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22nd October 2006, 10:35 PM
This is my first mail in Dard I hope all the members like it.
AISA THA KABHI APNE THE SABHI LAMHE NAGHME KHUSHIYON KA JAHAN RAASTE MEIN MILI HAI TAARIKIYAN PALKON KO NAMI NAZRON KO DHUAN EK AAS BANDHI DILKO HAI YAKEEN EK ROZ TO HOGI SEHER YAHAAN......................... KAHIN SAFAR HAI KAHIN RAASTA HAI MANZIL KA YE RAAT DIN KI GHUTAN KYUN AZAAB HAI DIL KA RAWAN HAI KASHTI MAGAR HAR TARAF ANDHERA HAI KISI KA DOSH NAHI YE KUSOOR MERA HAI BUJHA HAI MERE HI HAATHON CHIRAG SAAHIL KA...................... KAHIN SAFAR HAI KAHIN RAASTA HAI MANZIL KA YE RAAT DIN KI GHUTAN KYUN AZAAB HAI DIL KA......... |
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22nd October 2006, 10:38 PM
fari ji aapne kaha k aapki ye shayri e dard me pehli hi post hai ye pehli hai aur bahot hi achhi hai
bas aap ehsas ke sath likhe to zarur likh paongi achha laga apko padhke aur khas karke ye line pasand aayi KAHIN SAFAR HAI KAHIN RAASTA HAI MANZIL KA YE RAAT DIN KI GHUTAN KYUN AZAAB HAI DIL KA likhte rahiye uhi apna khayal rakhiyenga khus rahiye aapka dost dhaval |
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