gayi Dhuan bankar
Jane kahan goom hui, gayi Kidhar
Meri Rooh bas yahi ek Ilteza karne ko
Bhatakti hai Aaj bhi idhar udhar

K,
Kaash Thoda aur Jee pati main
Kaash!
vaah rupali .........bahut khoob likha hai aapne ....... aaj bahut dino baad kuch accha pada keep up ...kabhie mujhe bhi padiyega...........



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14th July 2008, 02:47 PM

rupali ji bahut accha likha hai aapne...ahsaas dil fareb rahe.....aur haan kunaal ne jo chad ahsaas likhe woh bhi khoobsurat lage.

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