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sahil pay kashtiyan dubana kab ka chhor diya maine,......... - 11th July 2006, 01:31 PM
dosto apni nai gazal kay saath hazir hoon hope appko pasand aiyegi....app sab ki bharpoor hosla afzai kay liye shukria......khaas kar .....sunita ji ko bhut bhut .....thx.......
meri yeh gazal unhee kay naam......


sahil pay kashtiyan dubana kab ka chhor diya maine,
unki yaad main aansu bahana kab ka chhor diya maine.....

tootay dil main ab koi umeed na koi aarzoo rahi bakki,
aandhiyon main chiraag jalana kab ka chhor diya maine.......

khuda janay ajj phir kiyon unki aankh main nami c hai,
haal-e-dil unko sunana kab ka chhor diya maine.......

unka wada hai khabbon main aksar aatay rahaingay,
wo kaya janay khaab sajana kab ka chhor diya maine......

mujhy giranay ki firaq main aankho say pila rahay hai,
nashy ke alam main larkharana kab ka chhor diya maine.......

suno zamanay walo be wajha unko badnaam na karo,
unki gali main aana jana kab ka chhor diya maine......

ho sakay to koi humay hamari manzil ka patta de de,
bhatkay logo ko rah dikhana kab ka chhor diya maine........

'veer' kay band honto ko ab koi zehmat gawara nahi,
keh do dunia say muskurana kab ka chhor diya maine........

appkay jabaab ka muntzir.......

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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Re: sahil pay kashtiyan dubana kab ka chhor diya maine,......... - 11th July 2006, 02:06 PM
tootay dil main ab koi umeed na koi aarzoo rahi bakki,
aandhiyon main chiraag jalana kab ka chhor diya maine.......

khuda janay ajj phir kiyon unki aankh main nami c hai,
haal-e-dil unko sunana kab ka chhor diya maine.......

mujhy giranay ki firaq main aankho say pila rahay hai,
nashy ke alam main larkharana kab ka chhor diya maine.......

suno zamanay walo be wajha unko badnaam na karo,
unki gali main aana jana kab ka chhor diya maine......

'veer' kay band honto ko ab koi zehmat gawara nahi,
keh do dunia say muskurana kab ka chhor diya maine........

WAH..WAH..KYA KEHNE....
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Re: sahil pay kashtiyan dubana kab ka chhor diya maine,......... - 11th July 2006, 02:09 PM
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dosto apni nai gazal kay saath hazir hoon hope appko pasand aiyegi....app sab ki bharpoor hosla afzai kay liye shukria......khaas kar .....sunita ji ko bhut bhut .....thx.......
meri yeh gazal unhee kay naam......


sahil pay kashtiyan dubana kab ka chhor diya maine,
unki yaad main aansu bahana kab ka chhor diya maine.....

tootay dil main ab koi umeed na koi aarzoo rahi bakki,
aandhiyon main chiraag jalana kab ka chhor diya maine.......

khuda janay ajj phir kiyon unki aankh main nami c hai,
haal-e-dil unko sunana kab ka chhor diya maine.......

unka wada hai khabbon main aksar aatay rahaingay,
wo kaya janay khaab sajana kab ka chhor diya maine......

mujhy giranay ki firaq main aankho say pila rahay hai,
nashy ke alam main larkharana kab ka chhor diya maine.......

suno zamanay walo be wajha unko badnaam na karo,
unki gali main aana jana kab ka chhor diya maine......

ho sakay to koi humay hamari manzil ka patta de de,
bhatkay logo ko rah dikhana kab ka chhor diya maine........

'veer' kay band honto ko ab koi zehmat gawara nahi,
keh do dunia say muskurana kab ka chhor diya maine........

appkay jabaab ka muntzir.......
hello raj

bahut acchi gazal hai, aur raj appney mere naam yeh gazal likhi, sukriya. mai es kabil to nahi kher app samjtey ho to yeh appki meharbani hai. jayada kaya kahu.
appki dost

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shukria - 11th July 2006, 03:34 PM
sunita ji apki mail nahi mili mujhay......appko meri gazal pasand i raj ko uski kalam ka sahara mil gaya......tahe dil say appka shukar guzaar hoon.....

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give me u r e-mail id, i will sent u again.

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sara - 11th July 2006, 03:45 PM
sunita ji mera e-mail adress hai....... dreem_merchant2000@yahoo.com ........raj

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shukria - 12th July 2006, 07:05 PM
manoj ji jab mere qalaam ko appki daad naseeb ho jati hai to uski kismat khul jati hai...jaise pyasay ko pani ka bookhay ko roti ka intzaar rehta hai waise hee raj kay qalaam ko appki daad ka intzaar rehta hai....ek baar phir tahe dil say appka shukar guzaar hoon......appka dost raj........

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dosto apni nai gazal kay saath hazir hoon hope appko pasand aiyegi....app sab ki bharpoor hosla afzai kay liye shukria......khaas kar .....sunita ji ko bhut bhut .....thx.......
meri yeh gazal unhee kay naam......


sahil pay kashtiyan dubana kab ka chhor diya maine,
unki yaad main aansu bahana kab ka chhor diya maine.....

tootay dil main ab koi umeed na koi aarzoo rahi bakki,
aandhiyon main chiraag jalana kab ka chhor diya maine.......

khuda janay ajj phir kiyon unki aankh main nami c hai,
haal-e-dil unko sunana kab ka chhor diya maine.......

unka wada hai khabbon main aksar aatay rahaingay,
wo kaya janay khaab sajana kab ka chhor diya maine......

mujhy giranay ki firaq main aankho say pila rahay hai,
nashy ke alam main larkharana kab ka chhor diya maine.......

suno zamanay walo be wajha unko badnaam na karo,
unki gali main aana jana kab ka chhor diya maine......

ho sakay to koi humay hamari manzil ka patta de de,
bhatkay logo ko rah dikhana kab ka chhor diya maine........

'veer' kay band honto ko ab koi zehmat gawara nahi,
keh do dunia say muskurana kab ka chhor diya maine........

appkay jabaab ka muntzir.......

Hello Rajveer ji

what a grea8 creation. god i have never thought that a shayri's web site can be this good. this is my very first time i m visiting a web 4 shayri and i found it very grea8. u have wrote just 2 good.

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